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Posted: 18 years ago
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haha i love this! your fanfic is really sweet! please update soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats really good plz continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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how cum u haven't updated 4 a while? 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEY guyz i 4got my passsword so ill b updating from dis username!!im sorrie for updating soo late but i was busy...i promise illl write a long update 2nite
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

HEY guyz i 4got my passsword so ill b updating from dis username!!im sorrie for updating soo late but i was busy...i promise illl write a long update 2nite

thats okl! but please write a really long part tonight! luv the fan fic!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Both Prem and Mukti dove into the water as soon as the whistle sounded and put in their best effort to win…They were both neck to neck when Mukti closed her eyes and imagined herself bowing to Prem in front of everyone…the very humiliation she would hav to face brought forth a surge of energy and she shot foward and won the race in a matter of seconds….Prem was fuming in anger for he had never lost a race in his life and to loose to a girl was insulting….He thought of the coming week when he would hav to chaperon Mukti around and groaned in dismay…

Back at home Sneha and Kasak were still talking about Mukti's achievement which only added fuel to Prem's already high temper...Meanwhile Mukti had every intention of using this opportunity to make Prem's life a living hell.She could'nt wait to get started and went to sleep with a mischevious smile on her face…The next morning Prem was awakened by a cold pail of water being emptied on his head…

Prem: What the F**K….

Mukti:zambal sambhal ke…anywayz aaj tumhare official duty start hoti hai….Aaj say u hav to drive me 2 college and drive me baq home aswell as pick and drop me whenever and wherever I want……Ab jaldi say outho we have to go….Saying this she leaves his room smiling to herself…whereas Prem moaned over the fact tht he was awakened for such a silly reason….he bounded down the stairs and after a quick breakfast he went out in his car waiting for Mukti pretty soon He got tired of waiting

Prem:AAj tak main ne kisi ka intni daer wait nahi kiya….usually larkiyan mera wait karti hain but yahan tou ulti ganga beh rahi hai…ill give her 5 more min if she is'nt here till then I'll leave….bhar main jaye yea dare…however when she finally showed up it was worth the wait….She walked towards Prem looking radiant in a sky blue tank topa nad a knee length designer skirt….She looked at Prem and could'nt help but notice the way the shirt clung to him and outlined every single pane of his body…She finally snapped out of her revere and climbed in the back seat of the car

Prem: array basanti main tumhara driver nahi laga k tumhare liye itni daer intezaar karoon…aaj main ney wait kar liye but next tyme main chala jaoon ga…..aur haan tum maharani ki tarhan back seat pe kyun bethi ho….passenger seat main aa ker baetho main tumhara driver nahi laga hoon yahan pe

Mukti:whatever….she sits with him in the front seat and they drive off

Prem and Mukti reach college late…Both of them hav the 1st class together and rush towards their classroom…..

Mukti: hum late ho gaye ab kya hoga??i don't want detention……

Prem:hum tumhari wajah say late huye hain agar tum itni daer nahi lagati tou v mite hav reached here on time…ab tou Sir mujhey nahi chorein gay….he has been on my case since the beginning coz he unfortunately heard me make a remark about him

Mukti: great ab tou hum sahi main phase

They reach the class and peek inside…to their surprise they find an old woman teaching the class…the both sigh in relif and try to sneak into class….Kasak looks up and spots the two trying to sneak in a nudges Sharad who is sitting right next to her…..She has a mischievous grin on her face and she soon breaks the silence by addressing the teacher

Kasak: Ma'am class main kuch loog daer say aa rahay hain…..

Teacher: what……I donot tolerate tardiness he looked up at Prem and Mukti and said…..Children these days..They are so engrossed in their love life that they forget the tyme….

Prem and Mukti look at each other and make a face….

Mukti:jee who actually meri gari kharab ho gaye thee aur iss nay mujhey lift dae ker meri help ki…issiliye hum late ho gaye ….aap please humein excuse kar dein


Teacher: make sure tht this is the 1st and the last tyme….please take your seats

Since there were only two seats left Prem and Mukti had 2 sit nxt to each other…Pretty soon Prem is bored and he does his best to get Mukti's attention….Mukti is trying her level best to ignore Prem but who can ignore the hottest guy in college….He passes her a note and after reading it Mukti cracks up…She starts laughing and Prem stares at her in amazement…..She looked gorgeous when she was laughin….her laughter was infectious and pretty soon Prem started laughing as well…..Everyone turned around and stared at them….The sight of those two lauging for no apparent reason was sooo funny tht pretty soon the whole class was in stitches…..The teacher waited till silence prevailed the class and looked at Prem and Mukti sternly……

Teacher: it seems tht u both consider me to be soft….I told you earlier that I cannot tolerate tardiness nor can I tolerate misbehaviour….So both of you OUT OF MY CLASS……and you both will stay back afterwards for detention…..

Prem and Mukti fled from class and went to the cafeteria…They were soon joined by Sneha, Kasak and Sharad…They fill Sneha in on the incident tht took place in class and all hav them share a hearty laugh over it

Sneha: tumhein pata hai….main pehli baar Prem aur Mukti ko saath main hastay dekh rahi hoon…warna yea dono usually eek doosray pe has rahay hotay hain..per aaj eek doosray ke saath has rahay hain

Hearing this both Mukti and Prem stop smiling at once and resume hostility…..This makes everyone else laugh louder…..After skool Prem and Mukti head towards the library where they had to serve detention….to their surprise they were soon joined by Sharad ,Kasak and Sneha…

Mukti: tum sab yahan kya kar rahy ho??

Prem: acha hua tum loog bhi aa gaye warna mujhey lag raha tha ke mujhey iss basabti ke saath 2 ghante guzarnay honge

All of them go silent as soon as the teacher comes in….she leaves them alone telling them tht she would be back soon…..

Sharad:yaar kya boreyat hai….chalo aisa kartay hain k hum truth and dare kheltay hain

Everyone agrees and they invite a few other people in detention to join them and they all assemble in a huge circle…Kasak spins the bottle and it lands on Sneha

Kasak: (with a huge grin on her face) so Sneha wht do you chooses truth or dare

Sneha: I don't like the look on your face…Okay I choose truth…no wait I choose dare

Kasak: excellent……you have to kiss any guy sitting here….

Sneha + Prem: WHAT

Kasak: dare is a dare…you hav to do it

Sneha: per..main…what… I mean….main yea kaisay kar saakti hoon..She looks around hopelessly…There are two more guys other than Prem and Sharad….both of them are unpleasant looking and both look up eagerly hoping to be the one that gets chosen…..Sneha was one of the prettiest girl in school but they were scared of Prem

Prem: Kasak….yea kya mazak hai…..Sneha tum kissi ko bhi kiss nahi karo ge samjhe…

Sneha: kyun tum jissay chahoi kiss kartay phiro aur main shareefon ki tarhan baethi rahoon…..she gets a rebellious look in her eye and without a second thought she turned towards Sharad who was sitting next to her and kissed him……Everyone stared at her in amazement and as if she had suddenly realized what she had done she broke away from Sharad and hid her face blushing furiously......Meanwhile Sharad had a look of pleasure mingled with happiness and fear....He glanced at Prem fearfully and saw Prem looking at Sneha in shock

Mukti: maun tou bandh kar lo...and she shuts his mouth

They resume the game but Prem keeps throwing glances in Sharad and Sneha's direction...Both of them are lost in their own thoughts......Prem spins the bottle and it lands on.......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys please do tell me if u lyke it....plz post ur comments oderwise i shall think tht u dnt like my work....i mean i do need some encouragement!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i luved it 😳 da spin da bottle part was cute 😳 totally think da bottle ended up on mukti n i think premz gonna use this 2 his advantage 😆 update soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
..on mutki? I hope it does! Please continue soon!!! I love your fanfic 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
Hey yaar,i Just Luv your fanfic.You shld update everyday.Plz Continue. 😊
Edited by bhattyhuda - 18 years ago

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