Zehaal-E-Miskeen: Poem on AnSh (SidYusha)

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Zehaal-E-Miskeen: is a famous poem by Amir Khusrao. It's specialty is that in the first verse, the first line is in Persian, the second in Brij Bhasha, the third in Persian again, and the fourth in Brij Bhasha. In the remaining verses, the first two lines are in Persian, the last two in Brij Bhasha.

The poem expresses the agony of separation from the beloved, in both the languages with a superb fusion...which signifies how different yet similiar is the expression of the agony of separation amongst the elite ( representing Persian) and the common man ( through Braj Bhasha).


Zehal-e miskin makun taghaful, duraye naina banaye batiyan
Ki taab-e hijran nadaram ay jaan, na leho kaahe lagaye chhatiyan.

Do not overlook my misery by blandishing your eyes,
and weaving tales; My patience has over-brimmed,
O sweetheart, why do you not embrace me?

Shaban-e hijran daraz chun zulf wa roz-e waslat cho umr kotah;
Sakhi piya ko jo main na dekhun to kaise kaatun andheri ratiyan.

Long like curls in the night of separation,
short like life on the day of our union;
My dear, how will I pass the dark dungeon night
without your face before me?

Yakayak az dil do chashm-e jadoo basad farebam baburd taskin;
Kise pari hai jo jaa sunaave piyare pi ko hamaari batiyan.

Suddenly, using a thousand tricks, the enchanting eyes robbed me
of my tranquil mind; Who would care to go
and report this matter to my beloved?

Cho sham'a sozan cho zarra hairan hamesha giryan be ishq aan meh;
Na neend naina na ang chaina na aap aaven na bhejen patiyan.

Tossed and bewildered, like a flickering candle,
I roam about in the fire of love;
Sleepless eyes, restless body,
neither comes she, nor any message.

Bahaqq-e roz-e wisal-e dilbar ki daad mara ghareeb Khusrau;
Sapet man ke waraaye raakhun jo jaaye paaon piya ke khatiyan.

In honour of the day I meet my beloved
who has lured me so long, O Khusrau;
I shall keep my heart suppressed,
if ever I get a chance to get to her trick.

❤️

Edited by Vedo - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jhelein Ye Qudrat Ki Dooriyan Bhi,
Saath Reh Kar Bhi Usko Na Pana Kaisa Lagta Hai,

<We have suffered the distances caused by fate; How do you feel when you can't get him inspite of being so close?>

Qismat Mein Nahi Phir Bhi Usko Chahte Hai,
Phool Samajh Kar Kaanto Par Chalna Kaisa Lagta Hai,

<He is not in my destiny, still I love him; How do you feel when you walk on thorns thinking they are flowers?>

Ab To Mehfil Mein Bhi Hamare Liye Tanhayi Hai,
Gam Chhupa Kar Mehfil Ko Sajana Kaisa Lagta Hai,

<Now, I am lonely even in a gathering; How do you feel when you have to hide your sorrow and be the life of the party?>

Mehfil Mein Doosronse Hans Hans Kar Milte Hai,
Tanhayi Mein Gam Ke Aansu Bahane Kaisa Lagta Hai,

<People are glad when they meet each other at parties; How do you feel when you have to cry all alone?>

Samjhane Par Bhi Samajhta Nahi Hai Ye Dil,
Uski Yaad Mein Raaton Ko Jagna Kaisa Lagta Hai,

<My heart does not understand, even when I try explaining; How do you feel when you have to stay up nights in remembrance?>

Uski Berukhi Ne Itne Diye Hai Zakham Ke,
Zakham Kha Kar Bhi Muskurana Kasia Lagta Hai,

<His indifference has given me such scars; How do you feel when you have to smile through your pain?>

Jab Wo Hans Hans Kar Baat Kare Dusron Se,
Tab Apne Aansuon Ko Chhupana Kaisa Lagta Hai,

<When he smiles while talking to others; Then, what do you feel when you have to hide your tears?>

Use Kho Kar To Mere Paas Raha Kuch Bhi Nahi,
Phir Bhi Khud Ko Ameer Batana Kaisa Lagta Hai,

<After losing him, I have nothing; What do you feel when you still have to say you are rich?>

Khud Ko Anmol Samajhne Ka Tha Bada Ghamand,
Phir Bhi Bemool Bik Jaana Kaisa Lagta Hai,

<He was proud of being unique; What do you feel when you sell yourself for free?>

Khaye Haidhoke Mohabbat Mein Itne Ke,
Phir Bhi Isko Chahna Kaisa Lagta Hai,

<I have suffered such treachery in the course of love; But, how do you feel when you love him?>

Malum Hai Is Deewane Ki Manzil Nahi Hai Koi,
Phir Bhi Safar Karte Rehna Kaisa Lagta Hai,

<I know this lover has no destination; Still, how do you feel as you keep travelling?>

Wo To Aa Kar Bhi Kab Ke Jaa Chuke Hai,
Phir Bhi Iska Intezar Karte Rehna Kaisa Lagta Hai...

<Inspite of coming here, he has gone long ago; Yet, how do you feel when you keep waiting for him?>

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EDIT: Poem by "I don't know"; Translation by moi

Edited by VerboseG - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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My all applauds to hard work u have put in it.👏

Thanks so much for sharing this..awesome work!


Zindagi Haseen Hai Zindagi Se Pyar Karo,
Hai Andhera To Kya,
Ujale Ka Intezar Karo,
Wo Pal Bhi Ayega Jiska Intzar Hai Apko,
Rab Par Bhrosa Or Waqt Par Aitbar Karo…! ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow this is amazing for prince n princess of telly love them
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG vedo wat hav u done...now I will spend my whole day drooling over SY...uff wat a magical couple...cant wait to se them again :-D
Btw awesome poem :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh Vedo...This has got me all emotional now...I still can't get over the nightmare...I can't forget yours 'Without you' Os... it was one amongst the best of yours...and all the Os and ffs of you,Verbose G's Ghodi ka zulm series and anandi's career series,mallika's Short oses Like Shararati ansh and The valentine's day,Adi's oses and nniks ffs...
I wanna thank all the writers for giving such soulful scripts on AnSh..
Our Real AnSh...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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vedo awesome post each and every line with those siggys r perfectly matching with our sidyusha excellent job
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😳 Such a beautiful thread Vedo, with beautiful poem and awesome siggies that capture the magic and uniqueness of SidYusha, our original and only AnSh.❤️❤️ I miss them so much. 💔


Edited by loveansh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it the best, i wish our really ansh team were together again after this. no jodi has got to me like this before, they will always be the best.
Edited by cosmo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Vedo I love Hazrat Ameer Khusroo because he compile the first book and alphabet for Urdu... He loved his Murshid Hazrat Nizam-ud-Din Aulia that much all his poetry reflect Ishq'e Haqiqi (love for God) and this poem is one of my favourite... May Allah bless him and his Murshid always...
And thank you so very much you put that much effort for my beloved AnSh (SidYusha) that is so appropriate for their unconditional love and companionship...
Love you Vedo...

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