|~DESTINY'S GAME~| FF Chap 2 pg9 updated!!!! - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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@khushi di: thanx di!!!!

@niha: glad u liked it!!! well ya he did carry her!! well don't expect anything now it self!! twilight, xmen, vampire dairies and god know what else has an effect on me!! not at all a twilight and vd admirer well kinda find it logic less!!

@foram: thanks yaar ya will try to!! held up wid school!!

@girlz-rule: thanks dear!! well u can call gowri!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NOTE:-

well hey guys i hope u remember the story of the ff?? still remember?? gr8 cuz i myself forgot!!! :P well u must be thinking why i did not update for such a long time!! well i barely have time now !! my mom even denied to buy a phone for me!! reasons for not updating:
1) well in tenth and here in india its boards!!!
2)Well don't have access to laptop, ipad or computer thanks to my mom!!
3) I have some problem donno what which leads me to have a headache every freaking day!!
4) too much revision if get time to eat and sleep its like wow!!!
5) I am slightly highly inactive!!! I don't get to check my mail also!!
6) and lastly I am dozing off after a hour of reading and my headache!!

Well I guess I justified the reason and u know I will maybe update only in april or maybe just for refreshment in sankranti hols but its a maybe!! chorry!!! and thank u!!!

Love,
Gowri...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its alr8 dear!!! i know boards take a hell lot of time!!!!! u take care,all the bst!!!!!! andd wen u will gt time then update,will be waitng for dat,no worries!!!!!😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Gowri05: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry guys could not update!!! And you know why!! Well i hope you forgive me and enjoy the update!!!


"STOOPPP!" someone yelled from behind and everyone turned in that direction.

[Niyati's pov]
Someone yelled to stop and everyone's eyes turned to that person.

Walking briskly that person came to me and pulled me behind him.

" Don't you dare put a finger one her or you will not be alive!! Get that??" he said angrily.

"Mr. Rohan Singh stay the hell away from our family matters! You little orphan freak!" Radhe taunted.

That's it!!! He crossed the limits today!! I would totally not care what he did to me , but there was no way he was going to hurt Rohan!

[end of pov]

Niyati was shaking and trembling with anger and so was Rohan. Everyone knew in the house that she would let her self get insulted but not him.

"You freak!!! How dare you even think of it!!!!" Niyati roared with anger and almost caught Radhe's collar for telling that.

"Back off Niya! He has taken this matter to far for anyone to handle" Rohan said trying to calm his best friend.

She left his collar and went to Rohan, dragging him with her.

"Look at them!! Both of them are just scared and one and the same!! After all both are friends!! You might live in the Chauhan Mansion Rohan, you might be accepted by my family , but you will just remain a little orphan freak and the same scared boy like your father" Radhe said laughing evilly.

This was the limit. Rohan did know he was trying to provoke him, but he didn't know he would stoop so low! He was never so angry! Never! He knew the consequences would be bad and so did Niya! She tried hard to calm him down, but his anger kept increasing with each stroke of her hand.

"This could not happen, no way could this happen" Niya thought to herself frantically.

"Calm down Ro, calm down please!" she said to him.

It was too late already. He had already jerked her hand and started to move in Radhe's direction. Niya ,though was sick, forgot all her sickness and ran to Rohan as fast as she could. She could already see the blaze in his hand. She was scared, hell scared. If he lost control everything would be destroyed.

"Ro, you gotta control your self!! You gotta calm down!! You know what will happen otherwise! If you don't calm down now, you will never see me again" she whispered in his ears, all the while tugging his very hot arm to calm him down

He let go of all the anger and became calm for he couldn't loose something so precious.

He slowly went to Radhe and stood face to face with him.

" Learn to control your tongue, if you don't it will lead you to the trash!", he said and went to Niyati and when was about to leave was stopped by Niyati's mother.

"What the hell is going on here??" she asked.

The whole family was back. Everyone had seen a little bit of what just happened at the Mansion.

"Radheshyam, I thought you were responsible enough to take care of the house but you disappointed me.(turning to Rohan) and you my young lad, that's no way to talk to someone elder to you!!" Niyati's mom yelled.

Krish, who all the while was standing with a ice pack on his jaw, was on his way to leave when Niyati's mom caught hold of him.

"Where do you think are you going??" she said.

" Who did this to you?" asked Niyati's father.

He didn't answer.

"I asked you something" he said.

Still he didn't answer again.

"ANSWER ME RIGHT NOW!!" he yelled causing everyone to tremble.

"Niyati, sir" he muttered.

"LOUDER!!"

"Niyati, sir" he answer loud enough for them to hear.

Mr. Chauhan boiled with anger. That's not he had taught his daughter. He went to Niyati, who was standing beside Rohan fearlessly.

"What did you do to him Niyati??" he askedd sternly.

" I broke his jaw!" she answered plainly.

" Where have all the morals gone?? That's not how you talk to your parents young lady!!!" he shouted.

" Tell me what happened here!!" her mom asked her.

"Actually what happened na..." anu jumped in between.

Niyati's mom stopped showing her the hand, and glared at her.

"Only the person asked will answer here in this house!" she said sternly and anu shut her mouth.

"So tell me!" she asked her daughter again.

Niyati narrated the whole incident that happened but skipped the part , where Rohan's hands were set ablaze.

" Party's over! Get back to your house everyone!!" her mom yelled and everyone left.

" This was not accepted thing to do Ms. Niyati Chauhan!!" her father yelled at her.

" You did not have any right to scold my son!!" Radhe's mom said.

"He then has no right to slap me which he almost did!! If I have no right to keep a small study conference without any permission,then your son has no right to keep a party at the house without any permission that too when someone is sick Mrs. Ram Chauhan!!" Niyati snapped.

And she got a slap right across her cheek with a force!

"Niyati I will bear anything in the world, but not disrespect of my family member!!" her father yelled at her.

"They are your family, and me?" she thought to herself catching her cheek.

" You are sleeping at the out house porch tonight!! No blanket, no bed!! You will sleep on the creaky cot!! And you have fever or no tomorrow you are going to school tomorrow!! Get that!!" her mother yelled.

"Fine mother!! As you wish! After all even if I did listen to you on anything and those guys didn't (pointing to the trio) I am the only one who gets punished for their deeds no matter how good or innocent I am!" she said angrily and just ran off at her top speed.

" Get in you guys!" Niyati's mom instructed the trio to go inside and all the family member went in the house.

Rohan alone stood there, and then took off to the secret place where he knew Niyati would be!


[Niyati's pov]

Every time they did this to me!! Every time!! I have gotten used to such things! Its like my normal routine! But mom never gave such serious punishments! Thank god for all such things that happened in my life, I found such a beautiful place. (something like the meadows from twilight where edward and jacob along with bella are there in the end of eclipse, not where the marriage took place)

At least this was the advantage of having a house in a quite secluded part of the city!! Never mind , why should I even care about what is happening in my life? Its just the same old story!

I heard a branch snap quite behind the log I was sitting. And I very well knew who it was.

"Get outta that bush Ro!" I yelled.

"How do you always know its me anywhere I am hiding?" he asked.

" Like the way you know its me when I am hiding!" I replied.

I moved a bit on the log and gave him some space to sit beside me. I just loved this place and with him it was even more better. He was my bestest bestest friend! Logically he was one those only friends who cared about me! He and Mili only they were the ones who genuinely cared about me I guess!

[end of pov]

[Rohan's pov]

She knew it again it was me!! This girl was far more smart than she looked!! I knew I would find here and no where else! I donno why but i was always so attached to her! She was my best friend since we were in sr. k. g. She knew me inside out! But I was always clueless about her. Always. All these years of friendship but I still did not understand her totally.

One moment she stands up for herself, one moment she was like totally helpless! I didn't know which was the real her and which was not! Well i am elder to her , by two years! But she was way smarter than I am! She was like all philosophical! And damnnn, that's what makes me love her so much! Wait did I say love?? Hmmm ya I did love her, but as a friend, nothing much I guess! Well she knew my secret that no one else knew!

[end of pov]

They sat there and chatted about things so it would just delay Niya's punishment. She hated it. Hated getting punished. Atleast when its not her fault. At last they decided to go back home, but all of a sudden they heard the ruffling sound.

" Did you hear that??" she asked.

" Ya I did" he replied.

" I thought there were no animals except dogs and stuff in these woods." she said.

" Ya!! Maybe that big thing we saw the other day!!!" he replied.

" Could be!! Lets go!!" she said and they left.

But they had no idea that someone was seeing them all this while from the start of the fight until now!
" He does it without any spark unlike pyro"

"Her?"

"She is still human, but..."

"According to what we have known she is too strong for a sick person"

"She is developing them"

"Its just a start, maybe it will not develop further."

"For what I have known, there is no such of a chance"

"You know, if they both are of any use for us then it is not totally impossible right?"

"He will do what we want then"

"Professor, I heard him talk about someone"

"With who, son?"

"Seems like his spy"

"What about?"

"Something about, some powers of someone, developing, to strong for a sick person and stuff"

"Keep an eye on them, for it looks like he is upto something big"


haawww!!!! all fighting in the house!! i am sure one day it will turn into a boxing ring!!:P
well what happened to Rohan there?
what's his secret which niyati alone knows?
who were those men discussing about someone?
do u think their intentions were good or evil?
if u wanna know stay tuned for the upcoming chapter!!

A/N: Hey guys that was chapter two!!*claps* I doubted to even write that in this freaking heat!! maaa!! kya garmi hai boss!! well I am quite not satisfied with my chapter but I guess its all due to the heat!! guys be honest about how you liked my chapter, just because you don't wanna hurt me and stuff don't say"amazing", "fantastic" and stuff!! do tell how they were "really"!! what you felt!! I don't mind you guys telling me it was bad, and what improvements should be made cuz seriously I am a virgo a person with such a nature, so I think I can handle the criticizms!!

yes do tell me if I should continue! cuz if you are not interested then I guess its a waste of time I writing!! well see you soon, if you want me to!! till then take care and hasta la vista!!


Edited by -The_Tomboy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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rohan niyati and there fights ...stranger watching them

i feel Niyati is very much a tomboy like ur icon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shana0127

rohan niyati and there fights ...stranger watching them

i feel Niyati is very much a tomboy like ur icon

aigaaa!! Aapne padh daala already!! Complete nahi hua!!
Haan haan woh toh tomboy hain tomboy!! Waise jab poora update karoongi tab pm bheejoongi!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum gowri loved it loads...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved The Concept And The Chapters !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Niyati's chaddi buddi and the brother figure she always wanted. How?? His parents happen to be Niyati's family friends . But unfortunately his parents were murdered by some people whom the government has still not been able to track. Niyati happens to be very close to him and the only person who actually affects him. Everything he does includes Niyati. Together they are the pranksters and mischief makers. His looks, oh his looks are to die for. Every girl in his college falls for him, even the nerds. Good in everything. An allrounder. Though he doesn't have parents, he lives with niyati's parents who are his guardians. Cutest guy in the house and the school. Loves to tease Niyati, rather than anyone the most!! But loves her more than anything! Everyone apart from their family (who do, but don't tell) always tell they make a cute couple, but the reply they always get is "we don't think so". But that only destiny will decide!!


Yayyy!!! Rohan's CS!! seee!!! I guess you already knew his character!! I mean who wouldn't!! well will update soon!! Abhi keliye isse kam challa lo!!

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