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@-The_Tomboy-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: AKlover-16
One more superb work of my Gowri...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Really baby this plot rocks...I loved the concept and its very different from most of the stories.!

Really amazing work...btw this is on which couple..?? the one which u told me the othere day..???
Interesting...
plzz yaar continue soon n fill my pm box wid the pms😉

Byee...
Love yaa🤗

Heee love u my veeru!!

Glad u liked it!!!

Mention kiya tha na ki ye kisi bhi couple par nahi!! mere ko toh doubt hain ki hero entry marega ki nahi!! no its not the same one!! totally diff!!

Ya pakka y not!!!

Love u too!!

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ilvuday

@ilvuday

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

i loved it please update soon n plz pm me ven u do👏

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@-The_Tomboy-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Niyati. that was her. The only daughter of Mr.&Mrs. Chauhan. Born after like 5 years of their marriage. Actually late marriage would be more appropriate. She was the youngest until her cousins were born. A girl who lived with her parents in a joint family. A huge joint family. A family of fifteen including her. And she was fifteen now. Tall, thin and lean. Not fair, not dark. Like every indian girl's complexion. Short hair maybe till the end of her neck. Dark brown and black. Very silky. Her eyes like flower petals. Dark brown. A very cute nose like god had sculpted it. Anger was always on her nose. Just need a spark and she becomes a volcano. Very sensitive. Not from heart but her body. Slight weather change and aaachooo!! She is weak. Not from heart. But is physically weak. She loved her friends from the bottom of her heart but something changed her. She loved everyone who were near and dear but there came a change and the journey of hell started. She is just straight forward and hates backstabbers. Her aim is CA of Google company which is seriously wants. She is not a quitter. Never ever. She is a dynamite. She loves dancing and singing. Wanted to learn guitar but her mother refused. She is a hardcore metal fan and a huge EXCILE(LINKIN PARK) fan. She stammers when she is excited. Takes part in every activity in her school. But is not very good at sports and has very little attitude. Is the vicey of her school. She is herself at school but at home is where the problems starts. She hates people who show off for no reason. She has a huge crush on a tv star named Aditya Randhawa. And one of her friends on her. But her home is where the problem started and that's where the story takes off.

Hey guys that was her character!! Now whenever I introduce a character I will give the sketch !! No probs a lot of characters going to come!!

Hope u liked her character and she is the main character !! Try and imagine her!!

Love..

Gowri...

Edited by -The_Tomboy- - 12 years ago

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Rubaa Rana

@adorable_rana

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Really interesting Gowri dear👍🏼

Update soon and thanx for the pm sweety🤗

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Hey Gau,
excellent timin for the PM woman,
Well, Nice start grammatical errors here and there but other then that it's fab! I'll read it again later :-D:-D
why do I have this feeling that this is Non fiction and is actually based on something personal :-B. ...

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

I liked the character of Niyati...Its really diff and ur story seems to be different so update soon..Thanks for the PM..will loved to read further😊

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

i really likeddd her charcter!!!!!!!!!!!!😊 cntinuee soon!!!!!!!!!

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@-The_Tomboy-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: tiger_lily
Hey Gau,
excellent timin for the PM woman,
Well, Nice start grammatical errors here and there but other then that it's fab! I'll read it again later :-D:-D
why do I have this feeling that this is Non fiction and is actually based on something personal :-B. ...

Yo kiara!!

Nothing like that!

Thanks!!

Ya aint that good at these stuff like writing stories!

Thanks againab

Oh its not totally non fiction its actually inspired from one of my friends story.

But not the whole thing just the starting some parts later I will add some mirch masala!

And in my inspiration no boy but here I guess I have to bring a boy in the story!