|~DESTINY'S GAME~| FF Chap 2 pg9 updated!!!! - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved niyati chauhan's character. plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interstng
nyc
contnuo soon...
Thanx 4 pm swty.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice character sketch
thanks for the PM
do update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
nice but who is playing her in your ff?😕
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its attractive and well written...loved it!!!!!
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Hey guys sorry i couldn't update for so long but i am held up with school work plus i had my mother's visit to doctor for some problem so i guess u can undestand. Secondly i would like to tell that this ff is not based on any celebs so you are free to picture it on anyone and yesi would like to warn that this ff might turn up something not normal something like powers like reading mind and stuff because you know after a lot of suffering she will be gifted so its allowed i guess and yes i am planning to get a male lead opposite to niya and he will come very later and he will be kind of arrogant and the character sketches of the other characters i will give soon and i woul like to give you the pictures of the rooms too soon now the high level warning a long update don't get bored and ya criticisms and appreciations alll welcome buddies!! enjoy!!

Actually this maybe started in around I guess when I was in first grade. This girl named Sophia actually came to my school then. I was there since pre school. And hmm she was new. My best friend of kindergarten had left the school because her father git transferred. I still remember her and will always. All my other friends got attracted to Sophia maybe because she was fair and ummm more beautiful than me. I donno. Most of the teachers liked her a lot. I was left alone then. I had no one to my side. I always studied well. But then even for our school programs she being the more cuter one, was always asked about her opinion. Never mine. Not for anything.

I did not know why actually all this happened but it happened. She shared her tiffin with her 'new' friends and I sat all alone in the class eating alone. That was when I met Shichi. Tall as me but fairer. She spoke the first time to me then in a 'totla' manner. Heee. I still remember. We became inseperable. In the second grade there came this rich girl 'Tamina'. Rich and was beautiful and more than anything was actually a princess of the local ummm what u say the old local rulers something like the Nizams. Hmmm ya. Very arrogant. And years flew. The rivalry between me and Sophia grew and the friendship between Shichi and me too. Though we were of different sections now but were still the same. The race began. Sophia was always an attention seeker. She liked attention whereas I was opposite. I cared nothing about attention no nothing.

I had lost all my friends. Even Shichi. Her father got transferred when we were in fourth and so she left. We did not have so much Idea's in our young brains to take the numbers. So we weren't in contact. I became all alone. Totally. And then in sixth grade people teased me saying I was a geek. How hurtful. I hate those people now too. Too much. And I didn't know how but I got affected really soon when the weather changed and I fell sick frequently and it was affecting my studies and acti...

I felt someone rigorously shaking me and I broke out of my thoughts. I saw my partner was shaking me. And I had fallen asleep on my "precious" history very fat text book. I got up and yawned and saw that the cover bind of the book had become wet and I was kinda hot too. I had fever and I fell asleep. I sweat a lot maybe remembering those old days. But to my bad luck I saw my history teacher glaring at me angrily. I just raised my eyebrows and she continued to glare at me.

"So Miss Chauhan, can u please tell us where we have stopped and what we were discussing about ??" she asked me confidently thinking I couldn't answer.

I got a sudden vibe and actually I remembered all this time though I was asleep I heard in bits and pieces of what she had told.

"Oh that's easy!! U stopped near the treaty of vienna and we were learning about Napolean Bonaparte the french emperor. " I answered confidently.

"Hmmm sit down"

"Heee thanks!"

And suddenly the moment I sat I saw the Director of our school entering the class.
I grinned. Aagayi madam. Bhudi sleeveless pehne ke show off kyun karti samajh nahi aata.
Everyone got up to wish that crack pot chudail.
"Good morning maam"
"Good morning students" (actually stewdents)
"Sit down children" history teacher said.
"Miss Chauhan how are you?" Sternly the director asks.
"Yo Mrs. Kakad!!! Wassup??"
"Niyati what was that??"
"Nothing teacher I was wishing her"
"Whatever. Leave it Mrs Chitra. So you slept in the class??"
"Yes I did!! Duhhh!"
"You are the vice head girl this ..."
"This type of conduct wasn't and is not expected from u!! That's what u want to tell right"
"Very bad"
"No actually listening to you all time all your dialogues I know eee"
"Miss Chauhan !!!"
"Ohhh I got scared!! Ya right maam tell me one thing if you are very very sleepy what would prefer ? Food or sleep?? Sleep na that's what I did ! And before bring the vice head girl I am a student a human so naturally I can't let go off that can I??"
It was not even a second I said that I felt everything black out and unstable and wobbly. I don't know what happened after that.

I opened my eyes and I saw that I was lying down and everyone surrounding me. I could barely keep my eyes open but I could see that the boys of my class were also there. But where was I?? I tried to get up but it hurts. Aaaooww! My whole body hurts. Especially my head. I get up slowly and I found myself in the school's emergency room. I saw my mom staring at me angrily.
"I think she has viral fever. But take her to the doctor and get her checked incase some tests have to be done. " Said the nurse.
"Thanks! I will go to get the permission to take her home" said mom.
She left and behind her many others left too. Mili was there. She came and sat beside me.
"When did I faint??" I asked her.
"Hmm around 45minutes before!" She replied.
"Now that's quite looonngg"
"Yes it was"
"Hmmm"
We remained silent for a moment and then I asked.
"Hmmm mili who brought me here??"
" I don't remember that but shichi was there with that person."
"Maybe her bro"
"Hmm ya"
My mom entered in and smiled at Mili. Mili left. My mom was glaring at me like she will eat me alive. But as she came I saw someone coming through the door. Maybe dad or someone from home.
I closed my eyes and opened it. And I was speechless. Totally out of this world. Eeeppp!!!I just forgot all my tiredness pain fever everything. He just got near my bed and stood smiling showing all his thirty two white shining teeth. I just got out of the bed and jumped to hug him!! And he literally was shaken. I can tell that.
"Rohaaannn"
"Niyatiii"
We broke the hug. I was on my toes. Ya surely would be doing that. He was very tall after all. Very tall. Think I was only 5'8 then he would be somewhere near 6'2 or 6'3.
"How are you babes?"
"Fit and fine dude"
"Ohhh really??"
"Ahoo ahoo ahoo ahoo ahoo hmmm ahoo ahoo ya I guess"
"U will never change will u?"
"Aaacheee (rubbing the nose) never!"
I suddenly started to cough once again. Ahhh my throat hurts. All this happens to me only. Chii! Ahhh my throat. On that this cough is just making it worse.
My mom smiled and went out. I just couldn't understand this woman. Sometimes smiles sometimes grins sometimes glares and sometimes scolds. Ahhh!
"Soo how are u studying Niyati??" He asked.
"Oh *coughs again* ya nicely topped again this time *cough again*" I said.
"Woooww ok now don't talk otherwise ur cough is going to become more worse"
I nodded in agreement. My mom had come with all my stuff. My bag, my jacket and my shoes... Wait a second... Did I just say my shoes?? I looked down and saw no shoes and also no socks ... But how did I not realise it?? I was walking barefoot, I ran barefoot to hug Rohan then how?? Che!! My senses are out of order I guess. Mili came behind her.
"Aunty you forgot her bottle."
"Thanks beta"
"Yo yo yo Mili wait!!!"
"Huh?? What happened Niyati???" She asked quite surprised.
"When did I remove my shoes??" *Raising my eyebrows* I asked doubtfully.
"Ohhh no U didn't Rohan did" she answered.
"Liked the ride doll??" He asked smirking.
"Huh?? Kya?? U picked me up??" I was kinda confused.
"Hmmm yes I did! Btw tu bhari hai boss!!" He mocked
(Hmmm yes I did! Btw u are heavy boss!!)
"Ae he he he!! Bada aaya!! Kam se uthaya toh sahi!! Now I came to know how strong u are!! Gym jaake karta kya hain tu?? Ruk shayad na wahaan jaake beithke thoosta hoga apne muhn mein bhukad kahinki"*coughs* I said.

(Ae he he he!!! Stop your show off!! Atleast u picked me up!!Now I came to know how strong u are! What do u do going to gym?? Aaa wait wait wait I'll tell u just go there and stuff food in ur mouth full to full hungry guy *coughs*)

"Then tu kya hain?? Tu bhi toh bhukad hain!"

(What about u?? U are like mee too right!)

"Usko maar goli!! Maa how come you *coughs* guys here??"

(Shoot it!! Mom how come you guys here??)

"PTA!! Darling" mom said.
Ohhh sh*t !! PTA I hold totally forgot about it!! More than anything it was saturday today!! Oh no so I actually slept and fainted in the first hour itself??. My bad luck!! So there wasn't any school even actually. So then why was Mrs. Chitra teaching ?? Maybe she had lot of portions to do. Aahhh my head and throat hurt so badly! But more important than this was PTA!! I'm dead! I'm dead! I'm so so so so dead!!
"Mom let's go to the PTA first!!"I said all nervous.
"NOO!! U are going straight home!!" She scolded.
"No no no no no no no NO!!! I want to come too!!!!! Rohan see na!!"
"Let her come na maasi I am with her anyways!!"
"OKAY but first put ur Jacket on!"
"Eeehhh okie dokie!!

They were already back home from school. Doctor had come and checked her and it was sure a viral fever as her temperature was really high and kept fluctuating. Doctor had instructed her mom about the diet and had told her to keep her surroundings cool naturally in sense no AC. She had changed into a shorts which were quite above her knees and loose to let the air flow and a huge sleeveless jersey. The fan was on full speed and she had the thinnest blanket available to cover herself. The windows open and the winds blowing into her room. She slept peacefully on her bed as her fever was quite residing now. She slept like a baby.
Everyone had gone out including Rohan for some pooja but not her three troublemaker cousins. Radheshyam, Vrushank and Anushka. Trouble! Mayhem ! That's what they were!! Just there to trouble her as much as they can! Shyam the eldest, rushi the second, anu the third. But Niyati was the youngest.
No doubt Niyati was the youngest but their monkey acts made her more mature. Shyam that's what his friends called him. He was working. Just twenty but too much attitude. Spents money like water. One he worked. Second son of a very rich family. Obviously too much money. Age 22.
Vrushank the second. Rushi that's what he was called. Brat. Very thin. Doesn't like to eat. But loved the most by his parents. A party freak. Works part time for an organisation. Loves gadgets and bikes. Age 19.
Anushka the third. Anu everyone's favourite. Especially Niyati's parents. Loved by her Dadi. But her bua doesn't care. Loves partying. And dresses up like a girl unlike Niyati. Has a great craze for earrings. And has loads of them. Age 17.
Three of them loved partying but no partying allowed in the mansion that too without permission.
Niyati was sleeping very peacefully though the temperature irritated her very badly. It was around 9:30 in the night. Silent just the sound of the wind. And all of a sudden...
"GIRL MY BODY DON'T LIE,

I'M OUTTA MY MIND,

LET IT RAIN OVER ME,

I'M RISING SO HIGH ,

I'M OUTTA MY MIND,

LET IT RAIN OVER ME!!"

Poor Niyati she just fell off her bed with a big thud! God she couldn't sleep too. Poor girl. But now she was fuming with anger. She knew who it was totally. And now they were so soo dead.
"U are sooo sooo dead morons!" And went away stomping.
{Niyati's POV}
That was the limit!! They just don't let me live!! I fell off the bed they are dead! Sooo dead!! (Pulling up her sleeves)
I reach down I feel mad now. I am like why did I ever come. Coughing, sneezing I go to the main lounge near the pool. Why is this so goddamn big?? Ahhh!! I reach there to see people madly dancing with others and the music is just deafening!! And that smell ewww!! It was booze!! Awwwkkk!! I wanna puke!! God help me!!
Someone notices me and goes to my dumb*** brother to inform him. I couldn't take it anymore!! These guys are now dead!!
"STOP THE MUSIC!!! SHUT IT!!! NOWWW!!" I yell and then I cough!! My karma.
The music stops, people stop dancing and I am the centre of attraction. Why?? One because I interrupted and two because of my condition. Ayyo!!
{End of her pov}
The music was deafening and people dancing around madly. All thanks to the alcohol they consumed. She comes down someone recognises her. Coughing and sneezing she reaches the place and now she was fuming with anger.
"STOP THE MUSIC!!!SHUT IT!!! NOW!!!" She yells coughing.
The music stops and everybody staring at her. Some people were amazed, some confused, some cared the least and continued what they wanted. She went upto her brother and she could hear people whispering about her behind her.
"SHUT THE F*** UP!!!" She yelled at them.
"You can't talk like that to my friends understand that!!" Said Radhe.
"Oh dude please u better not teach me manners !! Get that!" She yelled.
"Oh pls u better not talk too much or u will seriously loose all your teeth for talking to
my friends like that!" Said Krish one of Radhe's friends actually Rushi's because he was younger.
"Oh please dude cut the crap and don't interfere our talk idiot!!" Said Niyati.
"Shut up Niya!!" Said Anu.
"No I can't !! Well I forgot to tell u but I have a gift for u anu!!" Said niyati.
"Ohh what's it??" Asked Anu curiously.
"Oh ya let's see" said Krish.
Niyati heard him but still ignored.
"Here this is it!" She said and went near her and just kept coughing on her face with all her might and then acted as if she sneezed and rubbed her hands to Anu's brand new expensive dress.
"Ewww!!idiot!!" Yelled Anu.
"Oh my my now that's one nasty gift I tell" said Krish.
Anu was a manner freak more likely she didn't like being all low class. She was sophisticated. Like tell excuse me when you sneeze. Put a napkin on ur lap before you eat. Never yawn public. And no burping and cough lightly with hands covering and such stuff.
"That's enough dumbo!" Said Rushi.
"Then stop the party baboonhead!" Said niyati.
"Why should we?? Like we care " mocked Krish.
"Didn't I tell u to zip it??" Snorted she.
"Who the hell are you to tell me what to do and what not?" Said Krish angrily.
"Test my patience and ur dead" she said.
"Oh really" said krish and kept blabbering somthing like mad.
Niyati was trying to speak something to radhe but krish's blabbering made her angry very very much.
And thud he fell. He was bleeding near the jaw. That was because of Niyati's punch. She jerked her hand and wiped the blood off to her shirt.
"I warned you but u ignored not my problem next time careful" she threatened him.
"Niyaaa!!" Yelled radhe raised his hand to slap her but stopped halfway hearing someone.
"STOOOPPP!!!" Yelled someone from the behind and everyone turned that way.

so reached the end guys hope u liked it!!
i did a lot of hardwork so better like it!! and no proof reading done soo *hands up*!!
criticisms and appreciations always welcome!!
no bashing pls!!
yes pms pls send me buddy request!!
love yaa all!!!
Gowri.
Edited by Gowri05 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yayy di apne update kar diya😛it was totally awesome..👏.loved the update...thanx for the PM...🤗.post the next part soon😃😊
Edited by Asmimelody - 12 years ago
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Eee...finally finally finally...!!!!! Rejoicing on a long update..!!

That was amazing...👏👏.!!!!! wowiee...u write so wonderfully..!!
Wait a minz.. ..I jus love the attitude of this girl, Niyati Chauhan..!!
She is a tomboy.I get that😆 .. .. .. Btw who's this Rohan, her childhood frnd I suppose😳
But I know they gonna make a pair..lol😆

Radhe, Anu & rushi...wanna kill these guys😡 They r such a f***..!!!🤢

behcari poor Niyati..!! she has to suffer such a lot for these idiots..!!😡 But thank god she punched Krish hard..👍🏼..ufff.. *phew*

Btw I jus had a doubt...why was the history teacher teaching on the PTA...? & why did Niyati faint...!😕 ummm...I know she has fever, but she was arguing wid Mrs. Kakkad, & she fainted after that...
Only this part flew over my head😕🤣
Alright I know I'm a confused baby...never mind🤣

Carry on Basanti...that was a perfect update..!! *perfect is the only word to describe it in a whole*😉

5 stars for u⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Update soon, & thanxx a ton for the pm🤗

P.S. The new name of this FF is gr8😉
Edited by AKlover-16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oho it was amazing Gowri.Cont soon n thanks 4 the pm:)
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great update gowri!
but i am lil confused! whom does niyati looks like ??
plz tell?

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