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Originally posted by: reachsky2011

thank god abhi tera exam nahi hai...

update nahi miltha na


tab to mai bi nhi miltiii... would have gone underground lol
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PART 37

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It had been evening and maan wasn't back yet. geet had tried to call him several times, initially it used to ring but he never picked up and later it came switched off. Geet was damn worried with the way he left her, he was angry, hurt and in pain'. his mental condition wouldn't have been constant at the moment and then his being inaccessible at all just amplified her anxiety.

Apne karam ki karagaahein

Yaara, Yaara, yaara

Whole day geet was in her room, crying, cursing herself for saying that in such a way' but it was being unbearable to hold back at that moment. Was that what she really wanted to say, hell no!!! not when she knew what he feels for her, when she knew how much her mere presence pains him every second yet gives him the happiness which he can't even express!!! When she knew how much angry he ever may be from her, her single ufff makes him restless.

Mujhko iraade de

Kasamein de, vaade de

Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahare de

Dil ko thikaane de

Naye bahaane de

Khaabon ki baarishon ko

Mausam ke paimaane de

Apne karam ki karagaahein

Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

She held the pillow tight in her knuckles, digging her nails in the cover' his every pain was piercing her heart, paining her so much making it difficult to breath. Those eyes just haunted her from the time he left, she again looked at her cell, hoping he would call or atleast message, but none!!! He didn't once contact her and she doesn't have any one of his friend's number too, now what to doo???

She cried as she remembered the morning incident, his work out, that body and the sudden realization in herself, her desire, that body and then the need, it had actually made her so lost then, that she probably didn't even realized that she was smiling unknowingly until he had asked why I am smiling like that??? The morning had been the best one, probably the most memorable one until that call'

Sunn raha hai na tu

Ro raha hoon main

Sun raha hai na tu

Kyun ro raha hoon main

"aap shadi karlo" her own words hammered back her ear drums as she imagined how it will be to see him with someone else, having him smile for someone else, having him like someone else's cooking and having that admiration in his eyes for some other person' "no that's not possible'. Nhi' nhi''' nhiii" she shouted looking at no one in particular' she threw off the pillows, bed sheets on floor' she threw off everything she could see in her gaze on the floor.

Sunn raha hai na tu

Ro raha hoon main

Sun raha hai na tu

Kyun ro raha hoon main

She settled down in between them as she kept her head on her knees, "babaji why you always do this, don't we both deserves to be happy, don't we have the right to live like every other person, why are you so keen to play with our eyes, what is our fault babaji"

Mazilein ruswaa hain [ruswaa hain]

Khoya hai raasta

Aaye le jaaye [le jaaye]

Itni si iltazaa

Yeh meri zamaanat hai

Tu meri amaanat hai.. haan..

She kept mumbling something or the other as she just cursed herself to give him pain, "how can I give so much pain to him. Kabhi kabhi to khud ko insaan kehne me bhi sharam aati hai mujhe'" she slapped herself and did it again and again for uttering that, but did she did it for herself NO' NOT AT ALL. For the first time she was ready to accept the new found attraction toward him, for the first time she was happy with their lives, but then again the history repeats it every time whenever she hopes for some happiness.

"babaji ab to aapse kuch mangne mebhi dar lagta hai, aappe is vishvash pe bhi vishvas nhi rha mujhe' hmesh asab kehte the aap sabka bhala karte ho phir kya bhalai ki hai apne hamare saath' har waqt kyu is baat ka ehsaas dilate rhte ho ki mai unki jindagi ki sabse badi galti hu, aisi galti jisne unke khushiyo bhari jindagi me sirf dard bhar diya hai. Every moment when I feel it is going to be ok, you just proves me wrong so brutally' aura apse jyada to galti meri hai' itna sab karne ke baad bhi mai jii kaise sakti hu"

Apne karam ki karagaahein

Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai na tu

Ro raha hoon main

Sun raha hai na tu

Kyun ro raha hoon main

He sat near the ocean shore as he watched waves crash harshly on the soft sand, probably the reality of life could be seen even in these small-small things too. The one who actually completes you takes you so much for granted that even paining you are only their right and you bear it without a word just to see them happy, but does such relationship gives lifetime happiness??

"aap shadi kar lo" how can she even say that?? Agreed she doesn't feel anything for me, agreed I am no one just a helper for her but does that gives her a right to do anything and everything with his heart!!! Hell NO!!! Everyone has a bearing limit and he had his and now its just too much. When everyday he thinks to do something that will give her some happiness, she in turns gave me pain with double the intensity and today the limit had been crossed too brutally.

Waqt bhi theharaa hai

Kaise kyun yeh hua

Kaash tu aise aaye

Jaise koi dua

Tu rooh ki rahat hai

Tu meri ibaadat hai

"mana tum is shadi ko nhi manti' na mano maine kabhi tumhe force nhi kia, but why the hell then you want to decide for my life???" he fisted his hand in the sand filling it with the fine grains, and then holding it in front of his eyes he looked at the way sand slipped off his hands however much tight he try to hold it, it falls with double the intensity' and that's the truth of our relation too. Every time I try to hold on it, it just pushes you more far then me, but now it won't be like that. I will let it so loose that it won't even feel that someone is holding it, or will just let it go, na tum merit hi na hogi' ye to sirf mera dil hai jo tumhare aas me baitha rehta tha but ab aur nhi geet, its over'. Everything is over now"

Apne karam ki karagaahein

Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai na tu

Ro raha hoon main

Sun raha hai na tu

Kyun ro raha hoon main

He sat there adoring the couples who were enjoying the chillness of water in the coming winter, the night was breezy, kash he could have been this lucky too' but then he hit his knuckles tightly on the sand, "just leave everything maan' that wasn't your way' not at all' you just got misguided that's all"

Sun raha hai na tu

Ro raha hoon main

Sun raha hai na tu

Kyun ro raha hoon main

Yaaraa...



It was around night when geet's cell rang, she immediately made a dash for it hoping it would be him, but her hopes crashed when she saw meera's name flashing. She just kept the phone away not wanting to talk with anyone at the moment. It was third time the cell rang with meera's call. "what is it meer" geet finally received the call frustrated.

"Where are you babes, its 8 and you aren't back yet.. in an hour hostel gates would be closed too, hurry up yaar" meera said chiding her. "umm" geet said as she kept looking at the door hoping him to be back but he didn't. "where are you, tum nikli ghar se ya nhi??" she asked. "I won't be coming tonight, will meet you directly in school in the morning" geet said trying her best to keep a control on her broken voice.

"geet is everything ok" meera asked hearing her broken voice. "umm" she said. "geet I know you are crying, chal if you don't want to tell, that's ok' but you know na I am always with you in any problem' ok!!!" "I know meera, but now I want to be alone' will meet you tomorrow in school" saying so she disconnected the call, as she burst out crying.

It had been more than 12 hrs he was out and he hadn't returned yet. Where is he?? Is he ok?? Had he even eaten anything?? Whole night she kept on thinking the same as she kept on trying his cell but it was always switched off.

It was around 5 in the morning when he came back. He opened the door with the key he have, and before he could even step inside, she came and stood in front of him, as she hugged him tightly, letting loose her sobs, hiding herself as much as possible in him. "where were you, do have any idea how much worried I am' subah se I have called you more than 100 times and you didn't even picked it once' how could you do this, boliye" she hit her fist on his chest, as she kept her head on his left side, just above his heart.

He held her by her arms and pushed her away from him a little creating enough distance between them, that's when he saw her condition, her eyes were puffed swollen, face filled with dried tear marks, her kohl was fully smudged all over her cheeks and then her clothes, totally misplaced.

"I am sleepy, please be aside" he said being totally formal, not at all affected by her vulnerable condition. Geet stood frozen when she heard his indifferent voice, as if he is talking with some stranger. She looked at his face then and saw his cold intense eyes boring into her, his face devoid of any emotion, as if he doesn't even care now.

When he saw her still in her place, he himself moved away from side ensuring to not even brush his body with hers too. he was moving to his room when geet came back in reality and realized he must be hungry, after all he hadn't anything after breakfast, "aap yha couch pe baithye, I will serve food first, you must be hungry na" and saying that she made a dash for kitchen but stood still in her tracks when he said, "no you don't have to take pain, my servant will come in few hours and will cook for me. Thank you for asking" saying so he just went in his room, as he closed back the door tightly.

Geet felt a chill ran down her spine hearing him, his words kept ringing in her ears, "my servant will cook for me' thankyou". She had expected everything, his anger, his not talking to her, but she couldn't even think that he would withdraw himself so much from her. These formalities were never between them, not even when he was angry for hiding the truth; he had always showed his right on her and some where she had accepted that right of his on her too, but then this distance wasn't the one she would be able to bear at all.

And if till now she just wished to die, now she really want to die' atleast it will be bearable than this pain which had coursed just now in her body. She looked at the food that lay on kitchen sill untouched' and in all this she doesn't even realized that she herself hadn't eaten anything in last 24 hours as she couldn't even have breakfast too due to the buildup emotions. Sobbing she went back to her room trying to control herself.

It was 7:30 and geet was already to go. She came out of the bedroom expecting maan to be in hall waiting to drop her like always but then found hall fully empty. She moved to his room only to find him lying on bed. "I am all ready for school, aap.." she was about to ask him to get ready too but was cut in mid by him.. "that's great, I hope you had a nice stay in here, byee" saying so he closed his eyes back while geet just stood on the door as she looked at him shocked. "and ha could you please shut the door before going out"

Geet held her skirt in her fist as she tried to control herself and went out shutting the door of the room or their relationship too??

Precap: teri deewani

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Edited by neha512 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
much needed part... though both r sad but hope this will help to bridge the gap between them...

abhi ke liye ithna hi... long waala comment kal...

feeling so sleepy now... gn ... and haa bathaana bhool gayi... me first😉😛
😛

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after a long time me first... me so happy...

but the update was definitely saddy one...

geet has indeed hurt maan and hence maan took this decision of indifference with her... on his pov he is right that more he goes close to geet more hurt he gets and hence maintaining distance from her is good, especially for him...

for geet am happy that atleast she realise she has feeling s for him and also she cant see him with anyone else... though maans indifference will be hurting her but hope she is able to understand his importance in her life and also accept she loves him ...

so eager for the next part...


and yes i really missed u...

Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
battery down hai...
only 5 more mins left...
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Posted: 12 years ago
aankehen bandh ho rahi hai madamji... post tho karo...
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Posted: 12 years ago
now Geet will come on track... but felt bad for Maan... his soul just left him & he has to go on with his life... hope everything comes on track soon... waiting for their realisation continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
neha check my coment... will edit more tom ...

bye ...gn
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

neha check my coment... will edit more tom ...

bye ...gn


gd nyt to both ofu
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
when geet started to realize her feeling maan has shut everything😭

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