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Posted: 12 years ago
lov de pranktersingh khurana
babis planing wow...lov de updtt rashmi.watng 4 nxt...
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rashmi updtt likhing kya
kab dogiii????
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update
so its gonna b complan ad
but loved the outing in park
maan is naughty even around kids
wat maan doesnt know to play badminton...ouch it hurts to know that...aakhir kuch toh hain jo msk nahin jaantha
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 43
awesome part dear...
so lovely...
i love this Geet...
and Annie wow shes helping Geet...
the Khurana siblings do their things in their own style...
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part 44
awesome...
i loved this so much...
Maan is damn irresistable...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

rashmi updtt likhing kya

kab dogiii????


hi lily🤗

yeah me update likhing, jaldi post karing😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _Rashmi


hi lily🤗

yeah me update likhing, jaldi post karing😉

me wait karing
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Posted: 12 years ago



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Thanks to all for ur wonderful likes & comments😳😳

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Forty Five




"Aap mujhe...mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho...?"

It's been quite a long time since Maan had been just staring at her limitlessly. Geet had worn a elegant white gown with silver neckline & broach. Maan was wholly smitten by her innocent beauty. Yeah! They were in the party of one of Maan's clients. But they found a secluded corner veiled by the curtains for themselves giving a royal ignore to everything else. His heated breaths fanned her pink face making her heart jump up & down. To make long story short, they were coochi-cooing.

"Kuch...boliye na..." she spoke again shyly adjusting her hand on his shoulders.

"Yeah...I'm searching for words." He said bluntly, very much lost in her.

He then held her hand & kissed each of her fingers sending currents through her veins.

"Tum buhot khoobsurat ho Mishty, bilkul ek aasman ki pari..." he said huskily playing with her curls.

Geet blushed! Finally he was saying something romantic!

"Since you're an aasman ki pari, why don't you fetch moon & stars for me since you have easy access to the sky!"

His mischievous voice made her frown.

"Technically speaking, it is you who should tell me 'Mishty, main tumhare liye aasman se moon aur stars todkar laa sakta hoon!'" she did dialoguegiri.

"But I'm not Neil Armstrong so I can't say that!" he pretended to be innocent though there was a mischief glint in his eyes!

She frowned hard & shoved him away!

"Chaddo!! Aap toh rehne hi dijiye!"

She fretfully trotted away. He was about to follow her but was greeted by his clients.

Geet roamed around alone for some time annoyed with Maan but soon her eyes unconsciously started searching for him & soon she began missing him.

"Babaji, yeh Maan kahan chale gaye...where is he?" she wondered looking here & there.

She passed by a chamber which was decorated with balloons & other festoons. Cute little boys & girls playfully ran here & there, giggling & laughing. And amidst them, she saw Maan having fun with them just like a kid! She saw him lifting a small cute girl in his arms. Frankly, Geet had never seen him laugh so whole-heartedly. Maan truly enjoyed the company of kids.

Geet averted her gaze when Maan saw her staring at him dreamily.

Just then, Geet noticed a small boy, whom she assumed to be five years of age, dressed smartly in a black tuxedo standing at a distance. The childish sparkle in his eyes, the glaze of his cute baby face & the mischief smile on his lips thrilled her!

"He will be my Complan boy!" Geet told Maan excitedly when he walked upto her.

"Hmm...He is Aditya Raheja, son of my client."

"Maan! Come lets talk to his parents!" Geet literally clutched his hand & tugged him along with her!

Maan was startled to see Mishty speak so convincingly to Mr & Mrs Raheja about Aditya featuring in her ad & they agreed instantly!

Then Geet bent down on her knees leveling herself to Aditya who looked at her with keen eyes. He had developed a liking for Geet at first sight!

"So Aditya, do you love drinking Complan?" she asked cheerfully.

"No. I drink Horlicks. Taller Stronger Sharper." he replied plainly,

Maan smirked seeing Geet startled.

"Uh...Okay so--"

"But if you tell me to leave Horlicks, I will so do, only for you!" he chirped flirtingly.

Maan narrowed his eyes-brows to that. Even Geet was a little taken aback. So Aditya was kinda flirty.

Before she could say, he spoke,

"Do you have a boyfriend?"

"Uh..." she looked from Maan to Aditya, "No! I don't...why?"

"Because I love you. Will you be my girlfriend?" he asked in a childlike voice which made Geet smile.

Maan raised his eye-brows hearing him.

"Yeh kya ho raha hai?"

"Yeah sure I will! I love you too!" she cutely brushed her finger past his little nose.

"Aur mera kya hoga?!" thought Maan, pouting!

Aditya had a big smile on his face.

"Meet you tomorrow Geet! Byee!" he kissed her cheeks & ran away!

Geet stood up on her toes smiling.

"Agar Aditya ke jagah koi aur hota toh I would have strangled him."

Maan pinned her to the car in the parking area, leaning possessively over her. Her eyes locked dreamily with his intense ones.

"Waise, You didn't tell me those three magical words yet."


He looked at her intently. Her heart pounded & her eyes immediately turned downcast with her face turning a darker shade of red.

"Woh…main...I...I..."

Maan trailed wet kisses across her shoulders. Dipping his head in the hollow of her neck, he nipped & kissed her passionately. She squirmed when his fingers sensually moved along her waistline. She held him more close as he continued kissing her collar-bone. And finally he moved upto her face & their lips met for a kiss & let out a soft moan...

They sat in the car heading to her hostel.

"Babaji...I can't tell him those three words...I mean, you have seen how many times I have practiced it in front of the mirror, hai na?...But still, I haven't succeeded...Kaise kahoon inko...mujhe buhot sharam aati hai...I can't even speak properly to him...let alone confessing…..pata nahi woh kya karenge…."

Geet was in her thoughts when Maan spoke,

"Seems like you're cribbing about something to your Babaji!"

"N-Nahi...woh...actually...I am shooting for my first ad tomorrow...so little nervous...actually...very nervous...What if I mess up everything?"

Her words were genuine. She really was worried but didn't want to tell it to Maan!

"Is Be positive your blood group?" he winked.

That's how he told her to have faith in her abilities! She stared at him while he drove the car...!


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Posted: 12 years ago
jst oss dear
oh i love aditya a lot
maan possessiveness grt
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Posted: 12 years ago

A lovely update.
Aditya is such a flirty frank kid.
Bachha Horlicks pikar taller , stronger aur sharper hua aur credit complan ko milega.
Bahut nainshafi hai.
Edited by AKSashadow - 12 years ago

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