SS:Friendship-Key of fictional World

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi friends,
Welcome to the page.This is new SS by me...with whimsical thoughts.The story begins with 3 intimate friends belonging a garden in front of their apartment.It may lead to a science fiction.😊

-Rumpu😊

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Edited by surprising - 12 years ago

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Susmita

@surprising

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Posted: 12 years ago

no reply

ok...then I'll transfer it in another forum

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Neha

@Neha.sid

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Posted: 12 years ago

do it here too,yaar

when you update plz pm me .. 😊

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

1st Chapter

The bond is on the way...

Anand is going & going...seeing & seeing...sighing & sighing...at a time he sees nothing...no feeling...no destination...Who is God?? a nil entity,nothing else.Viraj!! why?? what sin I've done for that you behaved me such a way?? you!! my school friend!! TRAITOR!!too cruel word...friendship..GOD curse you,friendship-a fake bonding...

Anand has been suspended by his boss just 1 hour ago.

He is lost in thoughts...colourful memories of shool-life,collage-life...bleeding heart...but eyes are dry,soulfully dry...ohh God,why can't we return in our childhood days?? all false...his assuring smile...his caring advice...his embrace!!!

All on a sudden,a person pushed him with all of his strength within a fraction of second...before getting understood what's actually happening,he has lost his sense for 2 minutes.

"Brother,could you listen to me...brother!"- it seems that a voice full of anxiety gets nearer to him...a loving touch...loving lap...

Anand opens his eyes...

-you are alright brother?? I think we should arrive in a hospital right now...you able to walk?? not na?? I should call an ambulance.

He is about to ring on his mobile.

-stop.I'm fine.No need of it.
-what's up brother?? such absent-minded?? why??

He gives an offensive look.Another gets uncomfortable.

-so sorry brother.perhaps it's turning personal talks...actually out of anxiety...
you are about to have a collision with a motor.

A surprised Anand looks at him...then his gaze turns into greatfullness...at a time eyes get watery.

-ahh...no no brother.Actually I'd a little brother like you...he passed away just like that.

He bows his face...his words quivers to a choke.
Anand pats his shoulder.

-I've none in the world.-He utters...but his eyes tells something else.
He hugs him very lovingly-no brother.Don't say this.I?? Could you give me a chance??

Anand can't bear anymore...he hugs him tightly & releases the idiot tears...

He wipes his tears-I'm Shuvankar, from now your elder brother.

...They are walking together...Anand remains silent in almost everytime...Shuva can feel for him...perhaps, he don't want to disturb his distressed mind...They reaches in a hospital...

-o...what's your name??
-Anand.
-bhai, please ekbar check up koriye nao. srry tumi Bangla bojho??
( brother,plzz hv a check-up)
Just then a nurse comes out of the hospital & asks them-
-Any of belong AB- blood-group??
Shuvankar replies as soon as possible- sure...

Here, Anand witness a rose-tree, in the heap of garbage...with a yellow bud.In a great astonishment he sees the tree moving twice left & right...as if it's forbidding for something!!

Anand holds Shuva's hand & nods...

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Arooj Arain

@aroojarain

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

ohh wow..
Awesome..
Continue soon :)
nd thx for pm :)

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

wonderful----eagerly waiting for the rest---taratari

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algy

@algy

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

Nice start :-) continue soon.thanks 4 the pm

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

Friendship ...i don't know how it grows? How it works??Except When someone calls you up and expresses I am very happy that you have your dinner early...a broad smile comes on someone's face...or when one gets inform that another one fell down form the stairs...having no option she starts panic and gives lots of advice to other...I really don't know IS THIS FRIENDSHIP OR NOT??

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: medhasarkar
wonderful----eagerly waiting for the rest---taratari

ai xam achhe, padge.

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: DeewaniRimi
Friendship ...i don't know how it grows? How it works??Except When someone calls you up and expresses I am very happy that you have your dinner early...a broad smile comes on someone's face...or when one gets inform that another one fell down form the stairs...having no option she starts panic and gives lots of advice to other...I really don't know IS THIS FRIENDSHIP OR NOT??

ohe...public place e hochhe ta ki??

golper comment na kore...

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