Taayam os :I think I'm gonna be sick

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So short taayam os from my side I mean really short so this is what I wanted to see when swayam found out about taani and Rey...I have always loved he possessive Bhai and I wanted to explore this side of swayam so here it is...


It had been about a week since swayam found out about taani and Rey. He couldn't sleep at all that night. Maybe it was because of Sharon and their turbulent relationship or no relationship.or maybe it was because of the fact that his best friend was dating his sister. Or maybe it was both.

Well he had to admit he freaked out when he found out when he found out about them...like really freaked out. He remembered nil said that he went all 'crazy possessive Bhai ' on them.

"Crazy possessive Bhai my foot...as if I am supposed to rejoice that my sister is dating someone..."

But he also had to admit that he was happy that if she was dating someone it is a great guy like Rey. He smiled to himself thinking of his silliness and when he yawned and realized that he should go to sleep.

" it is getting late...chal...go to sleep swayam ..."

He got up to go to sleep when suddenly his brotherly instinct kicked in and he decided to check on taani. He walked to her bedroom and opened the door slowly to check on her but he was taken back when he saw that she wasn't on her bed sleeping like she should but she was on the phone.

He leaned closer to hear her conversation though he knew that it was wrong of him. He couldn't help it.
The conversation went something like this:

" Rey so tell me how did I look today?"

A serious of giggling followed.

" oh shut up...why are you being so sweet to me all of a sudden?"

Swayam leaned in closer.

" I love you too Rey .."

Swayam's face distorted and an expression of repulsion took over...

" no I love you more..."

This was repeated several times while swayam controlled the urge to puke.

" okay fine...lets meet up tomorrow at the rehearsal hall"

Swayam recalled all the moments he spent with Sharon romancing in the rehearsal hall and wondered if Rey would have romanced with taani like that too.the mere thought of it made him sick to his stomach...

" alright bye.."

Swayam let out a sigh of relief

" no you hang up first..."

" no you hang up first..."

" no you first..."

"No you.."

Swayam recalled a six year old taani asking her Bhai for sweets and looked at the 19 year old taani being sweet to her bf.

"No ..."

Before she could finish swayam burst through the door..

" oh for the love of god will someone hang up first!"

Taani stared a him open mouthed him while he could hear Rey on the other side of the line calling out her name...there was a killer silence for at least 30 seconds..taani put the phone to her ear.

"I will call you later Rey..love you bye..."

With at she hung up and gave swayam a 'what are doing ?'look...the only thing swayam could say was:

"I think I'm gonna be sick"

Done..hope you liked it..this is my first taayam os so pls hit like and comment😊
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Ria_Taareyfan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg it's just amazing really loved it and thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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do i have to tell u???
it was obviously awsum.. like always!!!
more cute than cute... <3<3
luved it... and luved taarey convo..
specially the "first u hang up part"...
lol.. :p
and then swayam's dialougues like-

" oh for the love of god will someone hang up first!" lol.. that was genuinely funny...

and u'r ending was awsum!!!

"I think I'm gonna be sick"
AWSUM!!!
LUVED IT..





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Posted: 12 years ago
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OH GOD!!! it was so so cute!!! 😳Swayam and his typical possessive Indian Bhai Instincts!!! 😆😆It was awesome!!! Had so much fun reading it that I am still laughing!!! In fact, it was full of ROFL moments!!! 🤣Well Done!!!👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg, that was sooo adorable!!!!! It was just tooo cute, awww swayam is such a sweetheart, loll, I liked the he imagined her as a kid asking for sweets, awww
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hahahha loved swayam as the indian possessive bhai!! I am still rofling now... Super duper hilarious!! Swayam's reaction on taarey's love talk.. And his last two dialogues...

Oh For the love of god will some one hangup first!!
🤣
I think i m gonna be sick now!!
🤣
Keep writing the amazing works!! They are marvellous!! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hahahaha it was so cutee...i culd so totally imagine swayam's expressions...and den taani and rey's too...🤣

epic one...loved it alot..!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum os👏👏
omg swayam possesivenes...😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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lolzzz i laughed a lot after reading this yaar!
seriously swayam n his bro instinct lolzzz
you hang first no you awwe so cute but i can understand swayam's situation so difficult sometimes to be with couples and that too when they act coochie coo types lolzz
and yeh to brother hai ha ha ha! so sweet!
pl do write such more os!
beautuful os!😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey i don't know whether i have send you the link but i am sending you this:
my new os for taarey!😊

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