Imperfect!

Nobody is perfect they say, yet Shiv Kapoor , after all that has transpired could not bring himself to say it , for Gauri, for he believes that she bears no imperfection ...

The words echo , louder , echoing a deeper sense of imperfection , he bears, which aware , he is , she masks , with her perfection...

Of a divine intervention,destiny divine,he is aware ,that she has been blessed with , for she shall lead him, as his perfect partner to his destiny...

Deny he wishes to no more, her companionship, but shall , despite his lack of heartfelt affections , he believes , he bears not for her... , wishes stand by her, he does, her belief of their destiny , a life destined to be spent together....

Unfanthomable are the ways of the divine , for shall the divine , pave way for emotions into ones heart, as one walks on unaware...in denial....

-Sareeta

-Based on the episode aired on 28th Nov , Shiv calling Gauri , an idea of perfection...

Ah, Sareeta, what do I say...? You've left me speechless yet again..It's beautiful...

I have no word to say to u, sareeta di, just 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: TiNa58

Ah, Sareeta, what do I say...? You've left me speechless yet again..It's beautiful...

Aaah Tina!!! Thank you so much buddy!!!! I am speechless reading your comments now.. It was jus a thought that occured to me suddenly , when his line "lekin tumhaare baare main ye koi nahin keh sakta, main bhi nahin.." came to my mind and thats how the lines flowed... random thoughts....about how his line was echoing his own realization of his imperfections...😊

Originally posted by: meli

I have no word to say to u, sareeta di, just 👏 👏 👏

Thank you so much Meli! Thatz so sweet of you!!! 😊

Originally posted by: Eva J

👏 👏 👏 brilliant

Thank you soooooo much Eva!!! Am so glad you liked it! 😊

Sareeta,

excellent..u know sometimes i feel ur poems are too good for ekta's serials..
ur poems convey soooo much inner depth, which neither the shows nor the characters have...

its completely of another level...toooooooooooooo goooood

but one thing i feel is the character of gauri is so good and innocent..and u put it brilliantly in words, which makes her even more beautiful 😊

Originally posted by: TiNa58

Ah, Sareeta, what do I say...? You've left me speechless yet again..It's beautiful...

taht what her posts r meant for👏

wow... excellent sareeta ... 😛 u r way too perfect with ur intelligible words... 👏 👏

as always great work !!ur so gud 👏