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Posted: 12 years ago
Heyyy..!!

First of all, salute for the brilliant Pm idea..! <3

Secondly, your FF is awesome girl..!! Love the way you have characterized both Manvi and Virat, and how they have built to become good friends from enemies practically :P

Looking forward to seeing how you develop the story and especially the trip to Hawaii..!!

update when possible, looking forward to it..!

Love Pariii
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Posted: 12 years ago
The update was a bit emotional, but as said it makes two for a tango, I find both Manvi and her mom at fault, though her mom a bit more! I loved how Virat cared for her, man he is so sweet!...so they'd finally confess their inner turmoil to each other in the next update, so they'd connect better I think!

I read your april fool prank, I was like totally in laughs! And your mom defiantly doesn't think low about you, it's just that she knows you, your pranks so shes kind of used to it. She has more faith in you than your joke, that is the reason she laughed it off and didn't take it serious, or according to me any mother would've freaked out by now at the prank😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
heyyy i have commented on ur updates part 9 as well as 10 on the day i got ur pm n plzzz plzzz do pm me when u update part 11😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank you :) for the help. I really loved your story.please allow me to read your story . Thank you :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 11

"Virat what are you doing?" I have my doubts right not. What is he coming so close to me for?

"Ermm giving you a hug. Normal people hug after, you know, sharing their tragic story." He replied like it was the most normal thing to do.

I moved away and made a face, "No you already hugged me today morning. You are lucky I let you hug me once."

He folded his hands, "Thank you Manvi madam for letting me hug you once. My life's goal is fulfilled now."

Why does he have to be so annoying? "Arghh shut up Casanova."

He pouted and looked at me with a puppy dog face, "Not even one hug?"

He thinks that stupid puppy dog face will melt my heart? Yeah right. "You really think it is going to work on me?"

He looked at me clearly annoyed, "Well it works on me when YOU use it and let me remind you, you use it every day to get your way."

Hahah so true. See Virat is like that, he can't resist a puppy dog face. To get Virat to do what you want just make a sad face and plead. I swear it works every time. Infact just last weekend he came shopping with me for the entire day and also watched a chick flick with me. "It works on you because you are a softie Casanova."

"Do you need my help or not? Hawaii trip, need to convince your mom remember?" He said proudly.

Oh shit I forgot about that. "Maybe" I said and pleaded him with my eyes to not blackmail me.

But son of a gun.. "I need a hug first."

"Why don't you go hug blondie aka Paige? She will hug you any day you know." I said sarcastically.

He gave me a really expression.

"Fine." I opened my arms and he hugged me tightly, lifting my feet off the ground. Okay I have to admit that I sort of liked getting hugged. I feel so much better and the sinking feeling in my heart is gone. Man this guy is a good hugger.

He pulled out of the hug with a huge grin, "See I knew you could use a good hug."

"Who said I liked it?" I tried to put a straight face.

He lightly hit my head, "Please dumbo it is written all over your face that you loved it."

"Hey dumbo is my word." I argued.

"Your word? Are you getting some kind of an award for discovering the word?" He laughed at me for the hundredth time today. ARGHHH

"Mom." I stood right behind my mom and called her.

She turned around and was quite shocked to see me. She rearranged her features and changed it from shock to anger. I'm so going to regret this later. I hate you Virat for making me do this.

"So I erm you know I." I couldn't say it. It has been so long since I have had a proper conversation with mom or even addressed her. It is usually mom screaming at me and me zoning out or screaming back. This is awkward.

"Okay what I did last night was sortta not good? Virat thinks I should talk to you."

"Who is Virat?" She asked rudely.

"Doesn't matter." I gave a rude reply then I realized that I was supposed to make things better between us so I quickly added, "My friend."

She nodded me to continue.

"Well I don't think I did anything wrong but Virat thinks I did so maybe I was kindda wrong. But that doesn't make you right either. You told me you regret having me which is even worse than what I did. If I am expected to apologize then you should too."

I have seen my mom angry, maybe happy too but she looked shocked right now like she saw a live dinosaur or something. Then mom did something that I'd NEVER expected her to do.

SHE FREAKING HUGGED ME!!!!

"Oh baby I'm sorry. I'm so sorry. I didn't mean a thing I said. Ofcourse I love you and I would never regret having you." She wiped her tears and kept hugging me.

If someone shoots this it can be used for an Indian daily soap. What am I supposed to do now? She is still hugging me and I'm guessing it would be rude to push her away?

"I was scared of losing you. You have been so distant lately that I feel like I don't know you anymore. I know I have been extremely strict with you but that is because I don't want you to do something that you'll regret later. I love you so much baby."

She finally pulled out of the hug and kissed my cheeks. My sister walked in on us and saw the second half of our performance. She stood there with her mouth wide open.

What am I supposed to say now? I'd rather she screamed at me, atleast I'd know what to say. Unknowingly I wiped off my cheeks and my mom laughed at my action. Gotta admit, she looks pretty when she laughs.

Almost as a reflex I smiled back, "You know I'm not used to you showering me with kisses."

She laughed again and this time Misty, my sister laughed too. "And I'm not used to hearing 'mom' from you. What do you call me? Hitler, madam."

"Control freak." I added. I looked at Misty who was still laughing. "Misty what are you laughing for?"

Before she could answer mom asked me, "What does Misty mean?"

"Miss Fatty." I blurted.

Before mom could get mad at me again, Janvi quickly spoke, "Funny right mom? I don't mind at all."

Bless her.

Mom shook her head and said something that shocked me, "Well it is between the two of you. Manvi call your friend Virat for dinner. For a change you made a friend that talks sense. I would love to meet the person that put some sense in my daughter's head."

"Mom please he didn't do anything. He just told me once you know." No need to mention how many times in the car he tried to convince me and in the end blackmailed me that he will make the seniors cancel the Hawaii trip.

"Yeah right." My mom caught on.

"Hey that is my word!" I always say yeah right.

Moving towards the kitchen mom questioned, "Are you getting some kind of an award for it? Now go call Virat and invite him."

God she even talks like Virat! "Whatever." I went to my room to grab my phone.

Virat's Point of View

Man I love taking long showers, it just gives me so much energy. "Chaiji chaiji." I called and she hurried in my room with a glass of juice.

"What is for dinner tonight?" I asked and she started reading off a huge list. The only person that eats dinner in this house are the butlers and the maids and sometimes I do too so why are they cooking all these fancy dishes? She read my face and quickly answered, "Sir and madam have invited some guests over."

Arghh to hell with their stupid parties. It is going to be loud and annoying, I should probably head out.

Da da do do dim dim dim (randomly singing a tune in his head). Where should I go? Brando's? Nah he has become boring these days. Riley's? Never,most likely Paige will be there and she annoys the hell out of me- she is so damn clingy, gross. She never annoyed me as much but thanks to Manvi and her constant teasing sessions, I have started hating Paige even more. I wonder why Manvi keeps teasing me with her? Well its Manvi who can tell whats going on in her head.

I should probably call her and take her out for dinner. Yes I should do that, she is the only solution to my boredom. No wait a minute, she should stay home tonight with her mom and sort out her differences.

Ring ring. Manvi's call? Think of the devil and the devil appears. I hit the answer button, "Hello devil. I mean Manvi whats up?"

"HA HA HA. Very funny Casanova." I smiled hearing her voice. I'm positive she called it truce with her mom; she sounds so much happier.

"Did you call to thank me for helping you out with your mom situation?" I questioned proudly and like I'd expected she gave me her trademark one word, "Whatever."

"Okay Manvi madam why did you call me then?"

"I have to invite you for dinner tonight." Jeez can this girl read my mind or something? I mean just a minute ago I was wondering if I should take her out for dinner and now she is inviting me for dinner!

"No need to get excited, I am not inviting you but mom is." Wait a minute what is she talking about?

"What mom?" I asked not ready to believe her yet.

"My mom dumbo. She wants to meet you and she invited you for dinner."

"Whats the catch Manvi?" I asked.

She sighed into the phone and answered, "Mom also thought my friends were useless but now she thinks I'm finally friends with someone that talks sense. In her words, 'I want to meet the person that put some sense into my daughter.'"

"You coming or no?" She asked.

"Yes ofcourse I'm coming afterall I need to ask your mom why you are so weird." I answered excitedly which annoyed her even more. "Whatever." She hung up on me.


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Edited by nisha33 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res. Thank you in advance.
Unres...so finally maanvi and her mom sorted out their difference...Good to see the changes in maanvi because of virat...
Beautifully explained the scene of maanvi and her mom...Finally maanvi mom hugged her and showered all the love and feelings which she held from ages...really liked their relation and the way you expressed their feelings...
Maanvi thinks virat as a good hugger...Really when we hug someone,it makes us feel relaxed, same in the case of maanvi.
So maanvi mom likes virat as a friend to maanvi and also invited him to dinner...
Waiting for family dinner.
Thanks for the beautiful update and Thank you for the PM.
Takecare.
Edited by sonu0111 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
The concept is wonderful I just love all ur stories. So virat and manvi both have family issues and they are project partners that's interesting but really feel bad for manvi state .I loved ur description of Romeo and Juliet and great to know that they are finally friends .could u please add me to ur pm list I am dying to read chapters 9, 10 and 11 .
Edited by virman223 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
unres...yayyy another outstanding update with cool VIRMAN😉
YESSS virman are really good no no no THE BEST hugger in the history of hugs😆🤣
the type of convo virman r having is so sweet n its jst like any BFF'S would have❤️
awww n virat cant resist puupy dog face n he knows it😃...n whats that he so keen in hugging her maybe he also loves it...
just love virats dialogue he;s ready everytime with strong answerzzz to fight back with the sherni n she have to say his trademark word i.e WHATEVER hehehehe
love manvi n her mom's confrontation n manvis reaction r worth reading SHE FREAKING HUGGED ME😆...looks like manvi is geeting alot of hugs which she hates like hell😉
aur manvi kon si kam ha her comments yarr LOLZZZ "" she looked shocked right now like she saw a live dinosaur or something"" DINOSAUR n this one too ""If someone shoots this it can be used for an Indian daily soap""🤣
looks like virat n manvi's mom are gonna team up against manvi looking at their similar way of thinking hain😎""'award n something""
wow looking forward to their dinner its going to be an awsome fun
n i think he will love her mom as he really didnt get any motherly love hmmm...
n thanks for the pm🤗 jst love all ur stories will comment surely as i read all of them...
n plzz pm me the nxt time u update any of ur stories plzzz😃
Edited by amgud - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank u so much for the pm both parts 9 10 were amazing felt bad for virat but he is so understanding and can read manvi mind that's nice pls pls pm me the 11 th part also
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Posted: 12 years ago
how despo virat got to make manvi feel better.he knew manvi will feel better after a hug.awww!!!!!
i loved manvi's mom.she'll bond well with virat.
manvi has one hell of an adorable sister.she's a darling.
manvi's got everythin nice in her life n virat will make her appreciate them slowly.

p.s.plz put in the disclaimer of virat not being real n he's bad for our heart.😉

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