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missmystic

@missmystic

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#431

Lovely update nisha
I loved the cute hug scene between manvi and virat, i just love Casanova virat, i could just picture him giving an adorable puppy face to manvi, how can she not fall for his charm?!
Glad manvi and her mum figured things out and things were back to normal... The scene was written very nicely and also the sister bonding was sweet
I also loved the phone convo between manvi and virat
Especially when virat was like 'hello devil, i mean manvi' lool that was hilarious
Cant wait to read of his meeting with manvi's mum im sure shes going to love him
Thanx for the pm :)

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-GayathriK-

@-GayathriK-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#432

Hey nishaI am sorry that i didnt comment over a long time! i was just caught up in one or the other engagements one after the other!

Haww u updated 3 parts! 😛 i just read till part where maanvi and virat ends up in the same project and coinncidentaly becomes buddies! and their nok jhok is a treat to read!

plzz pm me parts 9 onwards! i am desperate to read! 😆

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ammu

@Paruvirman

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#433

Hey nisha...
update is really nice..
its the first tym na u r showing
lovely side of maanvi's mom..
she's so sweet with maanvi..
the way she apologized to her mom..after reading that i was like she reaaly apologised to her mom or the other way round..
Nw maanvi's mom like virat..so hawaii trip will surely happens..hmm..
poor virat..he has to blackmail her for
a hug..hehe..
luvd their phone conversation.."hello devil..
no maanvi"..i lyk that part..
lovely update..
thanks for the pm..
take care..

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#434

Nisha update was just fabulous ⭐️⭐️.. OMG I love Virat .. Softie Casanova 😛.. He is such a sweetheart.. He not only made Manvi feel better but also helped her to sort out her problems with her mom.. Aww he cant resist a puppy dog face.. That's cute 😊.. I loved Virman hug.. So Manvi thinks that he is a good hugger.. Im sure he is 😉.. Finally Manvi and her mom sorted out their differences.. Really loved that part.. It was beautifully portrayed 👏👏.. Manvi's reaction was hilarious when her mom hugged her 😆.. It was quite an eventful day for her.. So many hugs in a day 😆.. Misty is adorable and a great sister 😃.. So Manvi's mom already liked Virat and she invited him for dinner also.. Really looking forward to this family dinner.. I guess her mom will love him.. Loved the update.. Thank you so much for the pm.. Take care Nisha 😃

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vajamahes

@vajamahes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#435

I love your story. Please pm me

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keerthana

@keerthu27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#436

sorry for late reply.

now coming to the update i was like😲hug.i liked that hug

soo much.so manvi asked virat for help and virat helped her.

the mother daughter conversation was another shock for me😲.

u will give me heartattack oneday😆

so manvi invited virat for dinner sry sry manvi's mom invited

virat for dinner😉.

continue soon and thanks for the PM dear.

and for the update a big hug for u🤗

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Prem Prem

@Prem Prem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#437

Hey I read all ur parts while everyone was sleeping nd let me tell you are a brilliant writer and I think I read almost all of your stories.. Just a question how do you get good ideas In the first place.. Can you please plz pm me part 9,10,and 11 of this story plzzz

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Pyaasi Chudail

@PyaasiChudail69

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Posted: 12 years ago

#438

aww the update was bang on
Her resting head on hs shoulder ❤️ and he entiwined hs fingers wth her and played with her finger ❤️
Finally he started to share hs problem wth her
Poor viraat
Aww the bst part was were he was reading her thoughts tht reminds me of edward cullen 🤣
How cn he read her??? I loved it m confuse soul u c
I luv the growing closeness between thm
Pm me nxt also

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-GayathriK-

@-GayathriK-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#439

awww part 9 started off emotionally and i really felt bad for maanvi! she was trying her best to act normal but she was a bit too much hurt that she wasnt succeding in her attempt to act normal and virat recocgnised it within moments!

Its really evident that these two has come a long way through friendship now! they are kind of close! The way they confessed about their problems is a proof to it!

and the last part where virat was constantly answering maanvi's thoughts and she getting annoyed was hilarious!

And thnx for the pm! 😃

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#440

the way virat asked manvi for hug was sooo cute and manvi's reply like asthough it was some rule just one for a day 😆
softy casanova was interesting just like alwayz i enjoy reading the way you express manvi's thought its just soo different hilarious yet cute...😃

i am loving this viirat he is sooo caring and understanding 😊
OMG manvi's mom's reaction was soo shocking i was soo shocked can imagine manvi's situation ...😆 and the kiss tooo 😛
but that was an emotional moment felt soo good that she finally said it all to manvi now atleast manvi will feel beeter 😊
and the way manvi said her part that i think even you should apologize GOD was that some kind of threaten 😆 and she kept on reminding her that virat said her to do this it was like she didnt want to show that she also thought the same 😊

now finally virat and manvi at dinner that is going to be fun 😃
plzzz update next part soon will be waiting for your pm 😊