Swaron SS: The Veiled Temptations(Ch2 Pg3)

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 12 years ago

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 12 years ago

Well,its amazing start..i just loved the concept as well as story...Loved the character sketch of swaron as a computer proffessionals..

Beautifull starting with fight..i mean tom and jerry fight..loved it..Then whole office scene was amazingly explorred..and then rain part was also good to read..i enjoyed it..

And last love making part was amazing to read..So at last,its amazing story..i loved it swaron in this characters..So pls update soon..

Thanx for pm

Prateek

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veronica

@SwaRon_rocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Amazing os..simply loved it

from swaron's fight to being friends to the dance and the last scene😳 everything was nicely penned..

A superb piece of writing..

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Pooja-J

@Pooja-J

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Whoa nice start.

Vaishali you are an amazing writer, just cant wait to read more

Thanks for PM Baz

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Nehal92

@Nehal92

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

I have read KR version of it and i loved it. And i am going read it again on Swaron...I am going to love it again. You are amazing writer. Do write On swaron too :)

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Nice work Vaishali 😊

Amazing start...from fighting like Tom and Jerry to confession to all the sensuous love making...Loved every bit of this update.

P.S TFS Baz 😊

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

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Posted: 12 years ago

I've read the KR version and I loved it and now I can't wait to read this one as well :-) please pm me when you continue

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

To be very frankly i have came across this OS before by you on KR but didn't read it but now when i read it on Swaron, it felt so pleasant.

I just loved the entire scenario, the plot. Their fight was amazing, no doubt they fought like wild animals or i can say even wild animals will be amazed seeing them fight.

The locked room punishment was a great idea, Vaish! I liked it!! The way they both busted out at the same time that 'Coz i was attracted to you Damnit!" was wow.. i was for a second stunned thinking what will be the end to this amazing OS!!

My favorite part was the rain scene besides the love hot scene in end. The way you described the beauty of their desire and Sharon's feminine figure it was so thrilling to even read! I loved this part due to this a lot..

The end was obviously hot! They both are really naughty fellas! Loved this OS a lot..

Hey, do convert more OS of Swaron. Pweshh!!

-Marium