Adhura Sach...

Dhundhlaate hue baadal , sach ko jhutlaate hai...

Ummeed ki kiran, rishte ki sacchai, saathi ke daaman se bandhe...chali jaa rahi hai Gauri zindagi ki manzil ki or, sacche ehsaason se bandhi....

Apne saathi se ek sacche bandan mein bandhe hone ka ehsaas, ek nayi ummed de use, aur chal padi hai apne bhavnaaon ka izhaaar karne apni us saathi se, ki uska ateet , guzre hue waqt ke gumnaam galiyon mein dafn ho chuka hai.... aur ab is rishte ke saath hi badegi , apni zindagi ke manzil ki or...

Sachai ek ehsaas se bande hue , rishton ke maayine jaan kar, Shiv chal pada hai, use azaad karne is unchaahe rishtey se , apni hi manzil se anjaaan.... , uske ateet se , use milaane..

Par , apne rishte ki sacchai ko nibhaate , Gauri apne ehsaason ka izhaar karegi , Shiv ke saamne, ki uska ateet beet chuka hai, aur uski manzil wo khud hai...

Kashmakash mein , Shiv, unkahe ehsaason ke bhog tale, ek adhure sach ko jhutlaate, uske vishwaas ka daaman pakde chalega , us sach ke raaste par, jahaan asooon mein doobe us atoot vishwas ke brahm ke tukde bhi honge.. jinhe sametna , shaayad na mumkin ho....

PS: Please excuse and forgive if Ihave made any mistakes with the hindi... my hindi is a lot weaker than english...Hee hee...

Beautifully written, Sareeta... 👏 👏 👏 Superb...👏

And as far as your Hindi goes, I didn't find anything wrong in it..It's perfect..👏

My Hindi is far worst..!! I've decided to seriously learn Hindi when I visit India this time! 😳

Originally posted by: SHRUTI_jain

lovely 😃

Thank you so much Shruti.... Uh since no one pointed, I am still waiting to know if the hindi was decent and ok... I am nervous wreck now, wondering why I didnt choose the other language!! 😊

Originally posted by: TiNa58

Beautifully written, Sareeta... 👏 👏 👏 Superb...👏

And as far as your Hindi goes, I didn't find anything wrong in it..It's perfect..👏

My Hindi is far worst..!! I've decided to seriously learn Hindi when I visit India this time! 😳

Aaah! Thanks Tina... You make me feel better.... I was so damn scared after I posted it , wondering , what in the name of the lord made me write it in hindi, considering , it hasnt been a strong point 😊

lovely and beautiful words. 👏 👏 👏 Sorry I cant comment on your hindi mine is not that strong either. once again 👏 👏

hey sareeta di
its very nice
u r a very good writer
👏

very nice sareeta! 😊 awesome job once again sweety! 👏

no words to express 😃 beautiful

thanxxxx for this kool poem 😃 😃

Originally posted by: shananubis

lovely and beautiful words. 👏 👏 👏 Sorry I cant comment on your hindi mine is not that strong either. once again 👏 👏

Thank you so much for the kind words!!!😊