my first attempt .. on KAA

karam apnaa apnaa
ektas show remains gud yeh rahega sapna
agar kahaani mein twist laana hi tha
shiv ko story se hataana hi thaa
to thoda shiv gauri mein pyaar dikhaate
taaki unki chem ka luft hum bhi uthate
phir shiv gauri ko tadapta chod jaataa
aur phit shashank aake scene smbhaalta
par yeh stupid shiv to khud hi shanks ko leaaya
ekta ke dimaag mein kya chal rahaa yeh koi naa jaan paaya
par IQ ne yeh show chod humein khush kiya
is crap se humein baccha liya
cause IQ show mein rehte toh show dekhne ke liye baith hi jaate
is dil ko naa rok paate
par ab to shiv/IQ na hoga
so is crap mein time barbaad na hogaa

pls waitin for ur suggestions n feedback .......... my first attempt with hindi poetry.so forgive

woah, its awsome buddy .... only if i cud write the same way lol

jassy <33

very good 😊 but i don't agree IQ is doing right in leaving KAA 😊

exactly what anjana said we are all true kaa fans we wont leave watching the show just coz iq is leaving in the same way we ill watch another iq show when hes back 😊
but great work 👏
love
anu

Originally posted by: anu_thegr8

exactly what anjana said we are all true kaa fans we wont leave watching the show just coz iq is leaving in the same way we ill watch another iq show when hes back 😊
but great work 👏
love
anu

i'm totally agree with you 😊 and yeah nice work

thnx everyone but u no what i didnt no who iqbal was before this show havent seen ne of his previous ones so cant claim ma self being a big time fan of his but hes gud but the show is turnin out to be crap as now they show shiv new abt the secret so why was he mean to gauri and u no all the previous happenings dont make sense if shiv new the secret

Originally posted by: bccool

karam apnaa apnaa
ektas show remains gud yeh rahega sapna
agar kahaani mein twist laana hi tha
shiv ko story se hataana hi thaa
to thoda shiv gauri mein pyaar dikhaate
taaki unki chem ka luft hum bhi uthate
phir shiv gauri ko tadapta chod jaataa
aur phit shashank aake scene smbhaalta
par yeh stupid shiv to khud hi shanks ko leaaya
ekta ke dimaag mein kya chal rahaa yeh koi naa jaan paaya
par IQ ne yeh show chod humein khush kiya
is crap se humein baccha liya
cause IQ show mein rehte toh show dekhne ke liye baith hi jaate
is dil ko naa rok paate
par ab to shiv/IQ na hoga
so is crap mein time barbaad na hogaa

pls waitin for ur suggestions n feedback .......... my first attempt with hindi poetry.so forgive

👏👏That line was my favorite!Kyunkii baat sahi hai...agar Iqbal KAA mein rehte to dekhne mein koi excuse hota....but I don't agree on a couple of things you said😭I really want Iqbal to stay in the show,so that I will always make sure I watch it,but....what can we do,we have to be awakened with the truth sooner or later😭

Anyways,well written poem...👏👏👏