ARHI FF-THE MIRAGE -Thread 3 Chap-37,p 146 - Page 66

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Dimz13 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gulabo you're in trouble. Yummy food...the picture says it all...wow is there really a palace where the windows actually form the frame...I mean from any window there can be a scenery visible..but to actually focus only on the scenery...fab idea if its your own...!

so Arnav was playing chor police...! Nani is right empty stomach does not bode well for any sane conversation..but Arnav bituwa from when have u started to listen to Nani so much..?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome . So, Arnav realized someone from inside the sheesh mahal is spying on them for chandies.
Gulabo 😲. Never expected .

Eager to read more.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dimz13

Gulabo you're in trouble. Yummy food...the picture says it all...wow is there really a palace where the windows actually form the frame...I mean from any window there can be a scenery visible..but to actually focus only on the scenery...fab idea if its your own...!


so Arnav was playing chor police...! Nani is right empty stomach does not bode well for any sane conversation..but Arnav bituwa from when have u started to listen to Nani so much..?


Hey

There is no such palace dear just my imagination...

To tell you the truth I always found that most of the time the setting is not given importance in our serials! They have static sets( I understand their constraint) But you know with a lil imagination they can actually transform the mood and the tenor and so are the clothes!

Well! The Mirage is living up all those dreams of finding a perfect fit of costumes, setting characters, dialogues, plot and mood!( Dunno how far I am able to do justice as no one is perfect)

I saw so many people fighting on the fora for various shows so shallowly where in they miss out the most imp aspect! Visualisation...
Be it a novel or a show that plays a major role... My Rani saa of Ranpur reigns as its just not her its her pride,love...anger frustration against the determination of ASR and the lecherous spite of Shikhar and the deviousness of Bhairav! As an expert in branding I know that the ATMOSPHERE rules...

That is if you walk into a lawyers room and won't find law books then you are weary! 😆

Thanks so much for your appreciation...
love
Anu
Edited by anukat - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago




THE PURSUIT-20

(THE MIRAGE)



'Kuch tho hain!" ( Something doesn't add up) Bhairav said it a third time ever since they left teh temple!

"Key... baar baar ek hi patti padath hou ji!" ( What is it that you are chanting the same thing again and again?) Lakshmi exclaimed irritatedly!

"Tharey chorey ko waahi bhaayi aur ooko dekho kaisan bath karbey hain!' She spat in anger

( Your son likes only her and look at her! How she speaks to us!)


"Arey Naahi Mahraani waa tho wahaan hain pan ye sehari babua jo ooke peechey peechey paaltu kuttey ki tarah aavey hain waa kahaan hain? Hain?" Bhairav mused.

( Oh ! Leave her but where is teat city slicker who is on her heel all the time like a pet!)

"Yaa tho manney gadbad lagbey!" He said frowning.

( I find it fishy)

Bhairav added..." waisey yaa baar hum thaarey chorey ko ticket dilabey hain kaisan bhi! Dekhthi jaa! Humaar chakrabyuh sey nikal naahi sakath hai woh sehar ka babu!"

( This time I shall get your son a ticket! That city fellow cannot get out of this web that I am weaving)


"apan aapko key samajhtha hain! Yahaan saanp, rassi, lathaith. bandhook sab auran ke hath sey chuthan ko lagi aur sirf hum dekbey hain! Door sey! Majaa leikey!" He said laughing wickedly.

( What does he think of himself! Here snake, rope, stick and gun everything is being done through a third party! We will just sit and watch the show and enjoy the result!)

"Waa param moorakh ko samajhaiiyyo nigodi" he elbowed his wife who sat besides him in the backseat of the vehicle!

( Explain this to that Idiot you wretch!!!)


"Rani Saa Rani saa chillatha hain @#$%! Manney bilkul nahi jachey hain ooki bath!" He yelled.

( He is going crazy about her and I do not approve of his behaviour)

"Ooko kyun kosath ho ji! Ooko tho abhai tho... "Lakshmi tried to reason!

( Why blame him? He is just out of danger...)

"Chup ri! Dunnon ki mathi maari gayo!" He yelled!

( Shut up! Both of you have lost it).

Bhairav picked his mobile and dialled a restricted number..


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Posted: 12 years ago
res





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un-res-ed di...😉...
maybe i m late...but koi nahi...😆😆😆

well the news of gualbo being khabhari came as a shock...but its may be not of their use...apart frm tht they can be alert tht there could be more prople like gulabo in the sheesh-mahal and other thing to maintain secrecy abt the things or plans going on...

ye miss and then kiss ka kya chakkar hai...and why arnav is interested to know if khushi miss him or not ???? as he is the one to claim tht he don't believe in love thing...thn why the question abt love thing..❓...well ye to yaa ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA janta hoga ya ANU DI janti hongi...😆😆😆...as i know the miss-wiss thing don't come in loveless relation...we miss the presence of those whom we love, our family, frnds...not neighbours, classmates at school...etc...

so frm arnav's question should i think tht he is trying to figure out whether she love him or not...?????

well...nice one di...
continue soon...
Edited by manikka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
woah di...😎

m 1st to res..😆...second time in a week...🥳

...second day second update looks like, u became supergirl after meeting BATTEESI BABA...🤣...i hav just read and unresed tht part. of Inexplicable attraction

and still i hav to read and unres the part 19 one...😭...

koi naa...m gonna read it...😉😆...






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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww...its gettng more n more interesting...
both r sooo stubborn...
brilliant work dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
It is getting a bit more mysterious ... I may be wrong here but is there another negative character apart from the Chandis.

Desperate souls with bottled feelings ... When it comes to a family it's man and wife... He has his own style of expressing and she has hers ... Problem - poles apart and hard to understand ,that they are still feeling the same

A physical act is making her weaken yet emotional mind puts a brake ...

As far as he is concerned ... He possesses her and has every right on her in every sense ... Only issue here is both are aware of their own feelings ... She successfully named it ... May be she should help him name it
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice arshiful update.little fearful of chandis now,wonder who will they gang up with
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update .for how long they both will be stubborn...keep going

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