MG OS: A COMMITMENT epi 1,2/59 complete - Page 21

It was a month after maan's confession to geet well it was indirect confession from his confession but more of a direct one confessing his feelings… shruti was well progressing in her health due to her doc aka bff as he had after that school dance had taken shruti to meet her mother..though nandini was in coma but still she could listen and hear everything… and from that day shruti regularly spent her three precious hours with her newly found friend krish on Sundays telling her mama everything complaining about her bua and praising her bff….

And even geet couldn't do anything since maan had strictly warned geet not to interefere In his ways of treatment he had told shruti that her mama is sleeping and will wake up soon if she will insist her that she is missing her mommy…

Shruti first didn't understand but then she too understood and what was biggest treasure for her that she could see her mama though she could not talk with her but still she always does this…

It was one such day when geet was in her bhabhi's ward with shruti her duty hours were finished and she was there in her room listening to shruti and her cute talks while shruti was cutely complaining about her bua…

Shruti: mama bua doesn't let shruti to get out..she never plays with shruti and never makes chocolate cake for shruti….

Geet made a big O shaped face her innocent niece had completely turned into a cute innocent brat ….

Geet immediately defended herself…

Geet: haw shruti you dal badlu … you are complaining to bhabhi about me… your geetu I swear I will never give you chocolates now.. and that cake I will never make… I swear .. whether I will create a mess in preparing or not but tere liye kuch bhi nahi banaungi..

Shruti looked at her angrily… she stood up keeping her hands on her waist…

Shruti: kyun nahi banaogi… you..you.. she pointed her little finger towards geet..geetu I will never talk with you…

Geet : acha … you shaitan you will not talk to me fine I will give all the chocolates to luv and haan his brother krish..listening to luv …oh my god shruti fumed and was about to go away when geet pulled her…

Geet: see bhabhi..aapki shaiteen kitni nakchadi ho gayi hai..see her nose is all red…

Geet pointed at shruti's red nose…

Shruti: cholo geetu….

Geet: nahi chodungi ..abb toh bilkul nahi …. You dal badlu…

Shruti: mama…. She said loudly expecting her mother to come for her rescue like she did always…but to her dismay her mama didn't wake up…

Shruti went near nandini's bed and looked at her sleeping form..she hugged her and shook her to make her wake up…

Shruti: mama get up..mama utho…. She started weeping..her soft tears spilled from her eyes… I hate you mama…. Mama utho..she was crying even geet was crying ….

She immediately took crying baby in her embrace trying to calm her but she didn't calmed…

Geet: shh chup ho jao shruti mama will wake up..see she is sleeping..shuti nodded in a no…

Shruti: mama not love shruti she is sleeping …. She not love shruti…

Her tears were making geet vulnerable she took shruti in her arms to leave when maan came..he saw tears in both of their eyes.. he knew that this was the usual time for both of them to meet here but today before he could say anything she left crying…

Maan called her..

Maan: geet stop please listen to me…

But she didn't listen…. Her sobs were getting loud ..shruti was tired so she slept..geet reached her home and she made shruti comfortable… she was about to go when maan knocked she didn't knew that it was him..but when she opened the door..and saw him she was about to shut the door..when maan hold her hand..he came inside…

Maan: what happen..why you were crying… where is shruti …

Geet didn't answered she was just ignoring him.. his voice was getting harsh with his constant question this was the limit of annoyance she was making him mad by her silence ..she was getting ruining herself by not opening her wounds….

Maan when didn't heard any single word from her mouth he pulled her towards his hard frame making her gasp in sudden movement..in a swift movement she was in his arms…. And he was caging her in his strong form….

Maan: didn't you heard geet I asked you something… I am not letting you go without my answers… you had played enough with everyone and even with yourself you know… why do you curse yourself this much geet nothing is wrong if you will open up …

Geet still averted her gaze and looked down….

Maan: I am asking you something dammit open your mouth… there's nothing to hide now… do you know that how much you are suffering… your eyes says all …

Geet looked at him at once and coldly stated…

Geet: I have nothing to say… just leave me alone…

Saying so she wanted to get out of his cage..but maan hold her face in his hands squeezing her jaws a little….

Maan: you don't have any right to kill my geetika within you , your this cold and stubborn geet neither you have any right to kill yourself with your indifference …

Geet got frustrated with his hold ..he was so possessively holding her…. She at once shouted at him pushing him away with her all mighty strength….

Geet: JUST STOP INTEREFERING IN MY LIFE… JUST STOP MAAN.. YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO SAY ME ANYTHING… KOI HAQ NAHI HAI TUMHARE SAMJHE TUM….MANA KIYA THA MAINE KI SHRUTI KO MAT LE KAR JAO BHABHI KE MILANE BUT TUMNE MERI MAAT NAHI MAANI… AND SEE WHAT YOU HAVE DONE.. SHE WAS CRYING FOR HER MOTHER TODAY SAYING HER MAMA DOESN'T LOVE HER … NOW WHAT WILL YOU SAY TO HER… TELL ME…

I HAVE NOTHING TO LOOSE KNOW…. SHE IS ONLY I HAVE LEFT WITH …BUT BABAJI IS HAVING A STONE HEART THAT HE DIDN'T EVEN WANT HER WITH ME….

She at once pushed him…

Maan looked at her with a smile.. he looked at her with all his love….

He pulled her with his softness visible in each step….

Maan: you want to know what rights I have on you…. He pulled her more close..geet started going back… they were in the hall she was on the edge of the kitchen self there was a knife lying maan saw it and before she could hurt herself he took that and threw it away….

Maan: what you meant to me ..yehi jaanna chahti ho na geetika…

He asked her she was now caged between him and the self…

Maan: zindagi ho tum meri..saadki ka who ehsaas jo ek aisi khushi deta hai jise main apni dulhan banana chahta hun.. meri chahat ka wo roop jise main apni palkon par bithakar rakhna chahta hun… meri dhadkane ruk jaati hai agar tumhare ye aansun behten hai… she very slowly and tenderly wiped her tears drop ….

Geet was breathing heavily..her tears were now falling freely.. knowing his feelings….

Maan: tum jaanti ho main itna bada flirt na hi kabhi tha and na kabhi hounga ..jaanti ho kyun… kyun jis maan ko tum jaanti ho wo sirf tumhara hai… jiski har dil ki dhadkan par sir ek naam hai GEETIKA…

Maan said just to tease her… while geet tried to correct him…

Geet: GEET…

Maan nodded in a no..

Maan: na.. geetika meri geetika..maan ki geetika… he said huskily sending shiver to her spine….

Maan leaned towards her ..he grabbed her by her waist ..his grip on her was commanding… she was feeling jitters… he was making difficult for her…

For once geet wanted to loose herself in him..she too leaned towards him…but the next moment she covered her mouth with her palms… making him to look at her intently… he immediately took her in his embrace..she was shuddering denying to be with him in his arms… but maan took her in his arms..caressing her back…

Maan: shh jaan kya hua hai.. why don't you say anything to me… I know you too feel the same way and I don't need your words..she was still nodding her head ..saying….

Geet: no , that's not true… please leave me…

Geet was sobbing continuously denying her feelings..when maan looked at her with his piercing gaze and visible anger… he immediately took her sobbing lips..capturing her in a heart felt soul searing deep kiss… he nibbled her upper lips.. she was shocked stunned not in her senses..he had made her immobile by his sudden demand… geet was looking at maan so innocently that maan wanted to love her tonight but still he couldn't forget her condition the emotional stress she was going through…

He was sucking her lips..maan was demanding he wanted to devour her cherish her sweetness. .. geet as knew that she too wants this..slightly opened her mouth letting him get to possess her what he owns. His hands squeezed his waist while he very carefully made her comfortable in his lap on the floor..she snuggled closer to him… her hands roughly pulled him towards her scratching his shirt with her nails… he never knew that this much passion existed …

Their tongues fought..geet closed her eyes living the moment… she was turning calm by his superb ministrations… he was kind of guiding her to move on in her life… her hands went in his shirt ripping his shirt buttons.. they were glued to each other..he left her when she was breathing heavily.. he eyes still closed a calmness spread across her face… her hands were on his torso .. caressing softly…. Maan was finding it really difficult to hold himself… she slowly kept her head on his chest he was highly aroused and she even felt it making her cheeks crimson red… instead of feeling ashamed or embarrassed he came close to her ear sucking her earlobe ..kissing the sensitive spot behind her ear…

Maan gruffly said…

Maan: now you know how much do you affect me…

Aww geet didn't need anything more now…she just hide herself in his strong arms… he scooped her in his arms and took her to her bedroom…he was about to go … when she hold his hand…pleading not to leave her…

Geet: mat jao…. All left me … I am afraid that you too will leave me like mama , papa and bhai..sab mujhe chod ke chale gaye… kisi ne nahi socha mera kya hoga…

She said in a little hurt and crying tone…

Maan settled beside her taking her in his arms..she comfortably rested herself on his back….

Maan: you think I can leave my geetika..

Geet irritatingly answered him..

Geet : its geet..

Maan: ya ya geet… he mocked her…. Geetika I can never leave you..you know that .. he said smiling..she too returned him that pleasant smile … when geet spoke further…

Geet: papa had a heart stroke when I was in first year … I had received a call from mama saying she wants me back urgently I thought there must be something but jaake pata chala toh… papa left me alone… he left his princess …

Geet cried ..maan left her cry he wanted her to get free of those bottled up feelings and emotions that she never had open up…

Geet: he wanted to see his geet as a doctor.. he wanted me to have a name with this profession… but after his death I was lost .. nahi karna chahti thi me yeh that's why I left college … I would have never fulfilled his last wish…if bhai was not there he was a moral support for me and mama … he managed everything alone..we had a sudden loss in business bhai did have to work a lot even bhabhi did..you know I felt useless those days that I cannot support my family just because I don't know anything about that …

Maan kissed her forehead softly…

Maan: you know why because you were committed in fulfilling your father's dream….

Geet nodded…

Geet: phir mama and bhai left me… they had an accident I was in hospital just started with my new job everything was fine..but god never gave me happiness… bhaiyya bhi chale gaye and then bhabhi was in coma and thankfully shruti was not injured she just had scratches… but when she was complaining of pain in her chest .. she was having hole in her heart…

Geet cried ..

Geet: meri choti si bachi..jaante ho I was the one who was very happy when she was born and you don't even know how I have felt when she asked me about her mama and papa ..kya kehti me use ki meri kismat ne uska sab kuch cheen liya use…

It was my ill fate my destiny that made me a orphan …. And that's why I never let anyone come near me not even you…

Maan looked at her intently..

Maan: but you were not successful geetika… you were having a commitment to fulfill and believe me your father must be very having seeing his daughter as a doctor…

Maan enveloped her in his warmth…

Maan : and you know your near ones never left you just are with you … bas aankhen band karo aur unhe dekh lo…. Samjhi… aur if you believe in destiny and mark my words ..humari zindagi bhi judi thi that's why I came here as shruti's doctor… and never ever say that you are alone… I am always with you…

Maan clamed her letting her know the importance of life ..of her fate…. This was the commitment of her life and know the two hearts were committed with their love….

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