MG OS: A COMMITMENT epi 1,2/59 complete - Page 19

It was a week that the sweet time that maan had spent with his two angels… well off course his geetika and his bff… though geet didn't wanted maan at that time but maan was maan he was there .. and was there till she was feeling all right..

He knew that she will not confine herself to him.. but it was not possible when maan singh khurana was around.. oops the MR HOTTY DOC.. but the real dhak dhak of his heart was his geetika…

Geet was in the children ward examining LUV he was there for his regular check up when maan came… well he did noticed that luv's eyes were on only one side that is searching for his shrti and he was cribbing making faces looking at his cruel doc..maan chuckled when luv pulled his wrist from geet's and he was about to move back when he saw maan signaling him to move two steps more…

Luv first looked at maan in confusion then he tried to run when maan pulled him.. chiding him..

Maan: naughty boy..

Luv pouted and geet glared at maan knowing he did this mischief…

She looked away taking luv and getting his shot ready, poor boy was already appearing scared and seeing an enormous big injection he wanted to shout…

Luv: no doc .. don't kill luv… it will hurt doc…

Geet shook her head knowing luv's tantrums but this was the last shot and then he wont need any ..she tried to engage him in some other works.. and called nurse …

Geet: nurse hold him.. luv it wont hurt… its just luv baby… she was so sweet with her little patient… even maan couldn't help this time..

Big angry tears and lud sobs erupted with seconds and luv's parents were there when they came with a carbon copy of him..luv's twin… everyone was in amazement both were looking adorable..but luv was looking more cutie due to his red cheeks and angry eyes…

Luv: kush…

He called his brother and the little kush sweetly came and wiped his tears…

Maan and geet were standing side by side ..geet had an enchanting smile..when maan hold her hand and started caressing it softly till ten minutes she was not in her right senses..though she was feeling some jitters in her tummy … but the soft warm touch made her to look at him and their hand lock was covered with her deep purple dupatta..maan squeezed a little..making geet to turn..till now she was not in her senses… her deep eyes were locked with his chocolate brown orbs.. silent pain was there…

Maan: you know I want twins too but the replica of my almond eyes and her same gussa in our little geetika version..waise I wont mind having two cute maan 's but my geetika will be then having a tough life managing three geetika lovers…

His voice was like honey that was melting in her soul while her eyes were having a confusion ..she wanted to believe him but her inhibitions again pushed her…

She abruptly pulled her hand and looked away trying to catch her rapid breath… geet immediately went ..and soon found maan following her he was carring two small hand bags.. may be some shopping bags..geet was running fast but not more than her admirer he quickly pulled her and pinned her to near by wall…

Maan was faking panting…and glared at geet…

Maan: cant you walk slow..look kitni sweating ho gayi hai..now I will definitely smell bad and what will she say… and I don't have time to go home and change…what to do now..

They were so close..his warm breath was fanning on her neck..she was inhaling his intoxicating smell that was mixed with his cologne … well geet was trapped… maan's words were hurting her somewhere but she ignored…

Maan quickly pulled away seeing her getting uncomfortable… he pulled two very classy soft material saree in front of her…

Maan: which one is good.. geetika..

Geet was confused and maan was enjoying her expressions tell me fast geetika .. I am getting late she must be waiting for me… you are making me late.. common jaldi bolo..

Geet got angry he was already making her loose control and know his saree… she turned her head away and was about to go when maan pulled her by her wrist and dragged her with him..

Maan:leave it geetika it not in your cup of tea I wonder have you ever known about saree and how to wear it…

Geet tried to go but maan after setting her on passenger seat locked the door… they were silent on their way..though geet tried to speak but maan's continous babbling make her to put her one hand on her forehead thinking " cant be be quiet for sometime…"

They reached the venue.. it was a SCHOOL she saw and to her surprise it was shruti's school … she looked at maan but he was way ahead literally running.. and left geet alone to search her own way…

chori chori chupkese aake meri aankhon main sama ja
dheere dheere sapno ki sooni sooni duniya basa ja ) - 3
(aaise sata na hari main hari
yeh teri baatein jhuthi hai saari ) - 2
(chori chori chupkese aake meri aankhon main sama ja
dheere dheere sapno ki sooni sooni duniya basa ja) - 2

the lyrics repeated and she danced with him.. well well maan was the selector of song… and the song was too way romantic for young children..but the way it was presented was something it was totally enchanting…

shruti left his hand and tried to went away when he very sweetly kneeled down and asked for her saath..

geet looked at maan this was something maan was doing since the time they met..they were in a deep relation that bond which always remained unnamed….

yeh zid hai boori
koi rishta to jod de - 2
chal jaane bhi de
meri baahe chod de - 2
aasi to ada pe mera deewana dil dhadke
teree jaise hi hote hai yaha kya ladke
tujhko kasam meri haath chudake ab na ja
ho dheere dheere sapno ki sooni sooni duniya basa ja
ho chori chori chupkese aake meri aankhon main sama ja
dheere dheere sapno ki sooni sooni duniya basa ja

now krish was getting demanding as his cute little partner was not coming to his demands ..he was behind her like a love sick puppy and was making cute moves with her..maan hold geet close to him and took her hand and placed it on his heart … he was having a loud thumping sound and it was just repeating her name..

geet looked at her and when he uttered those words which he wanted to spoke out loud which he wanted her to reciprocate ..she just ignored him..maan 's heart was beating just I LUV YOU and she was trying to avoid that beating… that was having a similar ache in her heart…

yu beeti jaye
apne milne ki ghadi - 2
mai bolu tu kya
kaisi mushkil aa padi - 2
dil kehta hai
kisi dooji se dil lagao
nanana aaisa kare toh
khake ye zaher main mar jaoo
hmm aaj kuwari ka bannoonga main
sapno ka raja
tere jaisi lakho mere aage peetche honge
tu ja ja

well the lines were true maan would have found someone else but he was indeed struck to her like he lost his heart in the battle of her love and hate… geet's mind alarmed listening to the lyrics..yes it was possible maan would just move on in his life and she will be alone and what will she do at

that time..one sided love ..that was not one sided affection she knew but her past the darr that she feel still now is making her to back out before she even takes a step…

(na baba na re
na de saja re
aake mujhe garwa laga re) - 2
(chori chori chupkese aake meri aankhon main sama ja
dheere dheere sapno ki sooni sooni duniya basa ja) - 2
Socha nahi tha aaisi milengi
ek dusre se raahe humari
Haa (chori chori chupkese aake meri aankhon main sama ja
dheere dheere sapno ki sooni sooni duniya basa ja) – 2

She wanted to say to him hug him fight with him..how dare he say that.. she was his and he definitely belong sto her..those feelings are just needed to be pushed and the intense killing look in her eyes was making maan to play his last weapon now…

The song ended with krish on his knees proposing to his love.. well yes these were not any romeo or Juliet but they depicted a simple and pure reflection of every couple who is bound in a relation of marriage…

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MG OS : (NAME HUNT ON)

MG OS: LOVING YOU ( complete)

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