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Posted: 12 years ago
what a part dear

oye hoye they start in tryle room

maan is so happy

oye what was that

someone want to kill maan aur jia

please cont soon

aur ye geet ko kya ho gya

kya geet ko goli lag gai ya wo shock ki waja se hospital hai

please cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me missing milan...
and u left geet in critical condition
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Posted: 12 years ago
moi waiting for the milan update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eagerly waiting for Milan. Plz update na
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Posted: 12 years ago

MILAN- The Final Destination
PART- 97

There are two things I want to make clear. Firstly, Geet wasn't raped. Abused? Yes. Raped? No. Secondly, I know you guys are waiting for Geet's past but it still has some time to come out... Contradictory to Maan's past, hers would be out in a go so please wait a little more, it won't be in bits n pieces😊


A big wala thnk u n tight wala hug to everyone who pressed like, commented n spammed... lub u❤️❤️












Busy in the contemplation of her hard luck, she saw a little spot of red light for just a second on Jia who was in Maan's arms. Then it went away. Again the red spot came back in focus this time over Maan's forehead. She furrowed her brow in confusion as she saw the pointed beam shifting in between Jia n Maan through the Mirror. They both were indulged too deep in their argument n so didn't saw it n the guards also didn't noticed as the little beam of light faded n came back a number of times in mere few second. She turned around taking a few steps further. Squinting her eyes she tried to find the source of the mystic red spot through the far off giant glass walls of the mall on the opposite end.

Like a thunderclap she caught the source of the beam from the building roof across the mall n turned back to Maan n Jia in haste. Then everything appeared to happen in hazy, fast forward.

The gun fired the bullet n she heard the shattering of the glass wall in background. She wasn't sure if the target was Maan or Jia but it didn't matter at the moment. Collecting all her strength in that one second she took four fast steps n pushed them with a force she thought she didn't had. Her leg slipped n the bullet missing the intended target holed into the pillar cracking the mirror but before that her head banged into that n she fell on the floor.

Broken mirror pieces lay beside her bleeding head n the last thing her eyes witnessed was Maan's face.

For a frizzy second Maan didn't know what was happening. It seemed to pass on simultaneously, the front wall of the mall shattering n Geet pushing them. He stumbled back with the sheer force she had used n somehow managed to not land on the ground. When he regained his balance n looked in front she was there on the floor, her breathing rapid n eyes giving up. There was blood everywhere, on the floor, on mirror pieces.

Maan handed the crying Jia to the guard n sat before Geet. His own heart beating like never before as panic flowed beneath his skin with mixed with blood. Geet.. Geet.. He shook her n saw that she was trying but her eyes closed. His world practically stopped but he didn't wait for a millisecond n picked her limp body in his arms to take her to the hospital.

Dadimaa, Aniee n Rohan came to the hospital as soon as they were informed n Dadimaa enquired everything from the guards. Jia in Dadimaa's arms was crying having seen such chaos n blood of her mother. Maan for the first time though didn't seem to pay any attention to it. He stood mum before the operation theater his palm tightly pressed on the door as if to hold her to him.

Annie aap Jia ko ghar le jayayi. Dadimaa told n Annie nodded. Jia protested not wanting to leave Maan but Dadimaa explained the situation as much as she could without scaring her and she agreed to go home.

Beta she would be alright. Dadimaa said to Maan. He looked down at her with swollen, teary eyes. She has to be.

After excruciating 2 hours the doctors told that Geet was fine, the damage thankfully wasn't much, there were few glass pieces in her wound which they had cleaned and she had lost some blood so was now currently on drips. They had given her sedatives n said that she would probably regain consciousness in 6-7 hours.

He could now see her but did have the courage to confront her even when she wasn't conscious. It killed him to know that he was the reason again just like the last time she had taken that bullet for him. All those times he had accused her for changing seemed so utterly pointless now. She had saved his life then n she saved it now.

Making his way slowly into the room he felt another part of him dying. She looked so' dead lying on the white bed, pale n motionless. She didn't look 'fine' at all as the doctors had put it.

Having no trust in doctors regarding something which was so precious he hastily walked to the bed n touched her hand. She was breathing n he felt relieved just a bit because it hardly changed anything. The pulse in her wrist was faint n her hand was lifeless. He sat before her taking her appearance in. It was his punishment, to see her in this condition.

He felt tears sliding down his eyes. What if she had left him? When she did six years ago at least he knew that she was alive somewhere and yeah it hurt him so very much but he assumed her to be happy, probably with her husband n kids. Nonetheless it was acceptable-not entirely-still he lived with it though he wouldn't have imagined to exist if she had left today that too because of him.

The thought only was unbearable of what could have happened? Suddenly the barrier completely gave up n his whole body rocked as he cried. It was his weak moment n if the world thought that he lacked in strength, he gave a damn. His Geet was there n that mattered to every ounce of his life.

May be they are bound to be. Karan said holding Meera's hand as they looked at Maan from the round see-through on the door. You should give him a chance.

I already did. Geet did. He ruined it. She said in a gruff voice, her throat heavy n eyes misty but her insides were on fire. You can see what he has done to her again. He looked weak n pathetic right now but she still wanted to make him pay for what he did 6 years ago n today. It was his carelessness that she was in hospital.

Please not now. Let her recover n then we will talk to her.

Rohan felt the tension between the couple who were Geet's friends. He had seen the same girl leaving that day. Dadimaa had informed Rajendra n these two had come instantly with him.

If it's solves some problem then just to assure you, we will take care of Geet. Rohan stated n Meera glared at him for interrupting. She didn't even know who this guy was.

Karan made a sorry face n scratched the back of his head awkwardly. Umm we would be leaving now. Meera raised her head n but a nod from him made her to hesitantly agree. There was no use of creating a scene in hospital for now. Rajendra, Karan n a very reluctant Meera left.

They had called Neeraj so he was there too. After checking on Geet with the doctors he assured Maan that she was alright n there was nothing to worry about. But for Maan solace wouldn't come until he heard from her own mouth that she was fine.

Rohan insisted Dadimaa to go home n she went back to KM while he stayed back because Maan himself didn't look very good n everyone knew he wouldn't leave so no one bothered suggesting.

It was 11 at night n Rohan was fast asleep on the seat outside Geet's room. Maan was pacing restlessly outside, why she hadn't woken up yet? Once he came out of her room he dared not go in again n see her condition for it was too painful. He wondered how she must be feeling, he couldn't even see her n she was lying there on bed with drips needled in her skin.

But now it was inevitable, he had to go in n see if something was wrong. It didn't occurred to him that in Delhi's best hospital there were enough doctors n nurses to take care of her n know if something was wrong, he was just too worried n drowned that he had almost lost a part of his sanity.

Daringly, he opened the door n walked in to sit beside her. This time he didn't cry but to get assure himself he held her wrist to check the pulse. With mind a little clearer than his previous visit he stared blankly at her face.

All things related to her swirled like whirlpool in his brain. Abused, in depression, unhealthy, so self conscious n quiet, what had happened to her? She wasn't like this before. All this happened in these 6 years, was it because they weren't together? Because he wasn't with her? Did she suffered too n needed him by her side as much as he did? Married or not made no difference anymore' she could have been misguided. She was nave, everyone knew that. That man must have trapped her and'

In the next crushing second, all he wanted was to go back in time n change that day when she thought he loved someone else, the day she left. He would have removed all her doubts n begged her to stay. He wouldn't have let her go, ever.

PLAY ME


If I had one single wish

I'd go back to the moment I kissed

You goodbye

No matter how hard I try

I can't live without you in my life

Leaving her hand he traced his fingers on her cheek. She was so soft, so frail like a doll n she needed him. He willed himself to believe that she would want him too.

Maybe you'll say you still want me

Maybe you'll say that you don't

Maybe we said it was over

But baby I can't let you go

He kissed her cheek n her eyes. How could he be so blind? The things he said to her, accused her time n again. But it wasn't completely his fault, they were both sailing in the same boat but he vowed to make everything alright. He would do whatever she said, whatever punishment she gave him, he would take. But no more would he allow her to run.

I walk around trying to understand

Where we went wrong and I can't pretend

It wasn't me and it wasn't you

But I'm convinced we gave up too soon

Till now everything happened bad with them. They shed tears n went through the hardest of times but if life was hell, they would go through it together. She would have to be with him now despite what she said or did. Taking her hand once more in his shaking ones he kissed it umpteen times.

Maybe you'll say you still want me

Maybe you'll say that you don't

Maybe we said it was over

But baby I can't let you go

Life had given him a second chance. Love had given him a second chance n even if she hurt him, he wouldn't stop trying. His toy girl was there behind this Geet, he knew, he would get her back.

Nothing left to lose

After losing you

There's nothing I can't take

When I run to you

When I come for you

Don't tell me I'm too late

She would have to accept him. Yes, he was impulsive, arrogant, aggressive n biggest ass in the entire universe n so only she was perfect for him, the angel she was. It was no use wasting time wailing on what went wrong or what could have happened, how life could have been with the implications of 'ifs'. It was the present he now knew that mattered.

Maybe you'll say You still want me

Maybe you'll say That you don't

Maybe we said It was over

But baby I can't let you go

She just had to take a step towards him and he promised to give her everything she deserved. All her miseries n pain he would take, just she had to accept him, once.

No, no, no can't let you go

No can't let you go

No can't let you go

No can't let you go

Just once.

After two hours, when she opened her eyes, he was there holding her hand n looking at her. She blinked a few times n her vision cleared. Confused by the look of sheer happiness on his face, she furrowed her brows.

Maan stood up. You are awake. How are you feeling?

Fine. Her hoarse voice sounded alien to her own ears.

Relief flooded his face n he beamed like never before. I will call the doctors. Before leaving he leaned over her n very gently brushed his lips over hers. Dazed she saw him going out.







Precap- Deewana Maan😳😳












I have 5 songs requests right now on total n all songs are masterpiece. I thought this song was apt for this update don't know if you ol agree cz am partial to enrique😆😆n yeah I will try to incorporate the songs you guys suggested n even if I couldn't I am thankful that you ol are liking it enough to participate in some way😃


One more thing, xams have started so updates won't be frequent 🤢











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Edited by OsheenDGr8 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me first yippie. i think it was shreyas father who appointed thd shooter to shoot maan. Awesome happy atleast he knows that geet left cuz she thought that he loved someone else. Rohan Bhai give the reports to maan that u have with u. Maan going crazy n wanting to solve everything between them.
Can't wait for the precap
Edited by itzzdmg - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh god geet gt hurt
whi is tht person pointed gun to msk n jia
w8 fr deewana maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was completely a fab update osheen... One of my favorites till date and ofcourse such an optimistic approach of life...
I was so glad that u didnt make it a bullet shot for geet... it was something little better...
And then coming to the emotions of maan... i completely fell in love with him...
Its so true,,, how much ever we try to hide the love and show ruthless behavior, when we see our loved one in trouble or fighting for life, every bit of hurt and anger vanishes in thin air...
though he has tried to give a try to their relation even before, but there is a vast difference this time... he actually thought in her point of view too.. till date both did the same mistake by blaming the other person.. and for the first time he actually gave a thought that was more of reality... he actually thought of what went wrong between them... and for a change he actually even gave a thought that he might be wrong...
Both of them did a mistake.. both did not trust the other... but am glad that he wants to amend things... he is not ready to start fresh coz he knows the truth of the past but becoz he truly believes that they can overcome any hurdle if they are together...
Love always overcomes every hurdle... its just matter of time... and u get back ur true love...
Awesome one osheen.. looking forward for the next...
Edited by shrutheAjay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
you made me cry once again bu d difference is today it is tears of joy thank u somuch

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