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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello my all lovey di and my sis and friends
here i am new for writing as writer but not a new for my di, sis and lovey friend
so here my new and fresh poem pls u visit and press the like button and give lovely comment
if u don't like i will accepted u r negative comment too but pls for me once visit it



socha me goan ja rahi hui tho sab ko surprise deti jau


deepika aka urs deepa
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ISHQ


Kya he jo dil itana

Tadapne laga he

Aisa kabhi nahi hua

Per pehli baar dil

Jor se dhadakane laga he

Kya ajj hawa ka rukh mod gaya he

Jo kisiki ahat sunai de rahi he

Yeh wehem he ya sapna

Haqikat he ya koi apna

Na jane kyun mere dil se ek awaz ayi

Tu vaha kya dekh raha he?

Main yahi hui

Tumhare pass, tumhare dil me,

Tumhari ruh me, tumhari atma me

Main tujhse Juda nahi hu

Nahi tu mujhse juda

kambakhat yeh ISHQ hi aisa he

agg ka dariya jisme dub jana he

sath samunder par karana he

asaman ko chhun lena he

agar teri ha he to

sari duniya se main lad jau

bas akhari dam tak

main teri saans saans me sama jau

hey sanam baata tera khayal kya he

root na maat mujhe agar me yeh poochu

ki tumhara irada kya he

dil pe pathar rakhakar

koi aisa vaisa faisala mat karana

jisasse hum aur tum dono jal jaye

aur isi khatir hum dono chalo mar jaye

bus akhari tamanna ye he ki

agar hame yeh samaj ek na karde

to chalo hum marakar ek ho jaye



DEEPIKA aka DEEPA


my index page no 1 , 6 , 11 , 15

Edited by deepa5 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yay m first to comment awsm sis lovd it..
itna acha likhte ho aur likha karo...
itna dard aur pyar tha isme i simply lovd it muaaahh love ya
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: yashu_arti

Yay m first to comment awsm sis lovd it..
itna acha likhte ho aur likha karo...
itna dard aur pyar tha isme i simply lovd it muaaahh love ya




awww love u to bachha
and thanks for liking an comment
and yes u r 1st
Edited by deepa5 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its so Romantic...
Beautiful...❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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acha likhti hai tu deepa.aur likha kar.waise kiske liye likha tune.koi hai kya*wink*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anamika90

its so Romantic...
Beautiful...❤️


thank you thank you
thanks for u r lovely comment dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It is so beautiful!! You write very beautiful!! Do write more!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sania_arora

acha likhti hai tu deepa.aur likha kar.waise kiske liye likha tune.koi hai kya*wink*


nahi aisi baat nahi he par ha mujhe poem likhana pasand he
and thanks for lovely comment and for liking
Edited by deepa5 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetrahz

It is so beautiful!! You write very beautiful!! Do write more!!


thank di yes i will write more for u
and thanks for u r lovely comment and for liking

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