An Adopted Girl-I can't promise perfection

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Chapter 1: An Adopted Girl - I Can'T
Promise Perfection
1st January,1992
The story begins with the set up of an inciting
incident that kiscks start life of a two years old girl
playing with the pebbles or stones retained in the
squiffy sand of the graveyard in London,UK.The
wussy girl is platying,crying,laughing and smiling
from the last one day when her parents were
burried under the ground and stoned.
This is the time from the last two years when this
couple Mr. and Mrs. SINGHANIA focus their
attention towards remembering and honouring
their beloved daughter MUKTA SINGHANIA,who
died at the age of just five two years back.Both of
them comes to visit the grave of MUKTA to clean
up their whincing pain with the placement of
fresh flowers on it.MADHURA SINGHANIA,was
crying remembering her daughter badly."This is
the most lonliest day of my life."This was her
most common line on the very start of new year
from last two years and so is now.The pain of
losing a daughter is the worst pain ever this
couple got in their life though they were having a
son named YATHARTH SINGHANIA
Tjey detected by the sense of hearing a weeping
voice of a girl.I think someone is crying,but no
one seems to be here"AADRASH SINGHANIA said
findingly."Yes,Aadarsh,I too can hear.Some girls
cry it is"Madhura replied.Yatharth saw a girl
crying folding her legs and sitting near the
tombstone.Madhura stopped crying seeing one
tombstone addressing- IN THE MEMORY OF-
LATE HEMAN JONES(1964-1992) and other
one addressing- IN THE MEMORY OF - LATE
AALIYAH JONES(1966-1992) W/O LATE
HEMAN JONES" and between their
graveyards,there was another board addressing-
To our daughter- Watching you grow would
have been an adventure for us.But thats our
bad luck.I know you are only two but
always remember you are born for a
purpose,whose whose heart had lighted
ours.Grow mature,struggle and succeed to
attain the aim.We will always be a blessing
for you and you have to bless us to call you
our daughter.You know what you have to
do further RIDDHIMA" Aadarsh and Madhura
confronted that this was the gravestone of one of
the richest person of India who were killed in an
accident yesterday.And this girl is RIDDHIMA
JONES-the only star born in their sky.On calling
for the reason of her cry,she gave tongue she is
missing her morning tv show today.They both
smiled through tears and bring to mind a
memory of something related to Mr and Mrs
Jones and Madhura expressed,"Why don't we
adopt her Aadarsh?"
Before any tears come,they instantly freezed on
Madhura's face,and what was the point in wiping
them off?He thought.May be she misses our
Mukta."You know that a good,longsession of
weeping can make you feel better.Isn't it?See its
better today.Our circumstances can be changed
by adopting her.She is an orphan now,no one is
beside her.Later or sooner she will be sent to an
orphanage and that bloody enemies would come
after her to kill this beautiful Bella.Heaven knows
the outcome of letting this angel fre.Please
Aadarsh,we will adopt her and move to India.We
will accompany her to show her way to achieve
her goal.My wounded heart will be healed which
is lusting for a daughter.Please,Please Aadarsh,it
is a humble praying of a mother,"But
Mukta??"Aadarsh questioned her
"Memory and love of our Mukta is sealed inside
every trillion parts of our life to comfort.But for
now our comforter is Princess Riddhima.Yatharth
will get her younger sister back and we our
Mukta.Don't we?Don't we love her as our Mukta?
Hesmiled seeing her caressing and lovely
wife,"Yes,we do.I will name her Mukta,My
Mukta,our Mukta."She hugged him while there
were coming voices of giggling and laughing as
Yatharth and Riddhima were playing."See
Yatharth also likes her,isn't it seeming through his
smile?Yes he is."So Madhura holded her hand
from one side and Aadarsh from other and
commencing towards their destiny.Princess
Ridhima Jones turned her head backseeing the
graveyard as if they were wishing best of luck for
her journey and stopped walking when she saw
her Princess Cindrella bag lying down near the
tombstone.She ran in the direction of bag and
strung up at her back and smiled.Mr and Mrs
Singhania smiled and promised by keeping fresh
flowers on the grave-
"Sir and Madam,we'll help your angel to
fight.We'll provide her spirit and power to exert
her continously for the only cause of her life,her
right.This would be gift of gratitude of ours
towards you for completing our life with our
Mukta and your princess Jones!!! Just bless us and
your ,sorry now our dughter.Be our guide in
every difficult situation.We extend our hand to
help you,not for any agenda,but for the sake of
humanity and your gift to us.This is our payment
to you!!!"
New Year Brings New Hopes and
Aspirations,New Resolution and spirit.Exactly,this
new year was a bliss,a new hope,new
aspiration,new resolution and a new spirit in the
life of Singhania's-Madhura, Aadarsh and
Yatharth.And this new life was Riddhima Jones
turned to Riddhima Mukta Singhania.Our task
now is not to fix the blame for the past,but to fix
the course for the future.We love you our Mukta.
9th February,1988 On this day,the prince of Mr
and Mrs Mallik,Armaan mallik was born.This is
one of the wealthiest family of India.Ananya Mallik
os a woman with a complex mental state
involving beleifs and feelings and values and
dispositions to act in certain acts,loves her prince
like anything and decided from the very first day
of her prince to get him marry with Riddhima
Jones-princess of the most richest family.Viyaan
Mallik is father of Armaan Mallik and one of the
closest friend of Heman Jones from his
childhood.He is a kind man,have heart to
understand anyone,just opposite to his wife.He
runs topmost hospital Mallik's Hospital and made
her wife its dean.Her qualities that arouse her
impatience towards her husband are her sense of
intense love for people,intense gratitude and his
vision to contribute to the world.Ananya has
always kept Armaan away from his dad so that
he could not turn like his father.
Therefore,she started developing the traits of rich
entrepreneurial people in him.She taught him to
focus on himself,his needs and his wants,not to
do hard work instead of focussing on what rings
the bell of church.
1st January,1992 As Viyaan and Ananya come
into possesion that Heman and Aaliyah are killed
in a car accident through news channel,they both
boarded for London subtracting everything
behind.They directly went to their graves.There
they come across Riddhima's care taker Mathilda
who acknowledges them that some Indian family
has adopted her and taken her along
themselves.Hearing this Ananya demonstarting a
violent anger thinking,"How will I find her
now?"and she yelled at Mathilda,"How could you
do that?We both are alive.We could have adopted
her.""But ma'am I think they all know you and
princess must have be safe with someone
unknown.I was here with her from last night
and...(she narrates her the story cryingly)"Viyaan
was satisfied and after tones of arguement he
calmed Ananya eternally somehow but internally?
No...
"Now my hardest thing in life is finding you
Riddhima Jones and I will,afterall you have to be
my son's would be wife.The hunt begins
now."She shooted the target with the pistol and
the target was Riddhima's photo and she
laughed.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Promo: An Adopted Girl - I can't
Promise Perfection
Riddhima was brought to India on the very next
day."Whose this girl puttar?"Aadarsh's mother
questioned him seeing Riddhima in her
arms... "How can you buy any girl in
this house?"..._____... Next
morning,Riddhima was praying after waking up,
Dear Lord, I pray that you would give me
strength to be strong for You in the world
today. Lord, you know the struggles that I
will face today. Be with me as I go through
them. Carry me if I am too weak to move.
If I stumble in them, forgive me Father.
When I succeed in them, I will praise You!
You are worthy of all praise and honor. I
love you Jesus.Amen. </ strong>
Biji was angered acknowledging she is a
Christian..."Shiva!!She is a Christian.She is
not a Hindu.Why haven't I died before this?"She
said putting her hands on her both ears and
looking upwards towards God..."What is
wrong in this Biji?""Wrong Viyaan?You are asking
me wrong?""Yes I am."Biji frowned at him,"She
prays in English.She is a Christian.She might eat
Chicks and fish and in our religion it is not
prohibited.""You are saying about prohibtion Biji?
Prayer does not change God but it changes him
who prays.I think this was your Shiva who tell us
na?"... "Riddhima,why are you
sad?"Madhura asked."I miss my mom,I miss my
Dad,I miss my nanny bunny,I miss my daily
Church.Tell me aunt where is my mumma?
Where is my Daddy?Where is my bunny
nanny"After that she started crying...
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"Do you know the meaning of the prayer you do
everyday?"Aadarsh asked."No"Riddhima
replied,"But mom said,It is for strength,So that
Jesus would give me all the power and faith to
meet my agenda,to meet my goal in life.""Are
you sure?"Madhura interrogated and she
nodded."How?""Father said this world is my
family and doing good with them all is my
religion.This will allow Jesus for surely help me
out.In return I have to help people."She smiled
and went to her room."Oh my God,This girl is so
much mature at this age of just two."Aadarsh
exclaimed."Aadarsh,we need to do something for
her reason!Don't we?"
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I am happy many of you atleast viewed it.Thanks for that. 😊 So here I am posting Chapter 2(a):An Adopted girl-I can't promise perfection Hope you will like it... 😊 Looking forward for your ViEwS.. 😊
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CHAPTER 2:Which Religion???
LONDON---In Church,Mathilda lights the
candle,joins her hands and close her eyes,"Oh
Jesus!My treasured thanks to you.Thanks for
sending that two angels who took Princess
Riddhima along with them.I just want you to
bless my fairy.Send your Holy Spirit everyday to
lead and guide her to her eternal life.I am sure
you will always assist her in grace,wisdom and
love.May she serves her whole heart to you as
she is your treat.I know she loves you.Please
help those to people Lord to hold tightly on this
innocent child.May she discover the joy of your
relationship daily and you raise this child for the
glory of your and her parents' faith.In Jesus'
name I pray.Amen"Mathilda opened her eyes and
fresh pearly tears were escaped from them.She
again closed them and whispered,"Bless you my
child.My fairy.You are in safe hands."Now a smile
played on her lips and cleared her tears with her
soft palms.
Ridhima was brought to India.Flight had boarded
on Mumbai's Airport.Madhura was carrying
Riddhima in her folded arms and looked
sterned.On asking the reason by Aadarsh,she
exhibited concern about the reaction of her
mother-in-law towards their newly adopted
child.Aadarsh consoled her somewhat and went
to borrow a taxi but her austere imagined
everything.And for their bad luck,the consistent
thing happened at their home."Who is this girl
Aadarsh?"Her mother-in-law asked specifically
attending her son and daughter-in-law.Aadarsh
and Madhura characterized the whole story how
they got her along with a fear of rejection of this
beautiful princess by their mother."How could
you get an orphan in our house?""Please Biji,she
is not an orphan anymore.She is our
daughter.Our child.She would complete the
dilemma of our Mukta.We have adopted
her."Aadarsh opposed."Ohh then this child will
refill our hearts with the love as Mukta did to all?
Sorry,I can not give my Mukta's place to
anyone."
"But Biji what is the point of being wrong?Yes we
know that Mukta was our darling and she would
be always.Isn't it a noble reason to adopt her,to
help her growing?"Madhura sobbed and Biji
defied her exhibitting her palm."Enough!
Thousand people die everyday and thousands of
children become orphan each day.So your
words meant that we should adopt everyone and
look after them till they donot die.Had this
become the noble occupation of beings to assist
these orphans to succeed?""Biji,I would only say
one thing to you.After that what I'd respect your
every decision.A mother's and a daughter's
relation is the most sacred even it is physical or
physcological.My Mukta left me,I was quite.I
forgot the meaning of life two years ago.I met
this angel.I don't know why but her innocence
created a new wish in me."
What does a mother-daughter love look like? She
explained through her eyes.How?Don't know.I
had the eyes to see misery and want in her. I had
the ears to hear her sighs,cries and sorrows. That
is what it is.(She fell down on her grandmother's
feet joining her hands)Please Biji,horrible had
come to me when my Mukta left me but now I
will die for sure,if MY Riddhima would left me.She
needs a mother and this mother needs a
daughter.So whats wrong in doing a kind and the
greatest extra-ordinary action?Whats wrong in
calling someone's princess my soul?Whats
wrong in giving my motherly love to someone?
Whats wrong?"Madhura sobbed and sobbed.Biji
thought for a while and agreed to accept
Riddhima.Smile was not leaving Madhura's face
for a single shake and hugged her mother-in-
law.Biji smiled and kissed her forehead and
left.Now Madhura took Riddhima in her arms and
kissed all over face.She smiled and hugged her
crushing Riddhima's ribs when the little heart
wiped off her tears with her tiny hands.
New morning came with a new beginning, a new
struggle in Riddhima's life.As she woke up,the
very first word from her mouth
was,"Mumma!!".Tiny salted tears escaped from
her eyes remembering "Wake up my
fairy!"Aaliyah kisses her daughter in
bed.Riddhima rubs her eyes smilingly and
then hugged her mother."My baby is so
innocent.Love you fairy.""Riddhima loves
mumma."Aaliyah kisses her on her
forehead,"Okay let me help you brush
first"Riddhima nodded
negatively."Hmm...my angel does not like
to brush?"She again gave negative
response."Okay as you wish.But don't
complain when the black monsters will
attack your milky teeth"Aaliyah said lifting
her brows up."Monsters!!??""Hmm,""Hah!!
What will they do?""Aaa... they will eat up
your this rabbit teeth"She said pointed
towards her teeth,"add will take it along
them in a dark cave.And then Riddhima will
be like?"She asked her.Riddhima was
almost afraid and displaced to washroom
saying,"No! I'll brush"Aaliyah smiled.
Madhura entered the room smilingly,"So the little
angle had waken up already?Hmm?"But soon her
smile was transformed to a rough curve with the
frown on her forehead,"Baby what happened?
Why are you crying?"She said cupping her face
and settling besides Riddhima on bed."I miss
mum.I am missing her having to talk with me
since yesterday.Where is my daddy?Here is my
bun bun nanny?Where is mum?"Hearing this
teary Madhura wrapped her up in a tight
hug,"Baby your mom is here,I am your
mum.Talk to me.I am always there for you."She
kissed Riddhima's forehead."Wherever she is she
is with you ever.In the rain,In the morning,In the
evening,day,night.Whenever Wherever,she is
with you always.And I am also there to stand for
you.Bless you baby.I love you little
heart."Riddhima smiled at I love you as Aaliyah
used to say her and hugged her back,"Riddhima
loves mumma" Madhura smiled and was
surprised at being called mumma by her when
she held her finger"Mumma,let you help me
brush my teeth"And she talked and talked.
After helping her in brushing and
bathing,Madhura left for the kitchen.Riddhima
was roaming around the hall and then she saw a
small temple in their home.Then she
remembers,"Angel,now we will pray for
us."Aaliyah brought Riddhima in their temple
where they had hung all the four signs of god-
Cross,Ohm,Allah and Ik onkar along with their
holy books."Mom God also reads books?"No
baby,these are holy books.Aan,you will learn
when you will grow up a little
okay."One,two,three,four,Yes four Gods.We will
pray each one differently?"No baby God is
supreme.I have marked all the signs together on
the wall at the same level to describe that same
God is worshipped by every religion.When you
will turn a little more older then I will explain you
the meaning of all the books and after that you
will conclude that these teachings has only one
meaning that God is one."Tell me now."Riddhima
pouted."You are only one and half baby."No,I am
older enough.I am hundred and half."Aaliyah!
Where are you?"Heman screamed.
"Have you turned deaf Aaliyah!!""Not yet Heman,I
am here,come"she also screamed.
"Here means where Aaliyah?"Hah..Heman in the
praying room."Oh I see"He entered and took his
darling daughter in his embrace and kissed her
wishing her the best morning."Okay dear father
and daughter if your morning is going well.Shall
we do the morning prayer?"Aaliyah said folding
her arms."Your mum is hitler"Heman whispered
in Riddhima's ear and she giggled."Pardon(In
French excuse me means Pardon)What is the
point of giggling here?"There is mum"Quoi?
(What?)"Aaliyah interrogated."Pas grand chose
Aaliyah(Nothing much Aaliyah)! Shall we worship
now?I am getting late."Hmm" and three of them
prayed."Mom,why we all pray this prayer
everyday?"Aah,to demand strength for us from
God."Heman replied walking towards the dining
with Riddhima in her arms."Why?We all drink
milk.And milk gives us strength.Whats the matter
of demanding it?"Riddhima pouted and put her
one hand under her chin.
After recollecting the memories she saw the
same sign of Ohm in the temple and she sits and
joining her hands started praying,"Dear Lord, I
pray that you would give me strength to be
strong for You in the world today. Lord, you
know the struggles that I will face today. Be with
me as I go through them. Carry me if I am too
weak to move. If I stumble in them, forgive me
Father. When I succeed in them, I will praise You!
You are worthy of all praise and honor. I love
you Jesus.Amen. "She opened her eyes and
smiled.She was taken aback by the humourous
voice of Biji,"Hey Shiva!This girl is Christain!Why
haven't I died before facing this?"She did drama
cursing her ears and closing it with her both
hands and looking upwards."Bring Gangajal,my
home has turned into an unpivous place."Hearing
her cries Aadarsh and Madhura came there
asking,"What happened Biji?"What happened
Aadarsh?Ask me what had not happened?She
prays in English.She is a Christian."What is wrong
in this Biji?"
"Wrong Aadarsh?You are asking me about the
wrong?"Yes I am."Biji frowned at him,"She prays
in English.She is a Christian.She might eat Chicks
and fishes and in our religion it is not
prohibited."You are saying about prohibtion Biji?
Prayer does not change God but it changes him
who prays.I think this was your Shiva who tell us
na?"Bravo my son,you are arguing with me for
her religion?"Biji you are over reacting."He
stopped in between when Riddhima
concluded,"God is one."All were shocked hearing
this from a two year old girl."My mum told me
God is supreme.SameGod is worshipped by
every religion.When I will grow old she will tell
me the meanings of the all holy books whose
meanings will be concluded by only one
phrase."Which phrase Riddhima?"Biji asked."God
is one."To us there is only one God,only father
whom we all are made offf."She smiled while
reciprocating the samelines of her mother and the
eyes of three of them were moistened."See
Biji,She is just two and knows the real meaning
of holy teachings."
"And you are the older of us all still your all
satsangs and faith in religion is a big zero.(He
turns to Riddhima then)Do you know the
meaning of prayer you do?"No"She replied and
thinks about that morning again,"Ah,Darling,yes
we all drink and no doubt we are strong
eternally.But the point is to being strong
internally.And who gives this strength?The prayer
which we do every morning."Aaliyah laughed
while settling down next to Riddhima serving her
flakes."Why are you laughing?"Heman you are
explaining her the internal and eternal
strength.Have you realised her confused reaction?
Haha everything is passing straight from her
mind"Vraiment(Really)?"Heman asked and looked
at Riddhima and made a cute face seeing his
daughter."Aaliyah you know na I am poor at
these teachings to kids,so."He shrugged his
shoulders."Me vous in quietez pas (Don't worry).I
will explain her.Riddhima you areso young and
sometimes I get scare of you having extra mind,
the god gave you but anyways.I am proud of
you."
"Don't talk worth mum.Explain"She
ordered."Haaww!!I am praising you and its not
worth to you."Mum please."Okay okay my
baby,Hmm the prayer we do in the morning is all
about strengthas your daddy explained before,so
that the mercy Jesus will give us all the strength
and faith that would make us powerful and
everready to meet our agenda and goal in life.So
this is about internal strength we need to face this
difficult and puzzled world with strength.And that
is why I told your bunny nanny to take you with
her everyday to church so that father will teach
you more Strengthful thoughts"She stressed on
Strength."Wow!But how the father will make me
internally strong?How he will help it?"Darling
baby,see this world is our family.Father would tell
you there to do good with everyone because it is
our religion and doing good will surely help you
out to meet the internal strength and your
goal."But..."Before shecould complete her parents
looked at each other and
shouted,"Help...Mathildaaa!!
Riddhima remembered everything and
started"But mom said,It is for strength,So that
Jesus would give me all the power and faith to
meet my agenda,to meet my goal in life."All were
confused seeing Riddhima quite for a while and
suddenly she uttered the bliss"Are you
sure?"Madhura interrogated and she
nodded."How?"Father said this world is my
family and doing good with them all is my
religion.This will allow Jesus for surely help me
out.In return I have to help people."She smiled
and went to her room."Oh my God,This girl is so
much mature at this age of just two."Exactly
Aadarsh.How a little girl can understand the
truthful statements at the very small
age?"Madhura envied.Biji was all in tears,"She can
be Madhura.This girl has awaken me in just few
minutes.This is child of God.So pivous,and I am
sure her parents would be the most nicest and
carbon of her.We will help her in her life.She is
our Mukta.She is our Mukta."She cried & Madhura
and Aadarsh hugged her."We told you Biji,We
told you,she is our Mukta"
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Hehe..." Atleast you all viewed" 😛 ... Hey don't worry,viewers will comment one day for sure... 😃 ... I loved your signature girl... Take care... And best of luck... 😉
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Pratibha di..

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