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Posted: 19 years ago
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Gauri , O, Gauri,
Apne piya sang...
Nain ladaye chori chori...

Aur use pata na chala
Tujhse se band gayi
Hai uske jeevan ki dor..
Yuhin chori chori...

Tere nainon se
Nikle aasooon
Pati pe tere
Pad gaye bhaari...
Kaan pakad ke usne
Maang bhi li sorry..!!!!

Suniye .. Pukaar ke
Rok leti hai use...tu
Jab bhi wo nikle kahin
Bhool ke apni
Cheezen in a hurry....
Iskeliye wo rahega..
Tera abhaari...

Apne whistle aur naache se
Hairaaan kar diya hai tune
Use o chori...

Par ye kya...
Chala tha sudharne wo
Tujhse seekhar
Not to rush in a hurry

Aur ab tujhe lag gayi
Bimaari
Bina baat sune
Bhaagne ki in a hurry...

Kehne aaya tha apni
Dil ki baat tujhse
Aaj hi...
Aur aaj hi karni thi
Tumhe ye bhaaga daudi...

Tera aashiq bhi
Kuch kam nahin...
Dil ki baat
Deewaaron se
Thodi na kehte hai..
Saathi se palat kar
Bina dekhe yunhi...

Hai rabba, ab tere kya
Hoga o chori...
Chore ki tho mat hi gayi
Hai maari
Ab teri akal ka sahara hai
Kuch tho kar Gauri!!

-Sareeta 😆

- For Shiv and Gauri , based on 23rd Nov Episode...

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Really liked it...😃..thanks for sharing with us👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sudden fickle in shiv's opinion doubting gauri darling's feeling for him... as usual very well written sareeta.... Clarity and poise of the thoughts were maintained too well...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saregama_fan

Really liked it...😃..thanks for sharing with us👏

Thank you soooooooooooooo much! The pleasure is all mine to be able to share it with members here and have a nice time here !!!😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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You should have a sticky topic, it anoying if you open each time a new topic for you post.. with a sticky topic you can post all you're poems over there.. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geeglu

sudden fickle in shiv's opinion doubting gauri darling's feeling for him... as usual very well written sareeta.... Clarity and poise of the thoughts were maintained too well...
😛 🤗

Awwww , thank you so much Geeglu Ji!! I am so glad you enjoyed the post so much and found it nice.😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwww !!!! thtss tremendous !! simplyyy great !! wonderful !
Thnsx hun ! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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THank you so much Samiera!!!! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Samiera

You should have a sticky topic, it anoying if you open each time a new topic for you post.. with a sticky topic you can post all you're poems over there.. 😊

THannk you so much really for thekind words Samiera! Its an honor indeed to know that ones posts are considered good enought to be a sticky ! I am humbled by your thought! 😊

As for the sticky , I am not the right person to take a call dear friend! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: $h@aq...

awwww !!!! thtss tremendous !! simplyyy great !! wonderful !
Thnsx hun ! 😛
👏 👏 👏

Thank you sooooooooooooooooooo much!!! 😊

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