STORY: KANOON KI KHILAFH MUJHRIM - Page 6

Originally posted by: Bhavanab

Finally read this and I must say I quite liked it 😃 ..

THANKS!!

Some of those domestic violence and stuff made me feel like it was an inspiration from Khoon Bhari holi but nothing else was similar so I am glad 😃

I felt Diya and Aina could've been better utilised though .. Thankfully I am well introduced to those characters 😆 .. so no confusions in that aspect !!

😆 The thing is so many people here are not used to them yet- all nearly new! so prevented a few heart attacks!!😆 and some are jealous of them too😉

A really good story for such a short time frame I must say 😃

and yes ... amongst all storywriter IMO .. no one can write better about Abhijeet than you do ..

😳 Gosh how sweet!!

I wait for your stories to see how you write about Abhijeet ... I could imagine him looking into the mirror, whistling and combing his hair ... and I could Imagine that if that was incorporated into a case on tv .. we would have some 100 emoticons on IF the next day !!

LOLZ I love writing about him... non stop!!😆 If I made him a romanntic hero, there wud have been a million all over! I love to explore this character and his detective skills...😃

the way you incorporated the child track was nice ..I always like CID with a kids oriented episode
and thank you for duo investigation moments !!! TV pe nahi toh stories mein hi sahi ..

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Originally posted by: Bhavanab

Some of those domestic violence and stuff made me feel like it was an inspiration from Khoon Bhari holi but nothing else was similar so I am glad

Originally posted by: visrom

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