SWARON OS: Mr. Mahaan Shekhwat

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey!!! Guys we r back….Parinda with our fourth attempt……..

Storyline: At present Swaron are engaged just a month ago n everyone is official couple n Vicky and Neha are married two months ago….Festivals are in the air and the most 'hot' upcoming festival is KARVA CHAUTH……

The whole gang is at Sharon's place…Boys sittin at one place n girl's at another in the same hall….

Boys remembering that Karva Chauth is upcoming…….(so intentionally they tease all the gals)

Vicky: Guyzzz muje …kuch… yaad ..aya!!!!

Rey: Kyaaa yaad aya tuje Vicky???

Swayam: Kya hua guyzzz…..aise cheekh(shout) kyu rahe ho…..

Nil: Yar tu chup reh na……hum jo kehte or krte hain bass ha mein haa milata ja…..

Amar: Alle kalva chauth aa laha hai na…….

Everyone: Kya???

Swayam: Uske kehne ka matlabb hai ki karva chauth aa rha hai….

Everyone: ohhh…….

Rey: Kya Swayam ……..(intentionally) zara jor se toh bol na…….

Swayam: Tum log bhi na…..guysss kyu inn sabb gals ko pareshan kar rhe ho……

Bharat: Ha-Ha tere case mein toh ulta hai hai….vo tuje pareshan krti hai……

Swayam: Dekh tera zyada ho rha hai……

Rey: Rehne de na Swayam……

Neha(shouting): Babu!!!!!!!!!!! Two days after…..karva chauth happening……kagu's frst karva chauth….keeping vrat(fast) for babu!!!!

Simmi: Neha …..u believe in all this…

Rinni: Ya …..all this is crap…..Hai na Sharon!!!

Sharon(hesitatingly): Ha…..hm…….mai kya bolu guysss…….

Kriya: Ha kya zarurat hai in idiots ke liye vrat rakhne ki…..jeena toh utna hi…..

Swayam(stands): Ha Kriya!!!! Mai bhi toh yahi keh rha hun…….zarurat hi kya hai…..ek vrat se kisi ka pyar prove nhi hota!!!

(all boys looking at Swayam in anger)

All the boys: Swayam!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tu baith…….

(in between Sharon's phone rings…..n the caller was Swayam's mom(Mansi) …….)

Sharon: Hello……oops Jai shri Krishna aunty…..

Mansi: Hello beta….Jai Shri Krishna…..au kya kaha tumne….aunty nhi bachche…..mumma bolo na….

Sharon: Ya aunty….oops mumma…..

Mansi: Beta maine Swayam ke hath jo messageaur samaan bhijwaya tha tumhe mila….Swayam toh iske against hai lekin maine bhej hi diya…..

Sharon: Kya mumma????

Mansi: Vo beta karva chauth ki sargi hai…..jabb mile tabb call krna….

Sharon: K mumma(cuts d call)

Sharon(to herself): Lagta hai Swayam nhi chahta ki mai vrat rakhun…..but uske chahne se kya hota hai …..mai ye fast zaroor rakhungi….Swayam ke liye…….afterall I am Sharon raiprakash and wud be Sharon Swayam Shekhawat……(n den blushes hard)

(Sharon enters the hall….where every couple was fighting)

Sharon: Guyzzz…….(no one paying attention to her)Guyzzz……jise bhi ladna hai mere ghar se bahar jakar lado…..go!!!

(everyone starting to leave……n meanwhile : )

Sharon: Mr. Swayam Shekhawat…..stay back….

Swayam: huh….???

Sharon: S-t-a-y b-a-c-k!!!!

Nil: Gimme the beat guysss….

Doom doom pak…..ddoom doom pak….

Sharon asked Swayam ….to stay back

Layegi ye uski lyf ..on the right track……

Tab takk ke liye hum sab chalte hain vid our bags pack!!!!

Doom doom pak…..ddoom doom pak….

Simmi: cum on…..Nil….ab chalo yahan se……..

(everyone leave)

Swayam: Kya hua Sharon…..aise roka kyu????

Sharon(in full diva tone pointing her finger): Hey….don't try to act smart……jao aur car se job hi mumma ne mere liye bheja hai vo lekar aao…..tum mere gifts aise hi vaapas nhi le ja sakte…..

Swayam: Nhi Sharon…..aisa nhi hai….bass main hi chahta ki tum mere liye koi stupid sa vrat rakho……

Sharon: Oh….ye sari rituals tumhe stupid lagti hain…..fir shaadi hi kyun kar rhe ho……vo bhi ek stupid ritual hi toh hai……

Swayam: Oh…….m sorry madame……tumse jeetna is……impossible……my fault….mai abhi saara samaan lekar aata hoon (n leaves)

Sharon(happily to herself): Wao….my first karva chauth will be fun!!!

(Swayam brings the gifts Sharon asked…..n hands over to her)

Swayam: Ye lo tumhara samaan……..chalo bye……or haan Sharon….

Sharon: What???

Swayam: (INNOCENTLY cups her face) Agar tum ye vrat na rakh pao na den please don't……..mere liye ya meri lyf ke liye aise sacrifices mat krna……

Sharon(placing her hands on his lips): Tumhe kisne kaha ki mai ye sab tumhare liye kar rhi hoon…..ye sab toh mai apni lyf ke liye karr rhi hoon..Bcoz without SWAYAM there's no SHARON……..buddhu!!!!

Swayam (placing a kiss on her forehead): Love you……

Sharon: Love u tooo…..but ab jao….mujhe mumma ko phone krke sabb kuch poochna bhi hai….

(n Swayam leaves)

ON THE KARVA CHAUTH DAY……..

(morning 4:00 a.m.)

Sharon callin Swayam:

Swayam(without chekin d caller ID): Hello……(half asleep)

Sharon: To hell with ur hello……kahan ho tum????? Mai itni der se tumhe call kr rhi hu…….mujhe bhookh lag rhi hai…….

Swayam(innocently): Toh mai kya karu……..???? Ramu kaka ko bolo na tumhe kuch khane ko dein….aur vaise tumhe iss tym parr bhook kyu lag rhi hai?????

Sharon: U idiot!!!! Bhool gye na…..aj KARVA CHAUTH hai…..aur meri sargi kahan hai?????

Swayam: apne peeche dekho………(Sharon luks back n sees Swayam hanging on the window)

Sharon: Oh…..damn….tum yahan…..ab toh official engagement bhi ho gyi……darwaze se nhi aa skte the kya……

Swayam: Agar darwaze se aa jata toh tumhare muh ke ye expressions nhi miss kr deta………….(winks his eye)

(Swayam feeds Sargi to his fiance by his own hands n both embrace each other)

Karva Chauth Eve

(Everyone in Vicky's home except Sharon n Swayam n they all complete the pooja n wait foe the moon 2 cum)

Nil: Guys…..ye humara newly engaged couple kahan reh gaya……

Kria: Arre Sharon vaise hi inn sab rituals ko nhi manti…..aur ab toh Swayam bhi iss sabke against tha……toh may not bhi coming…….na

Vicky: Arre nhi guysss…..yaad nhi hai Sharon ne Swayam ko kaise roka tha……(waving there hands like:"CHEMISTRY")

Neha: Babu….saying correct……

Amar: Ale haan yaal….ye toh humne socha hi nhi tha……

Rinni: Nhi…Sharon does not believe in all this……

Rey: Ye toh ab vahan jaakar hi pata chalega…..

Everyone: Haan-Haan…….

On SHARON'S TERRACE

Sharon n Swayam standing infront of each other, Sharon holding sieve( channi) in her hands and seeing the moon while Swayam holding her "thali" n then the other moment she sets eyes on Swayam through that sieve(channi)…..n then all it was HAWA-HAWA….LUK-LUK……n suddenly Sharon says:

Sharon: Ab kab takk yuhin dekhte rahoge!!!raat ho rhi hai……

Swayam: Tumhe dekhte-dekhte toh mai apni poori lyf bita sakta hoon…..toh phir ye raat kya cheez hai!!!

(n Sharon haves a sip of water by Swayam's hands and then a bite of the food too……Sharon doing all the riruals and as soon as she bends to touch SWAYAM'S feet….the gang enters…….)

Everyone coughing intentionally…

Rey: Kyu ab ye… sabb kya ho rha hai!!!!!!!!!!!

Bharat: Abbe Swayam tu sabko toh gyaan de rha tha ki vrat nhi rakhna aur khud hi yahan………….

Simmi: Ya Sharon……

Sharon(TO HERSELF): kya bolu-kya bolu……(to the gang)Vo guysss mujhe mumma ne bola tha…..

Kria: Mumma???

(everyone confused)

Swayam: My mom!!!

Everyone: Oh….OH……mummaaa……..

Swayam(diverting the topic): Guysss….chalo na bhookh lag rhi hai…..

Vicky: Haan bhookh toh bohot lagi hai…..

Amar: Chalo…..sabbb…….

(Swayam by-chance forgets his phone on the terrace only……n everyone except Sharon leave)

(Swayam's phone rings n Sharon receives the call)

Mansi(Swayam's mom): Hullo…..Swayam beta tune kuch khaya ke nahi…..pehli baar aise bhooka reh raha hai….

Sharon: Mumma ap ye sabb kya bol rhe ho?

Mansi: Beta tum!!!!!

Sharon: G……But ap abhi kya keh rhe the????

Mansi: Vo beta Swayam ne bhi tumhare liye vrat rakha hai……use batana mat ke maine tumhe bataya aur……baki tum usi se pooch lo(disconnects)

Sharon: H-hello……..

…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

(Sharon's dining room)

Nil: Wao….kitna sara khana hai…..

Vicky: Haan yarr maza aa jayega….

Neha: Babu feeding kagu n kagu feeding babu…..hain na babu……

Bharat: Pani kahan hai????

Swayam: Mai le aata hoon…..

Kria: Nhi Swayam tum khao, mai lekar aati hoon…..

Swayam: Arre nhi……mai le aata hoon na…..

Simmi: Swayam u don't worry…..it's just a matter of water…..hum le ate hain….

Swayam: Koi baat nhi guysss….mai le aata hoon…..

(everyone a li'l bit confused by Swayam's behavior)

(Sharon enters)

Sharon: Guysss…..where's Swayam???

Neha: Swayam going inside bringing water……

Sharon: Tum logo ne mere fianc ko pani lene bhej dia……

Rinni: No Sharon hum logo ne bohot mana kia….but vahi itna insist karr rha tha….

Sharon: Just kidding Rinni!!!

(meanwhile Swayam enters , holding a jug of water)

Sharon: Aa gye tum……

Swayam: Yesss…..

Sharon: ab kuch lo na……(n gives him lots of pooris, sabzi n sweetdish…….)

(Swayam resisting to eat…..n Rey n Sharon noticed the same)

Rey: Arre Swayam tu kha kyu nhi raha…..????

Swayam: Yarr….subah se itna kha liya ke pet(stomach) bhar gya…….

Sharon: (innocently)Oh…..really….lekin mere ghar bhi kuch nhi khaoge????

Swayam : nhi Sharon bilkul bhookh nhi hai…..

(everyone noticed the same n insisting him to eat)

Sharon: Vo nhi khayega…….

Everyone in chorus: Lekin kyun??????

Sharon: (in full diva tone) The great SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT jinhone mahaan banne ka theka (reponsibilty) liya hua hai, vo akele mujhe ye credit kyun lene denge…..!!!!

Everyone: Matlabb….????

Sharon: Swayam ne bhi mere liye vrat rakha hai!!!

(Swayam shocked n had his moth wide open)

Sharon: Kya hua Mr. Shekhawat?????ab yeh soch rahe ho ki mujhe kaise pata chala…….

Swayam: Vo Sharon……vo….

Nil: Doom doom pak…..ddoom doom pak….

Swayam ne bhi rakha hai Sharon ke liye fast…..

Ye sun ke ho gyi hai Sharon blast…..

Yaad ayega ye future mein as their past!!!

Doom doom pak…..ddoom doom pak….

Kria: Wao….Swayam kitna achcha hai…..Rey kuch toh seekho……

Simmi: Ya Nil…..see Swayam…..

Neha: Babu also not fasting for Kagu……..hm…hm….hm….

Rey: Tum ladkiyon ko bhi na mauka chahiye….ye toh dekho vo bechaara bhooka hai…..

Everyone:Ya…..haan haan……

(Rey holds Sharon's arm and Kria Swayam's arm n both take the couple on the terrace…..n the gang following)

Sharon: Guyss….tum hume yahan kyu laye ho????

Swayam: Haan!!!

Rey: Ab job hi pooja Sharon ne ki….vo tu karr!!!

Swayam: Kya!!!

Kria: G ….haan….

Sharon: But!!!

Rey: No if….no but….keep ur mouth shut!!!!!!!!!!

(den Swayam sees Sharon through the sieve n then Sharon feeds Swayam in front of the moon as if the moon is the evidence of their never ending love…….and then the couple have a tight hug……happily…….as if enjoying every moment of their FIRST KARVA CHAUTH…..!!!!)

By (Parul+Vrinda)= Parinda

PS: Hope guysss…..u all lykd it…..vasie we also loved it…..n plzzz….plzzz…..plzzz…..do hit a lyk!!!!!(all criticisms accepted)

Our works:

1) Jab pyar kia toh darrna kya(Sharon is back)

2) Swaron Os: Swaron n their towel

3) SWARON OS: Pickle tale

4) dis one only!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice OS.. Karva chaut concept is nice.. Sharon fasting 4 swayam and viceversa nice..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the OS...

Swayam is so cute in this..he kept karva chaut for sharon
Rey and Kriya made swayam do all the rituals which sharon did 🤣
One hell of cute OS..loved Nil's Rap 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ausum OS...👏
Sharon fasting 4 swayam and viceversa nice dat was cute.. kriyansh made swayam do all d rituals dat sharon did..
Liked nil's rap both d times..

do write more..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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[SIZE=4]finally pad Liya dude I hope .ki ab tu mujhse gussa nhi hogi I know .ki tu chahti Thi .ki main Oki bout bars comment Likhon par Kay karun aadat nhi h but fir bhi try karti hoon [/SIZE
Now coming to the Os karvachauth hMmm vry interesting mujhe bahut psand hai it was t9ooo good so sweet swayam also kept the fast Sharon swayam shekhawat was sooo cute so just awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was gud...liked nil's rap d most...dat was hilarious😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sweeettt OS...Luved it ❤️ ❤️

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