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-Scene. Rubal, Sheila, Anuj are all sitting down in their room-
Rubal: We have to do something. This Adi, is taking over everything mom. Business. Power. Everything. Him and his cunning wife Pankhuri think they can solve every worlds mystery.
Sheila: Calm down Rubal behta. You are smart, something will click in your brain. Just give it some time.
Rubal: *In his thoughts*-I have to do something, something that will forever impact everyones lives. *Smiles cunningly*
Sheila:*Staring at him* Kya sotcha behta?
Rubal: Mom. meina asah plan sotcha heh that Adi, Pankhuri will be left breathless. *Laughs*
Sheila: *Confused* Lekin beta aap kar neh valeh kya hoh?
Rubal: You will see mom, you will see.
Anuj: Tell us at least.
Rubal:*Grabs his phone, and dials a number*...Hello? Hi! Sid, how are you yaar?...
Sid: Get to the point Rubal. I haven't got time for extra buqwas. Just tell me what the hell you want and i will name my price.
Rubal: Fine fine. Teek heh, extra baateh bund. Meina kis-ee ka katil (murder) kar naa heh. Voh be jald seh jald.
*Sheila listening in the background looks at Anuj in Shock*
Sheila: Aye Baapre! Yeh be din dekhana taa bagwaan jee? Mehra behta katil? *Going hysterical*
Rubal: Oh just shut up mom! You will thank me later..Anyway sorry Sid. So does that seem doable or what?
Sid: Of-course. Why not. Mehreh aadmee, won't do it for any less than 1 lakh. Sumjeh tum.
Rubal: *Shocked* 1 lakh? Kya? *Pauses and thinks for a moment*...Fine teek heh. Paleh kaam toh kar doh. Toh fir sub paseh mill jaye geh.
Sid: No, no Rubal. Paseh first. Fir tumhara kaam. Understand?
Rubal: *Annoyed but agrees* Teek heh. *Shuts the phone*
*Sheila goes up to Rubal and starts fuming at him, Exclaiming why couldn't he think of a better plan than too kill Adi-Pankhuri. Shes screaming at how insane he is.*
Rubal: Mom, meina bohla naa. You will thank me for this later.

-Scene- Adi, Pankhuri are in their car driving. Just having a general chat.
Adi: Yaar, im so happy today! You know why?
Pankhuri: Why? Whats so great about today?
Adi: Nothing *smirks*
Pankhuri: *confused* Nothing? Then why did you say-
Adi: *Cuts her sentence* Just yaar. Today i feel happy. Is that a sin now?
Pankhu: No. But Adi, i dont know why i dont feel the same. I feel like something bad is going to happen. Ive had that feeling since morning. And here you are feeling so happy.
Adi: Look, just learn to be happy. Don't worry about "feelings" nothings happened. Or is happening and neither is it going to happen ok. So just be happy.
Pankhu: Its not that easy getting rid of a bad feeling you know.
Adi: Oh really now? *Smiles, stops the car and gives Pankhuri a kiss on the cheek*
Pankhu: *Blushing*
Adi: So hows that feeling now? Or should i carry on kissing you till you dont even know what feelings are? *Laughs*
Pankhu: *Smiles* Aap be naa! Suchi mein!
Adi: *Looking in his wing mirror* Yaar, i dont know why but for about a good 20 minutes now I've been noticing that car has been following us.
Pankhu: *Looks* Really?

-Suddenly Adi's car breaks down. The car following them was Rubals-plan in action. And Adi's car breaking down was a part of it. 4 guys, holding metal rods exit the car. They surround it. Initiating Adi and Pankhuri to get out. Adi looks at Pankhuri who is tense. He puts his hand on hers and says-

Adi: You stay here. I will see what they want. *He exits the car*
-One of the guys (Arjun) grabs Adi's phone, and pushes him against the car. They grab the car keys. Seeing Adi in threat Pankhuri gets out. Exclaiming what they want. They say how they stole everything from their beloved Rubal. The guys surround Pankhuri and Adi-
Adi: Don't any of you dare touch my wife. *angrily*
-One of the guys (Sameer) starts gazing at Pankhuri. Running his hand down her hair-
Sameer: Vaa, yeh toh kitnee khoobsoorat heh.
-Adi grows annoyed and punches sameer. He grabs Pankhuri's hand and pushes the other guys out of the way-
Adi:*Screaming* BAAHHGG PANKURI BAAHGH!!
-The 4 guys are chasing after them-
-Adi and Pankhuri run into a massive jungle. There running and running. Breathless. Tired, hot, exhausted. They can see the guys behind them-
Adi: Yaar jitnee takhat heh naa, bahg neh mein nakal deh. Yaar hum koh batch na hoh gaa.
Pankhu: *Her leg gets cut by a tree branch as her dupatta gets caught* Aaah! *In pain*
Adi: *See's the cut in her leg. Blood pouring out. Adi rips her dupatta from the tree branch, and see's she can't run since she's in pain. He picks her up and starts running*
-After a while-
Pankhu: Adi, its ok i can run. You're gonna be tired.
Adi: Nay yaar. I can see your in pain.
Pankhu: Adi, stop! Please, its ok. How long are you going to carry me for? It's ok. Put me down.
Adi: *Puts her down* Yaar! Bahgg! *Adi can see the gondeh in the background still*
-Adi and Pankhuri start running again. They run into some bushes, and manage to lose the goons, they spot a cabin in the jungle and decide to reside their for the night until they can find a solution-
-The next morning, The goons have managed to track-down Adi and Pankhuri again as they see them leaving the cabin. This time they surround them. The gondeh grab Adi, and Hold back Pankhuri.-

Adi: *Screaming* Don't you dare touch my wife!!!
Sameer: *To Arjun* Yaar, yeh larki mehri baan jas-ee dik tee heh. Mein haat nay utah suk taa, uskeh oopar.
Arjun: *looks at him weirdly. What kind of person are you? A minute ago you were saying how beautiful she was now what happened? Rubal just wants Adi dead anyway. And nods* Hold her back.
-The goons, start attacking Adi. Beating him black and blue. Stealing all his belongings. Adi is struggling to fight back. He is hopeless, hanging on to life. Barley breathing-
Pankhuri: *Screaming and going crazy as she can't bare to see Adi being hurt like this. She struggles to get free from the gondeh, she's going frantic trying to escape from their grasp*
-Moments later, Adi is "dead" The gondeh smile and say how their work here is done. They run off-

Pankhuri: *Runs too Adi, screaming* Adi!!!! Adiii! OPEN YOUR EYES! You can't leave me like this. I can't live without you. You are my life. You can't just die. ADI PLEASE!!! Wake up. Please! I won't be able to live like this. Please Adi. *Shaking him* ADI! *Crying hysterically*
Adi: *Opens his eyes and slightly smiles* Yaar, how could i ever leave you? I just pretended being dead so that they would stop beating me up.
Pankhuri: *Hugs him and looks at his wounds. Blood pouring. She sees his pain, he tries to put on a brave front but she can see right through it. She takes off what was left of her torn dupatta and tires to stop the blood from his head*

-Meanwhile back at the Deewan Mansion. Its been 2 days and still no sign of Adi-Pankhuri. Rubal has been trying to get in touch with the goons to find out what happened. He finally connects-

Rubal: *Smiles* Wow! This is great! So you killed Aditya Kumar! Vaaa yaar! Vaa!

-Preeti maasi and Nanu are standing at Rubal's door. They heard everything-

-TO BE CONTINUED-
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice there should be more ff in this forum lovley work I will definatley read a continuation
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishah8

Very nice there should be more ff in this forum lovley work I will definatley read a continuation


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice...felt like seeing it...😊 Continue plz
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Many thanks.

Better than the show.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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heya..nice start..hope u continue soon..wating for the nxt part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anusha.cochin

Nice...felt like seeing it...😊 Continue plz



Wow wow, haha thanks so much. Really appreciate it 😃 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: hateme2

<font color="#0000FF"><font size="2">Many thanks.

Better than the show.</font>
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Haha, lol great compliment! 😃 Really appreciate it greatly 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you so much! 😊 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sushona

heya..nice start..hope u continue soon..wating for the nxt part..



Thank you so much! 😃 really appreciate it 😳

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