sequal to one hot episode ❤️

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys=) a lot of you aksed me to conitue with my " one hot episode" .... i was bored out of my mind so i started writin that episode ... i didnt even noe if wat i wrote even made any sense .... but i got soo many good comments from people that i was really happy nd still am =) thankx a lot for reading it .... a lot of you asked me to continue wit the story nd so here it is ....... 😃umm, for those who didnt read it, the link to it is given below .... do check it out if u have time =)

http://http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=46376 0

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suddenly gauri realizes her blouse dori has opened .... nd shiv realizes it too .... nd he lets her free as she has to tie it .... she strugles wit it while shiv is juss lookin at her sexy back .... he comes closer to her from behind nd wispers in her ears " main kar deta hoon" makin gauri feel even more uncomfortable as his lips almost touched her ears .... she doesnt say anything nd allows him to tighten it .... juss wen he put his hands on her bak to tie the dori, she lets out a slight jerk nd shiv notices this nd enjoys her uncomfortableness .... he has a naughty smile on his face nd asks her " kya hua?' again wipsersing in her ear from behind .... nd gauri can feel his breaths nd gets even more uncomfortable shiv notices all this nd the episode ends on shiv wen he gives a naughty smile to her....

sequal starts here :

gauri's body was still in a turmoil from that touch of shiv's hand on her bak .... shiv was enjoying her shyness nd her trembling .... he finished tying her dori nd gauri thanked him for his help .... shiv gave her a little smile ..... soon the party was over nd it was the time to go home.... the weather outside was very nice,, it was drizzling a bit nd was a little windy... gauri loved such weather but shiv totally hated it .... as they were walking towards their car,, gauri asked shiv " hum car mein hotel vapis jayenge?" shiv relpied "nahin, hawa mein ud kar jayenge" gauri realised she had asked him a dumb question nd she lowered her eyes.... shiv realised gauri felt bad nd he started apologizing " wo... woh gauri .... IM SORRY, mera tumhe naraaz karne ka maksad nahin tha, i was just joking" gauri cudnt believe that a stone-hearted man like shiv was saying sorry to her... gauri said " nahi shiv, mujhe bilkul bura nahin laga" shiv asked " to phir tum achanak se udaas kyun ho gayi " gauri says " nahin to, aise koi baat nahin hain" shiv says "i noe gauri i have always given pain to you,, hurted you a lot, nd thats y u dont want to tell me right" gauri cudnt believe wat shiv was telling her she kept staring at him lovingly .... shiv continued saying " yeh such hai gauri ke main tumse pyar nahin karta par yeh bhi such hai ke main tumse nafrat bhi nahin karna chahta,, iss liye maine socha hum apne iss "unchahe rishte" to ek pyara sa naam de detein hain,, hum hamare is rishte ko DOSTI ka naam detein hain .... shiv put his hand out in front of gauri as a way of asking her if she will be his friend .... gauri was shocked with all his thoughts,, but she loved this new shiv nd slowly put her hand in his hand nd said "hain shiv main karoongi appse dosti" ... they both smile at eachother nd reach their car....

it began to rain heavily nd gauri loved it while shiv was like wat the hell? so much water? ..... gauri asked him " shiv, appse ek baat poochun" shiv said "haan poochon na" ... she said "kya hum paidal chalkar jaa saktein hain hotel tak" ..... shiv inside was like O god is she crazy, she wants to walk bak to the hotel in this horrendous weather... but he knew gauri was enjoying the weather nd just for her happiness, he said " haan, chalo walk kar ke chalte hain" gauri was in smiles .... he called the driver nd asked him to come nd pick up their car nd park it at their hotel.... gauri nd shiv started to walk,, they walked a little nd remained silent thinking bout eachother... gauri was thinking that shiv is not wat he looks like he is, but rather is a very nice and caring person.. on the other hand, shiv was like gauri is so nicee nd so preetyyy [ he remembered how she came down the stairs looking so pretty], he was asking himself why all of a sudden he didnt hate gauri? she was the same one who "ruined" his life,, so why all of a sudden he wanted to be her friend?? he didnt know the answer to all these questions nd was lost in his thoughts...

suddenly it started raining very hardly,, shiv tells gauri "chalo gauri, hum kahin ruk jatein hain", gauri didnt want to but just for his happiness she agreed to him.... they stand in the shelter wen all of a sudden gauri goes out in the rain, nd goes around in circles enjoying the rain all over her body.... shiv was just so amazed by the way she was enjoying the rain,, she was playing with the rain by taking the water in her hand nd throwing it up into the air... shiv was totally mesmerized by gauri's beauty.... he kept staring at her wet hair nd how her revealing saree was even more revealing now as the rain water made it stick to her body..... shiv cudnt close his eyelashes even for a moment as he was to amazed by gauri's beauty ..... gauri was in her own world wen all of a sudden she came bak to her senses nd realized her saree is sticking so close to her body that it is even more revealing now.... she immediately asked shiv to continue to walk as they had a few more minutes to cover... shiv said yea nd they continued walking .....

as they were walking down the street ,, there were guys who were staring at gauri nd her revealing body .... she felt very uncomfortable nd moved very close to shiv as a sign of showing them shes not alone so dont bother ...... but the stares she was getting from guys kept increasing as they continued to walk .... gauri was very uncomfortable .... shiv looked at her nd saw her face turned a little pale... he asked her "kya hua gauri" she said "kuch nahin" as she turned her head from side to side to see how many people were staring at her because she was looking so pretty hot and tempting [PHAT lol] .... shiv realised gauri wasnt feeling comfortable because of her revealing clothes ... he moved closer to gauri,, took off his jacket nd put it around gauri's shoulder <33 gauri cudnt believe shiv cud be so caring nd protective of her .... he told her "yeh pehenlo log tumhe dekh rahein hain" gauri gave shiv a smile nd kept the jacket on her shoulders .... among the many who were staring at her,, shiv was also one of them but gauri wasnt aware of this .... she told him "thankx shiv" as they continued to look at eachothers eyes .... then the lovey dovey staring started,, the background song was:

aisa lagta hain jo naa hua hone ko hain

aisa lagtaa hain hosh mere khone to hain

varna dil kyun dhadhaktaa

saasein kyun ruktein <33

there was a big thundersound nd gauri went straight into shiv's arms.... she was vey scared of them... she enjoyed the rain but she hated the lightening.... shiv felt his heart beat fast.... it felt so good to take this pretty lady in his arms ...... wen the lightening went away,, gauri realised how tightly she was hugging shiv nd slowly moved herself away from him .... she said sorry he said its fine.... they continues to walk wen there was another one,, she ran upto him again nd this time she was even more scared .... she didnt wanna look up nd so kept her face down..... wind was blowing hard,, her hair was flying all over her face,, shiv lovedd it nd slowly began to move the hair strands away from her hair,, gauri felt so shy but she loved it ..... shiv also was enjoyin gauri's hair nd her beauty .... soon they reached their hotel room.....

gauri went straight to the bathroom to change nd shiv was getting ready to go to bed ... gauri came out of the shower nd was bout to set up her bed on the floor wen shiv said " wo ... woh gauri tum bed par so sakti ho" gauri felt so happy that atleast he realises his mistakes.... she said "koi baat nahin, main neeche hi soo jayongi" he insisted her sleeping on the bed.... he said " nahi tum bed par so jao main sofe par so jayonga" she said " nahin shiv, hum dono ek hi bed par so jayenge" shiv gave her questioning looks... she told him "mera matlab hain mein iss kone me so jayongi app dusre koone main so jaayiga" he agreed.... they both go to sleep .....

next morning you cud see them sleeping really close to eachother .... shiv's hand was on top of gauri's hand ... he held it so tightly .... suddenly gauri woke up nd found herself very close to shiv,, she saw how he was holding on to her hand,, she loved it but slowly moved her hand away from his.... she goes to take a shower nd comes bak wearing a nice saree ... her hair is all wet nd she starts to dry it wit the towel .... shiv was sleeping on his side of the bed web he felt water drops on his face,, he opened his eyes nd the first thing he saw was gauri drying her hair .... he felt so happy to see gauri first thing in the morning ... he loved it how she was playing wit her hair.... gauri sees shiv staring at her from the mirror nd in the backgorund the music was:

miltein nigahein

dilon ki baat hoti hai

hoth khamosh reh tein hain

par sab kuch yeh kehtein hai

ye pyar ki boli hain

dilwaale hi samajhe hain <33

shiv got bak to reality nd said good morning to gauri nd went straight to the bathroom ... meanwhile gauri is trying to get her suitcase off from the top of their cupboard ... she stands on a stool, as is shaking a bit as the balance is not stable,,, all of a sudden she falls back nd is about to fall on the floor wen shiv comes from behind nd catches her is his arms .... she looks at him,, he looks at her nd he wispers in her ear "sambhal kar raha karo" gauri feels very shy .... he puts her down as is walking away wen she realizes something is pullin her bak ... she turns around to see that her saree pallu is stuck to shiv's coat button ... she moves closer to him nd both put their hands on the button at the same time to release it from the saree... just wen their hands touch eachother's hand both look straight into eachother's eyes .... shiv says sorry to her ,, she smiles a little as she feels very shy .... episode ends with them staring at eachother <33

woah that was even longer than the first one!! hopefully i didnt bore anyone nd even i did im very sorry ....

do tell me if you guys liked it or not =)

jassy <33

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Posted: 19 years ago
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😳

i am having a blushathon.. it was fab!!!!!!

please do continue it............. u could make it in to a ff!

that was wow!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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god.........i don't know if we'll be able to c this in the real show.......so let us enjoy here..........plz continue.......
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz...cont sooon..itz just awsum...i wished it realli happend but nowing our ekta madam...she's 2 evil 2 tink of tat..lol..😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was just wow 👏
plz continue soon 😳
u could turn it into a ff, i know for a fact ppl will love readin it 😳😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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no, i'm sure none of us got bored in the slightest sense!!! this was amazing yaar!!!!! do continue soon!!!!

Soha

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwwwwwww

im speechless...i dont kno wt to sayy...

it was awsome...very cute.. 😳

continue soon.. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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man this was fantastic.....i have now words to dsecribe it.........it was just sooooooooooooooooooooooo amazing!!!!!...........plz cont 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hehe-are you sure you're not one of balaji's writers?! very nice job 👏 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!! 😳 😳


just amazingly brilliant!!
continue soon!!

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