FF-An Unlikely Pair-Pt 21 on Pg 65-3/24

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1:
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The characters of my fan fic are the same as the serial...
with no exceptions what so ever...

Shiv is as brash.. and Gauri as meek... at least when the fan fic starts...


Shiv and Gauri are married... against their wishes... and Gauri wants to work... so Mahen tells her to join their office... better yet... gives her the cabin bang next to Shiv...

One day... Gauri gets up to go to office but then notices that shiv has already left for office... then she looks at the time... It is later than what she normally gets up at... She looks at the bed... gives out a sigh... almost as if she were wishing that things were normal between her and
Shiv...

She realises that Shiv would already be up and ready... but she does not see him in the room... she thinks to herself... maybe he has gone to have his breakfast...
She gets out a saree and gets ready and comes down to see that Shiv has already left for office... Maya as usual taunts her... She gives a sigh.. somethings at least never change...

She thinks about the jungle episode... and is walking towards the door, when she gets something on courier...
Ipshita : Hmm... pati to abhi abhi office gaya hain.. .aur abhi ek present bheja hain...
kholo na... khol ke to dikhao...
Gauri feels a little bit odd on seeing the package... Shiv is not one to send such mushy packages she says... She opens the package with a feeling of dread. aakhir kya ho sakta hain uss package main?

One of my friends here suggested that I index all the episodes and the page numbers that they appear on in the first episode of the FF, so as to help the guys who want to read specific episodes... Thanks Dear for your valuable comment...
Please find below the indexes for all the episodes till date.

Episode 1 - Page 1
Episode 2 - Page 2
Episode 3 - Page 3
Episode 4 - Page 4
Episode 5 - Page 6
Episode 6 - Page 8
Episode 7 - Page 12
Episode 8 - Page 17
Episode 9 - Page 20
Episode 10 - Page 29
Episode 11 - Page 33
Episode 12 - Page 37
Episode 13 - Page 42
Episode 14 - Page 45
Episode 15 - Page 47
Episode 16 - Page 53
Episode 17 - Page 57
Episode 18 - Page 59
Episode 19 - Page 61
Episode 20 - Page 63
Episode 21 - Page 65


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Wafah thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I'm curious...I'm guessing Gauri is going to be nicely surprised..Please continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow! hunn.. u must continue!!

fab beginning!!

👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#4
i wonder ...i wonder..!!!

lol....do continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
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im curious too..pls continue 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Omg...... 👏👏... Abhi darling you're writing an ff!! I'm so excited and its sounds soooo interesting!! [:P:]... Wow... Poor Gauri, stupid Maya... 😡

Hmmm... package mein kya hoga... a white sari?... kisne bheja hoga... it better not be that damn Shashank.. I'm seriously gonna murder him!! 😡😡

Yay, now I get to nag you about updating!! lolz jk 😆 😉

Hurry and continue!!

Cheers,
dc
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Posted: 18 years ago
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;-D

Thank you all for the comments and must say.. I like your guesses too... and hey dear dear dc... unlike you I have a bank of them ready... My lead characters take off for their engagements, weddings and honeymoons without notice you see... 😉

Will post the update in the just a while though!

Thanks once again!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great starting 👏 👏
the suspense is killing me
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2:
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Turns out it is a medical report from some hospital... woh report ko dekh te hi gauri ki rang udd jaati hain...

Ipsita who is standing right next to her is shocked by
looking at the ashen pale face of Gauri... "Gauri... kya
hua??? aisa kya hain iss report main..." a lone tear
escapes from Gauri's eyes and trickles down her cheek...
Gauri resolutely wipes it out... but not before Ipsita
notices it... she asks for the report... but gauri has it
clutched as if her life depends on it... Ipsita is trying
hard to get her hands on that report... to know what made

Gauri so upset of course... but so were Maya and Palak, who couldn't help but notice it...
Gauri is so upset by then... and trying very hard to contain her tears...
Nikhila comes on over to find out what is wrong... and

Ipsita by then has had a peep and is giving Gauri weird
shocked looks... Palak makes a grab for the report... and
exclaims 'What the heck?!!!!' Maya is also curious to find out what this is all about... Palak says "What is this Gauri.. yeh sab kya hain???"

Nikhila 'Palak... yeh kya kar rahi ho?? yeh bhi koi baat hui bhala.. yeh kya tareeka hain apne bhabhi se baat karne ka...?"
"Mama... agar aapko pata chala ki meri pyaaaaaaaaari Gauri Bhabhi (says this bit with a smirk) ne kya kiya hain, aap ka bhi reaction kuch aisa hi hoga.."

End of episode...
Please do post your comments and suggestions and guesses as to where the story might lead on next.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part is she pregnant???? thtz the first thought tht came in mind continue soon the suspense is gonna kill me

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