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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kendra

i will kill u jasleen if if rishab gets madhu again 😡😆

i thought that jerk really missed madhu but he missed the laal sari !!

I probably deserve it if it is coming from you Kendra. Go on now, I am ready😆 Laal saari, laal khoon, laal kayanat. I can't get it out of my head. I just...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am sorry for drooling all over your screen but, I just found something I love..
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Posted: 12 years ago
"I only want people to see where I am from. I come from a bad past and I am not ashamed of it because it is the past 👏
RK taking her with him 👍🏼
Go & win back you possession back 😡
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AroraN

"I only want people to see where I am from. I come from a bad past and I am not ashamed of it because it is the past 👏 RK taking her with him 👍🏼 Go & win back you possession back 😡
Update soon

I am glad you caught on to the juice😆 thanks :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iiDona

I probably deserve it if it is coming from you Kendra. Go on now, I am ready😆 Laal saari, laal khoon, laal kayanat. I can't get it out of my head. I just...

then this one is for rishab 😆 laal khoon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
well thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago

She wrote

As RK and Madhu reached the hotel they were staying in, a Rajasthani folk song played on Madhu's phone.

"What was that?" RK asked suppressing his laughter.

"None of you damn business", she scoffed trying to hide the text notification from him. It was a message from Rishabh:

I am here Jaan, come & get me before I come and get you.

RK suspected something amiss but chose to stay quiet hoping to get in her good books. He opted to stay in her room till the sun went down. Some excuse about her being a danger to herself.

"I am not going to slit my own throat but, if you stay here any longer than 8pm, I might cut yours".

She warned him and then, requested some paint brushes.

"Say, if I start painting again, could you fetch me $80,000 like the last time?"

"What happened to me asking for sexual favours?" RK was serving her taunts back to her.

"I still stand by that. But, for now, I need to find a way to earn money. Besides, turned out mighty profitable for you as well".

"Deal", he passed her top notch art supplies from the vintage store. She was ecstatic and seemingly unaware of the fast approaching danger. Rishabh couls track her down any minute now. His string of messages sure seemed to indicate his proximity.

"You have got to go", she rushed him out the door and began preparing for her husband's arrival. RK, against his better judgement, chose to leave the damsel alone for the night.

"I don't need no body", she reassured herself in double negatives. "I will show that bas***d what it is like to hurt".

She picked freshly packaged paint knife and sharpened it with the equally new sand paper. As the priest arrived to the altar, the only puzzle piece missing was the sacrificial lamb.

A nasty laugh greeted her from the window. He was here. She proceeded to hug him but he was fuming, with anger and jealousy and lust.

"Why did you leave me?"

Her hands engulfed his face, she was kissing him.

"I missed you. I deserve to be punished", she handed him that knife. "Go on, do your thing".

He cut her leaving shallow wounds, bloody and shallow wounds. As soon as the cuts turned to stabs, she screamed.

"RK, help. Someone, anyone, help!"

The security guard appointed outside her bedroom barged in and opened fire on Rishabh. As the husband and wife lay on the marble ground, she had the last word.

"I never loved you", she told him. "I love him. I will live the way I want because you died the way I wanted; away from your people and alone. Go rot in hell".

Her carefully executed murder scheme was an untold secret that Rishabh took with him to another world. She recovered well in the hospital, with RK's worried eyes and well wishers flocking out of nowhere. One day she got a telegram from Radha, "what did you do to my Rishabh, kalmoohi?"

"Murder", she wrote and moved on with her day's work.

This is it peeps <3

Thank you for sticking around.

I had fun.

Before you ask me about how RK & Madhu ended up, I will remind you that I do not think beyond the story. I will leave it up to you. If you wanted them to have four kids then, let us go with that vision. Their future is what YOU make it out to be :)

Edited by iiDona - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
let me have my happy dance first!!😆

yipee!! me first!! me first!!
thank you so much jasleen !! 😳😃
i am so happy that madhu finished that @$$h0LE$ case
and the best part was the answer she gave to radha !!
<- radha after rishab's death

and i want rk and madhu to have two kids 😳 -

Edited by kendra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aaahhh !! Finally The End !! I wasn't expecting her to kill Rishabh but it was amazing !!! A very carefullyy written end :D

Amzinggg work Jass !! <33
Edited by zara.92 - 12 years ago

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