Forgive Me Zoya- An AsYa SS

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Hey!

So most of you probably don't know me, but I hope that you still do enjoy my SS. Its not that great so please bear with me!
Hope you like it😃

Zoya ran into her room without saying a word. Asad knew that today he had gone too far. Zoya sat on her bed and started to cry.

Zoya: Why? Why does Mr Khan always have to be so mean to me. I always try to help him, and in return he always hurts me.

Someone knocked on her door. Zoya didn't say anything.

It was Najma, she walked in with a glass of water.

Najma: Here Zoya, Take this.

Najma handed over the water.

Zoya: No thanks Tamatar, I'm not in the mood for water right now.

Najma put the glass on her table, in case she would want it later and sat beside her on her bed.

Najma: You know Zoya, Bhaijaan has always been like this. He always hurts the ones he loves. But I promise you, he will come apologize. He'll feel bad and --

Zoya: No Najma, not to me. He could never apologize to me because he doesn't care for me.

Najma: Trust me Zoya, that isn't true

Zoya: If it isn't true then why does he always seem to yell at me for the simplest things. He doesn't understand that I have feelings too.

Najma: I know Zoya, Bhaijaan is emotionally challenged.

Zoya looked up at her and they both burst out laughing!

Najma extended her arm out to give Zoya a hug. She accepted it and hugged her back

Zoya: You know Tamatar, you're like sister I've always wanted but never had!

This made Najma grow a big smile on her face.

Najma: I am your sister Zoya, and your my older sister!

They both hugged each other again.

After breaking the hug Najma passed her the water again. Zoya took it drank the whole glass.

Asad was standing outside her door watching and listening in to their conversation. He was happy that his sister lightened her mood but still felt bad for what he did.

He walked back to his room and started pacing back and forth.

Asad (Thinking) How will I get Zoya to forgive me? I know! I'll get her something and say sorry. But what should I get her.

All this thinking made his head hurt. He decided to get water from the kitchen. As he walked towards the kitchen he overheard Najma Zoya and his ammi talking from the Living room.

Zoya: I think we should order pizza today and watch a movie! I am really hungry!

Dilshad: Sounds like a great idea, but I think Asad wouldn't want to eat pizza.

Asad saw Zoya turn a little upset.

Zoya: Thats true, don't want to bother Jahapana, I guess.

Asad felt really guilty inside. First he yells at her and now she won't have fun because of him.

Asad (Thinking) I think I'll order pizza for miss Farooqui. She'll forgive me for sure!

He calls the pizza place and orders pizza on delivery.

*****30 min later*****

~Ding Dong~

Najma: Who could that be at this time?

Asad walks out of his room

Asad: I'll get it!

Everyone was confused on what's happening.

He opened the door, paid for the pizza and took it inside and brought it to the dinner table.

Everyone was shocked, Expecially Zoya!

Asad: Dinner anyone?

He looked at Zoya when he said it. Zoya understood what he was trying to do.

Zoya: Najma, I'm not hungry, I'm going to sleep. Good night.

Najma: But Zoy--

Before she could finish, Zoya left to her room.

Asad was really upset. Had he hurt her that much?

He took 1 of the 2 pizza boxes to Zoya's room. Najma and her ammi giggled a little.

Dilshad: I think they purposely get mad at each other so that they could spend more time together by apologizing again and again!

AT ZOYAS ROOM

Asad walked in to the room and noticed that zoya was turned the other way. Asad was about to say something when Zoya interrupted him.

Zoya: You know it's considered very rude Mr khan, to walk into a girls room without knocking.

Asad: How did you know I came into your room? I didn't even make a sound.

Zoya was at a loss of words. How did she know?

Zoya: Wo, mai.. uh.. I just knew.

Asad: Can I ask you one question?

Zoya: Since when did you start to ask me before you did something

Asad kept Quite

Zoya: kay, ask.

She still had not turned his way.

Asad: Did I really hurt you that much?

Zoya: Is it something new for you? You always hurt me.

Asad: I'm really sorry Zoya. I really didn't mean to yell at you like that. Will you forgive me?

Zoya: When one forgives, it is expected that the other does not make the same mistake. But it seems as though, that's not our case, so why forgive?

Asad: Because I.. I.. uhh..

Asad (thoughts) I what Asad? Just tell her!

Zoya: Seems like you have nothing to say, so can you please leave me alone?

Asad really didn't know what to do, so he left the pizza box in her room, hoping she would atleast eat it later, and left her room.

****** Around midnight******

Asad was still awake. Sleep would not come to him today. He decided to check up on Zoya.

He slowly walked down to her room, opened her door, and poked his head in. She wasn't there! He looked in the bathroom, it was empty. He saw the pizza box laying where he had left it. He opened it. It was still full.

He walked out to the garden to see Zoya sitting on the bench. He walked near her and sat down beside her.

Asad: Not tired?

Zoya: Not really, and you?

Asad: No.

There was silence. All they could hear was the tender breeze hitting their soft cheeks. Asad looked at Zoya. The breeze played music through her hair. It flew like a symphony.

Asad Grabbed her hand softly. Zoya turned and looked at him.

Asad: I am really sorry Zoya. I really didn't mean to hurt you! Whenever I hurt you, it pains me more. Yet every time my anger gets in the way and I always--

He stopped as tears flowed down his cheeks.

Asad got up from the bench and bent down on his knees still holding Zoya's hand.

Asad: Forgive me Zoya! I promise I will never bring pain to your life every again. Please just forgive me.

Zoya had tears of happiness. She nodded as she had no words to describe what she felt at that moment.

He got back on the bench and hugged her.

He put his arm around her and she fit her head on his shoulder while the gazed at the stars all night long

The End

Chappals and tamatars are all welcome :P 😛

Please do comment guys! 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww that was adorable! do continue soon.
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Awww its perfect!! Loved it! Thanks for the PM :))) <3
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Kawal, right? Nice start, please continue soon!
~Sophie :)
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That is so cute
I loved how he apologized
Are you continuing this? If so continue super fast
<3 Farhana
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U deserve flowers dear not chappals n tamators!
Awesome writing...really enjoyed it!👏
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Awee.. that was really cute! I loved it! Pleease continue soon and please pm me if possible :) Thanks in advance :D
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Aaawww really cute. Continue soon:)
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This was the first thing i read in the morning! WOOAA! great great great!
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really nice!!! loved it ;) plzz do continue if you can :)

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