OS: Amita aur Amit ki Sangeet Sandhya

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Frnz,

I have written an "OS: Amita -AMit ki Sangeet Sandhya"

Hope you all like it!

Comments as jootas and jalebis are always welcome.

Regards,

Lucky

Amita aur Amit ki Sangeet Sandhya…

After the performances of Daadi and Naani; and Rhea and Rohan...

Amita's friends: Amu.. ab tumhari baari hai.. babuji aur kirit uncle ke act ke baad… chalo get some make-up wake-up done…

Sanjay: haan amit tum bhi chalo…

Both Amit and Amita.. gulp their saliva's and look at each other tensely…

Near change room:

Sanjay: amit you go in.. main paani laata hoon…

Amit: ok…

In change room…

Preeti: while giving a touch to Amita's make up…"Amu… tujhe yaad hai na sabhi steps…"

Amita: haan aarti lekin.. pata nahi darr lag raha hai…

Amit standing besides her… checking himself in the adjacent mirror

Aarti; agar tujhe darr varr lage na.. toh.. hospital wala scene yaad kar lena… aur hum na gaana change kar denge.. aur aa gale laga jaa.. play kar denge… kyun jeejz.. ok naa…???

Amita: chup kar aarti… ye koi mazak ka time nahi hai… and looks at Amit… who was like what the???

Amita: lip ssyncs and says.. sorry..

Amit: signals through eyes… please… chup karo yaar tumhare frnz ko…

Jigna: unhu unhu.. Amit.. agar tum kaho.. toh hum thode der ke liye tumhe ekaant de sakte hai…taaki.. tumhe aankhon hi aankhon me baat karne ki zarurat na ho…

Amit: haan.. mera matlab… woh main wahi kehne waala tha.. woh jab bhi main nervous hota hoon toh.. mujhe shaanti chahiye hoti…

Aarti: that was rude haan jeejz… seedha seedha kahiye.. ke amita se baat karni hai…

Jigna: aur nahi toh kya.. chalo.. aarti, preeti.. hum na bahar jaake music system dekhte hai…

Amit takes a deep breath and leaves a deep one…

Amita: continues with her make-up..

when… Falu enters..

Falguni: Amit.. rhea aur rohan ka dance bahut ache se hua.. main chahti hoon ke tumhara dance unse bhi acha ho…

Amit: Maa.. lekin…

Falguni: koi excuse nahi Amit..

turns to Amita.. and says.. Amita pehla waala kaam tumne acha kiya… wt loss karke.. dress me fit aakar… ab dusri bari…tumhe dance acha karna hai…

Amita looks tensed… ji…

Falguni leaves room… when kajal and atul enter… wishing amita and amit the good luck for dance…

Amita: playing with her dupatta utters.. pehle hi kya kum tensed the jo ab sab tension badhane aa rahe hai..

Amit: kuchhh kaha tumne

Amita: haan matlab nahi.. woh suraj nahi aaya.. ab pata nahi.. kya hoga…

Amit: haan toh suraj ka kya kaam.. dance toh hume karna hai na… dekho amita agar tumko mere saath dance nahi karna toh saaf saaf bata do…

Amita: nahi.. matlab.. woh.. teacher saath ho toh… tension nahi … hota

in the meanwhile amit leaves the change room… and goes near stage…

Amit: Sanjay mujhe koi dance nahi karna..

Sanjay: amit ye tu kya bol raha hai…

Amit: jo tune suna…main sirf itna hi batane aaya tha… and leaves the back stage…

when kaajal announces aur ab dil thaam ke baithiye.. aarahe hai.. amit aur amita… stage pe..

when.. Sanjay goes on stage and says.. nahi.. nahi.. bhai.. ruk jao… aisi bhi kya jaldi hai.. waise bhi hamare hone wale dulha aur dulhan… ko thoda aur waqt dete hai.. aur hamare audiences ko thoda aur wait karwaate hai.. tab tak… hamari amita ke daadji aur daadi ek act pesh karenge…

Kajaal: Sanjayji kya hua?aapne announcement change kyun ki?

Sanjay: woh amit naaraz hai keh raha hai ke woh dance nahi karega… pata nahi… kya hua…?

Aarti/ preeti: amita aur amit ka jhagda ho gaya kya?

Sanjay : pata nahi…

Aarti/ Preeti: oh no… Amita se baat karni padegi…

Aarti/ Preeti: Amita… amita kya hua? tumhara aur amit ka jhagda hua kya??

Amita: haan… woh main tensed thi.. ke suraj nahi aaya aur amit ko gussa aa gaya ke… main suraj…

when Jigna enters: arre… baba amita.. do baar soch leti.. ye ladko ka ego bahut hota hai.. just like us.. jab unhe kisi ke saath compare karoge toh unhe bhi gussa aayega na…

Aarti: aur upar se.. kal.. suraj ne… amit ko prop ke tarah use…

Amita: oh no… mujhe abhi amit se baat karni hai… and is about to leave room.. when she finds batuk..

Amita: batukji.. amit kaha hai?

Batuk: upar hai.. apne kamre me..

Amita: mujhe amit se milna hai.. abhi…

batuk: chaliye main aapko leke chalta hoon…

Amit is sitting on Bed… in his room… upset.. sanjay trying to console him to dance

Amita enters.. Amit…

Sanjay looks at Amita and leaves room…

Amita .. enters… and sits besides Amit.. and says.. woh sorry.. mujhe pata hai ke aapko bura laga.. and trust me.. ke…mujhe… aapko hurt karneka koi intention nahi tha… woh.. actually… main ye soch rahi thi.. ke agar teacher saamne ho.. toh.. bilkul dar nahi lagta…

Amit: turns around…

Amita: Amit… aapko ye baat shayad mujhe pehle hi batani chahiye thi… woh actually I had crush on suraj…

Amit turns around and says.. kya?

Amita: suraj aap meri please puri baat suniye… and explains.. the whole situation.. lekin jab mujhe pata chala.. ke woh preeti ko pasand karta hai.. tabhi.. maine usse bhula diya.. infact mujhe toh kuch yaad bhi nahi tha.. lekin.. phir dance.. choreography.. aur maine aapse kaha bhi.. ke baat karni hai…

Amit recalls.. and says.. toh tabhi tumne kyun nahi bataya amita?

Amita:woh.. tabhi ghar pe bahut log the.. aur agar aap gussa ho jaate toh… sab kya sochte… aur shayad aapke life me bhi aapko koi pasand aaya hoga.. lekin.. aapko kisine meri tarah reject toh nahi kiya hoga naa…

Amit recalls.. his and snehal's incidence… and says.. nahi.. mere saath aise kabhi nahi hua.. chalo.. acha hua ke tumhe mujhe pehle hi sab sach sach bataya amita.. hamare rishte ke liye ye sachai bahut imp. hai… and thinks.. kya mujhe bhi… amita ko.. snehal ke bare me abhi batana chahiye

when.. Aarti knocks on door…

Aarti: ab bas ek act baaki hai… uske baad tum logon ki baari.. hum aur delay nahi kar sakte…

Amit: haan.. hum aate hai…

Amita smiles and says.. aap naaraz nahi hai na mujhse amit..

Amit : nahi.. woh.. tumne itne ache se sab bataya ke.. naaraz toh amin ho hi nahi sakta… chale neeche..

Amita: haan.. and is about to go out of room.. when amita turns back.. and says.. amit.. woh aapse ek aur baat karni thi…

Amit: kya?

Amita: woh aap.. acha.. dance karte hai.. aur main hoon aapke saath aur hum dono as a couple perform karenge… not as a dancer and prop and smiles…

Amit: smiles both go near stage…

Amit: Amita aal the best.. ye hamara pehla performance hai as a partner…

Amita: best of luck to you too…

On stage..

kaajal announces the last performance of the day.. by Amit and Amita… and the music starts…

when amit and amita enter stage…

Amit looks at audience… and gets scared.. and stands still.. when Amita.. moves towards him.. while dancing.. and moves his face towards her.. and amit looks at Amita and recalls her words that we would dance as couple.. and dances with his open heart.. and feelings….

The dance ends… and amita and amit maintain their pose.. Amit was Amits's shoulder (like rab ne bana di jodi)…

Amita and Amit look at each other eyes.. and come to their senses… hearing the claps and whistles…Amit puts Amita back on her feet …

Amit: looks around.. adjusts his specs.. and smiles

Rhea and Tina are shocked at Amit's and Amita's performance

The curtains..close nad Amit hugs Amita.. Thank you!!!

Aarti: unhu.. unhu… signal nahi diya aapne. nahi gaana hamare paas tayar tha

Amit: shyingly adjusts his specs

Falu… is more than happy to see her amit and of course amita give a wonderful performance and enters back stage… hugs Amit… and says I am so proud of you…

and looks at Amita who was a bit nervous seeing Falu …

Falguni: Amita beta… come here

Amita: ji .. mummyji…

Falguni hugs amita and and says… well done beta.. aise.. hi shah parivaar ka naam roshan karna

Amita smiles and goes and hugs her parents and takes blessings from others…

The sangeeta performace ends in a happy moment along with tears of joy …

-----THE END----




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you very much for the update.😊
how you know about today's episode before its telecast?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nan6

Thank you very much for the update.😊
how you know about today's episode before its telecast?



Hi Nan6, i have posted an OS written by me, its my imagination of sangeet sandhya, which i have penned down. It's not the reel episode.

It is a fan fiction.

Regards,

Lucky

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