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Aishwarya

@EmpressSarayu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

I didn't read the second part till you posted the third part, too much suspense!
So wonderful!
There are a few favourite moments, when he said she would be the most beautiful woman in the world, when she thought about how her parents felt when they were dying and when they decided to adopt the boy!
Brilliant!

:) <3

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Just read all 3 parts... :) The first part was kinda scary... they are gonna adopt the boy... tht just brought a smile to my face...:)

Good luck for the rest of the exams...!!!

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mdeshpande

@mdeshpande

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

A brilliant TS. some truly *dhak=dhak*, with fear, moments ! esp. the OP one, where was worried as to how will the doctor come to know that A is diabetic, who will tell him, will he really die, ??

👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

thnx 4 pm.

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mdeshpande

@mdeshpande

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: aishwaryakirit
I didn't read the second part till you posted the third part, too much suspense!
So wonderful!
There are a few favourite moments, when he said she would be the most beautiful woman in the world, when she thought about how her parents felt when they were dying and when they decided to adopt the boy!
Brilliant!

:) <3

Agree, and that 'most beautiful woman" bit reminded me of that story,..."my mother is the most beautiful woman in the world" !!

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bungeejump

@bungeejump

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

That was actually quite an emotional read! I cringed about the future in the 1st update but by the end of it their strength and love really shines through! It was beautifully written!

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Sorry Vee, for the late comment...who says weekends are relaxing...??? 😕

I loved the way you penned about the contemporaneous happenings, Khushi, timorous, and, with a sense of trepidation,...more of a presentiment...while Arnav is being rescued...Arnav's insistence about the Khush going with him, left me teary eyed...

Then, a quiescent Arnav, in the ICU, and , an agitated Khushi, escaping unscathed...gave me goosebumps

Khushi comprehending her husband's wish and, then the adoption...

the unspoken bond is very heartwarming...

To sum it up, a very befitting title..cuz, I could perceive dauntlessness in the protagonists...

And, thank you for dropping a PM..

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

"After all this time?"

"Always!"

Sigh!

Sigh.

This was so beautiful. So beautiful. The title, apt. And I love how the story was narrated. And to overshadow it all, remembering Snape, my friend, in a way like this is just so nice.

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Take_That

@Take_That

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

That was an emotional ride! You kept the readers interested till the last bit!

A different story!

Khushi is strong enough to console the family though she is afraid of what she might have to see when she reaches the hospital.

Loved how Arnav and Khushi decided to be parents to Khush!

Thank you!

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

That was a story full of twists and turns ...kind of like a ride on space mountain in Disneyland. We the readers were sitting in the dark thinking we Re going to bang into the wall any moment, and then suddenly, we veer to the right and a rock is about to fall on us and suddenly we dodge it by going thru a door on the left and ...you get my drift...

What I am amazed at is how vivid the whole story was...almost 3D...I could visualize it all...specially the train wreck and Khushi's dream as well as NK's almost accident...

What kept me grounded was your reassurances and a such a strong belief in their bond...they are both so deeply connected by their love...very few words needed...

The background and descriptions of what anyone is thinking is somehow not needed...we get it...I guess an author reader connection exists too...where very few words are needed.

What a beautiful story.

Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago

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Vee

@reflorated

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

Note

Who says pimping your own work is a crime? 😆

To everybody interested, I have started a new FF called A Butterfly on a Wheel. You can read the prologue here. Hope you guys read and like the story, its a pretty ambitious project =)

With love,

-Vee