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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jarin04

Andy i just read the chapters in one go. wow that must be quite a lot of reading😃 I have so much to tell about this ff nd how much i loved reading it but m not finding enough words to expess my feelings.ah!! thanks so much jarin😃 This ff was defo diff from all other stories in this forum. In previous chapters i had a hard tym thinking who's mister Shark. Couldn't even concentrate on my biology class today.iam flattered As i gradually reached the revealation part i got shocked knowing the true komal. Yeah this revealation came as a blow to me. Nd about Uday it made me sad thinking if Uday's Mr. Shark then how we'll get Manveer.you will surely get manveer, as long as iam the writer I thought let's wait nd watch what happens but then when i read the promo of chap 23 it broke my heart in thousand pieces. Andy i know u r an amazing writer wid a Dexter mind. U deserve more response but pls don't do this to us. It's been a great journey from the begging till chap 23. pls don't close this ff lyk this. Trust me u won't feel good after ending it lyk this. I feel it's lyk your baby ff which u wrote wid much care nd passion but this can't be the ending u thought, can it? So i'm begging u not to make it a sad ending. Pls try to make it a happy one. Btw i guess our dex girl Andy can find many other ways to clear out Mr.Shark from his deeds can't she? I know u can so pls give the ff a second chance

jarin what you said is right, this ss is like a baby to me. i really love this story. and i wont end it in such a way that will spoil the thrill of the story. manveer has a lot too go through befoer they become one. uday has fallen into evil but he wil be rescued soon. i promise to give a happy ending
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Posted: 12 years ago
update update update update update update update...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Andy😊. hi navi😃

Finally got a chance to comment😆. and finally i get a chance to reply 😆😆
Great update Dear 👍🏼.ah!! thanks navi. you always encourage me
Loved the beginning (Manveer's chat) , it was so "AWWW"😳 (sorry - can't find a word right now that fits there😕). that is the way i too feel when i read your update😳
Then comes the plan to get Komal to confess her "crime" . I LOVED THIS PART ❤️. Uday's plans were totally masterful.after all he is a succesful bussinessman a nd killer too😆 The way he tampered with the security system ... then sneaking Manyata into the palace ... then causing the disruption with the fire-works ... then causing the power-cut ... and lastly turning Manyata into a ghost😆 and getting a confession out of Komal!!! All that was superb. Well done Andy ... that was brilliantly written👏. thanks so much navi.
Uday also saved Manyata 1 last time as Komal made a final attempt at taking her daughter's life. That also was ingenius👏. (WHERE DO U GET SUCH IDEAS FROM😕?i told you that time about my favorite writers, they inspire me to write in this sort of suspense. and a special thanks to all suspence movies i watch)
The "last hug" made me so sad as I knew what was coming next😭. uday will spend the remaining part of his life in jail😭
BTW ... comment is for chapter 23😃.
Thoroughly enjoyed THIS PART. thanks sooo much navi😃

thanks so much navi for this comment . i loved it sooo much😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

update update update update update update update...

mahi, my final degree exams will begin on april 10 and now am busy with my project and assignments, but i plan to give a small update soon , cant be sure when, soory about it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 24

It was early morning when manyta woke up. It was a pleasant morning but she felt otherwise. There was something wrong. She did not know what it was. She left to the court. Uday would be tried by the court today. She would make sure he would stay there for ever for his sins.

It was 11 am when the judge entered , uday was brought inside the courts in hains like some criminal. The media clicked his pictures like mad people. The defence was doing a good job. The look on uday's face showed a sign of defeat. The defence called her to give evidence

The defence lawyer came asked her

Dl: your name?

M: manyta kumari, princess of devgarh riyasat

Dl: do you know the man in front of you?

Manyta looked up to see uday looking at him, a look tha sort her pity, the eyes spoke volumes to her, but she ignored his eyes and looked away

M: yes, I do. He was the one who kidnapped me.

Dl: do you have the proof , to support your claim

M: yes and she showed the court all the evidence she had gathered against him

The court then accepted the evidence against uday. It sentenced him to be hanged till death, manyta's heart cried hearing that sentence , but she was helpless. Evil had to be fought.

Manyat was waiting outside the court , uday was brought out, his hands were tied, on reaching her he stopped . he asked the officer to open his handcuffs as he wanted to ask manyta her forgives, the officer seeing his good behavior obliged him and set his hands free. The moment his hands were free, he grabbed the gun from the officer's belt and pulled manyta, close to him and pointed the gun to her head.🤢

U: don't come forward, or I will shoot her😡

The police officers looked dumbstruck at this developments and did not know what to do

M: help me, cried manyta

Uday dragged manyta into the police jeep.he drove like a mad man. Police started to follow him. but he quickly left them of trail

Manyata was getting scared like hell. She tried to reason with him

M: uday please,

U: shup up

M: uday please, atleast..

U: I said SHUT UP

He shouted at her like a mad man. His eyes were too dangerous

Fear gripped her, death was flashing right in front of her eyes

The vehicle stopped at the foothills of a nearby hill

He dragged her to the top of the hill and manyta was screaming on top of her lungs for help but in vain🤢

M: help,HELP

M: Uday please, please listen to me

Uday stopped at the top of the hill

"manyta I don't forget nor forgive, you betrayed me, so you deserve to die, he said as he tightened the shawl around her neck, her eyes were wide open and she was choking🤢

M: uuu..dd' pl' ehhh pll'.pll

Death was rushing towards her

NOOO🤢

Maaanyta scremed as she woke up. She was drenched in sweat. She looked around. It was just one in the morning. She was safe and alive, but the nightmare was soo real, it made her scared. Uday will take revenge on her

J: jiji, what happened😲

Jai asked as she entered the room

M: na.. nothing jiji. I just had a night mare.😭

J: jiji are you alright?😕

M: yes jai, am ok, don't worry

J: today's developments were too shocking jiji. Maa, I never ever thought she would try to kill you. What hapeened jiji. What happened to our loving family, what went wrong jiji?

M: jai, that's human nature, we don't know what a person is thinking. Only god knows what happened to maa.

J: but jiji, could n't you have forgiven maa

M: jai, iam a daughter but first iam a yuvarani, and it is my duty to punish evil. Iam so sorry jai. It is killing me sending maa to jail. But I don't show it out.

J: jiji, you rest, iam leaving😭

M: ok jai

Manyta then slept and uday continued to haunt her dreams

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Uday looked out of his cell. His plan was ready. Manyta would suffer , he made sure of that😆

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Jaggat was tossing and turning around . today's developments shocked him. two people whom he believed turned out to be crooks

Komal aunty- she was such a gem, but who knew this was what going in her mind. She wanted her daughter dead ie her own blood, life has become soo bad that even mother's are killing their kids without guilt

Then uday- the next unlikely person, he was genuinely concerned when manyta was kidnapped, he had accompanied him every where to find manyta, yet manyta named him as mr shark. Everything did not fit

He remembered his convo with uday

U: jaggat believe me, iam innocent

J: I believe you, but it is the law that have to decide it

U: jaggat, tomorrow you wait and see, you will see who is correct and wrong, manyta has wronged me . justice will prevail

Yes justice will prevail. All he(jaggat) had to do was wait as the truth unraveled

Promo

Uday is produced at the court

Judge: I hearby pronounce mr udayveer singh………………..

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Guys, before you say anything, I know this is my shortest update

I was planning to update only after april20 😃

But today I was in a mood and I wrote this in 45 minutes

So how is it?😕

Was it ok?😃

Please hit the like button and also do comment😛

Hitting the like button takes only one second but it means a lot to me

Waiting for your feed back😃

Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi andyyygreat update...u give me shocked of life...
i thought its going to be sad story...
but i hope its not...
thanks for pm
byeee
smita
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Posted: 12 years ago
o teri! thank god it was a dream! warna me soch rahi thi accha response mila fir bhi andy kyu end kr rahi hain??
yup, the update was short, but gud!
luvd it!
thanx dear
but april 20th is just too long
:(
try n update b4 na,

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Posted: 12 years ago
omg awesum blossom gr8 loved it loads!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">OMG ... Andy , your ss has reached (AND PASSED😆) 100 pages!

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That's awesome ... CONGRATS😃.


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ah! Navi, thanks so much. Its because of my readers support i reached here
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saneha85

hiandyyy

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great update...u give me shocked of life...
i thought its going to be sad story...
but i hope its not...
thanks for pm
byeee
smita

thanks smita
he he i gave u a shock.
But i wont end it soon and it will have a happy ending

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