Hi Andy 😊
Firstly - a huge sorry to you! I was supposed to give u this comment ages ago , BUT NEVER DID. I'm terribly sorry for that . At first it was because of a slow net😡 ... that caused me to push this comment to the next day , but then when that day came ... then u had SPAMMERs making MERRY on your thread. Then I waited for that to be sorted ... by the time that was done - I COMPLETELY FORGOT ABOUT POSTING THIS!
Enough explanation now ... let's get to the task at hand!
It was a fantastic update 👏... BUT THEN ALL YOUR UPDATES ARE! Uday's ingenius mind was once again at the fore , with the brilliant plan of framing Brijraj for the Hit on Manyata. Guess he knew that Komal was (OVER) in-love with Brij and will confess her part to save him.
But I'm still dissappointed that Komal was the perpetrator. I find it difficult to believe that a MOTHER is capable of such an act! Even if she despised her former husband ... even if she was raped by him ... ARE U SAYING THAT SHE HAD ABSOLUTELY NO MATERNAL FEELING FOR HER CHILD😡😡😡? That has being bothering me from the time I read that she was the culprit.
K:Yes I killed her,😡 If it was possible I would have killed her with my own hands The manner in which , she said those lines ... makes U THINK THAT SHE WAS THE STEP-MOTHER instead of Manyata's OWN!!
I loved when Manyata came forward and confronted her mother - that part was awesome !!! But when she fingered Uday in the next instant , my heart broke🥺. YES - I expected it ... But I still felt heart-sore when it happened😭.
The "UDAY" that was emerging after being locked inside a serial-killer - IS LOST ONCE AGAIN😔! The cold-blooded murderer is back and I'm sure he'll seek revenge for that betrayal (AND I'M ON HIS SIDE WITH THAT ... HOPE HE MAKES HER PAY BIG TIME😈.
U: manyata prove your allegations first, I am sure you will not get even a small bit of evidence against me, Because I never leave any loopholes. This part makes me think that 🤔 ... Maybe , Uday wanted Manyata to see that secret room . Maybe all the evidence there is ALL FAKE. Because , such a notorious criminal /master-mind would NOt have such a room. THEY NEVER HAVE EVIDENCE KEPT ANYWHERE. ONCE THE DEED IS DONE - ALL PROOF IS DESTROYED! I'm sure u heard the term : "THEY DON'T LEAVE ANY FOOT-PRINTS BEHIND!" ... that term was concocted especially for these people.
And I still love you manyata and I will not stop till you will be my wife, manyata kumari . the ring in your hand is the sign that you will be mine and mine alone I loved these lines😳. It shows his determination of having her as part of his future.
The jail scene was great👏. Well described👍🏼!!! I was sad imagining him in that position , but I know ... he will be thinking of ways to get out of this mess. I'm very confident that that will happen soon.
I think he should plead INSANITY for a lesser jail sentence. Or maybe he should pretend to have a SPLIT-PERSONALITY ... and say that his alter-ego was the killer. Or maybe he should bribe 1 of the wardens and escape from there. Or maybe , he should CONTINUOUSLY BANG HIS HEAD ON THE WALL ... and when the cops take him to hospital , he can escape from there and GO TO KILL MANYATA😈. (AS U CAN SEE , MY THOUGHT ARE TURNING EVIL ... so I better stop now😆!)
It was a fabulous chapter Andy. The promo was SUPERB😉 ... up until Uday got shot😭!!!
So , I think I bored u enough now. This comment was for the previous chapter (JUST A REMINDER😃). The comment for the next chapter will come in 2 days time (I have read it ... but I'm tired typing now , SO U HAVE TO WAIT😆).
1 request ... please update your index!
(IT WAS BLOODY DIFFICULT FINDING PAGE 95😡)
Thanks for your patience!
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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