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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

feeling really worried for maan...first polio n nw epilepsy...moreover he is irregular in study n more concerns for sports...hw he will pass th exams...n thn his diseases...will he continue his sports...will it become th battle btwn geets lv n maans ego...



ummm... mee too... 😭

yep polio n then epilepsy 😭


studies 🤣


maan tho maan hai.. he will!!!!


just wait n watch for d ego part :) 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Desigirls12



first of all a big wala sorry.. i missed last 4 part, but now i read in one go..


allle!!!!!!! 🤣 no prob sweetuuu nalini darlinggg 😳

wow lovely cute parst.. te way my maaneet love growing day by day and te way they looking after pari and promising to be good parents for they kids, oh god.. naughty maaneet.. te way my maan having epileptic attack, oh god.. now my maaneet i innocent love going to change into ego..i love te updates so much


the way they groeing up :P 😳

n look at the babyish promises they will be good parents hun 🤣


epiolespse 😡


yep love turning u turn 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ainaGURTI




pscycho wali harkatein... 😉


i made him defective pice... hayee ghor kalyug 🤣


doc kahin ki.. u r telling like... kamini kahin ki 🤣 u know what i can read btw ur lines 🤣


hayeee tumhare tez nazzr 🤣




Yes, ghor kalyug

haanji ...like that only ...doc kahi kii

Nanana ,...my nazar is not tezz ..badi kamzor hai ...lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update bt scary pre cap...
dont want ego to come between them...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ash1991

superb update bt scary pre cap...

dont want ego to come between them...




thanks dear...

ego has to come tat s d story na :/
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu




Yes, ghor kalyug

haanji ...like that only ...doc kahi kii

Nanana ,...my nazar is not tezz ..badi kamzor hai ...lol






doc kahin ki :/


naxar hayee even me same pinch ;) kash tez hota!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

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PART 37 :

Her eyes were fized at his hand which was lying down lifeless, the G tattoo glittering😉, tears fell down her cheeks, she remembered last time when she went to HP, he came and showed her the tattoo, she felt so happy seeing G engraved on his forehand, she went near him and trying to caress the tattoo sheasked him what is this maan😳, anni jumped from no where , Geet u know na Maan is slected in d National Basketball Team, his team Great Barriers😉, he was so escited so got the G engraved, mom yelled at him for getting the permanent tattoo, I didn't tell you last week since you were coming here na so thought face to face tum uski acchi se class logi🤣, saying so she went out. Maan looked at her, and winked , she asked maan is anni telling the truth, he came near her, nope geet I got it done for someone😳, her heart beating accelearated with his looks, she never understood those unsaid feelings. He said I got it done for my crush😉' u know what Geetu I wanted to tell u first, but then her Bday is coming up so got the tattoo as surprise for her,she chuckled blushing tight' ohhh' she couldn't speak much, he continued' Geetakshi Arora , she is my classmate and is epitome of beauty😭, her looks went numb with this confession of maan she didn't know why but she hated this or had this jealousy thought brewing up, what is it maan>?? Yep she had her bday yday so to surprise I got the tattoo done ls tweek, but my bad luck she's gone to Paris for vacations and I couldn't show and propose her😆' her heart beat stopped now, she turned What are you talking maan, he smiled yep I think am in love Geet😉! Love with her' just waiting very badly to see her, and I had to lie everyone that this G was for my Team name, n u know na I cant hide truth from you, so told u, promise me u'll never tell anyone, tears spilled her face and she ran out.😭

She kept wiping her tears when she remembered tha party on his Bday, looking blankly at his lifeless body she recollected , she had not gone to the midnight party she was upset with the G confession😳, she pretended to be asleep when he came over to her room to wake her up and take her to the celebrations, but she acted almost in sleep. That evening when she went to Khurana House to wish him , he came over and gave her tha cake, she wished him politely and took the bite he came over her ear and told this was the first piece of d cake😳, her eyes parkled and asshe was chewing it he pulled her to the terrace, she was breathing harsh, and running out of air when they finally collided near a pillar and she halted for breath, he holded her hands tightly, and spoke, Geet I dnt know what it is but I feeli the world is complete when you are around me😳, last night I cut the cake but there wasn't a single joy in me, I missed u immensely , your presence makes life beautiful😳, I think I love you, she looked at him flabbergasted and pulled her hands away, and spoke, Maan please this is the last I expected from you😭, I mean we really at are ease with each other but hat does not mean we are in love are we😭' Saying so she ran away, she had to be harsh she thought, oh God she couldn't love him, it was all wrong😭' Love before marriage' chi hci' she thought of all those movies and kicked herself for thinking perverted!

As she looked at the Drs who had come rushing in to Handa House to see him, she saw Beena weeping and Rano cajoling her, instantly her thoughts drifted to the day when Rano had asked her about her feelings for maan😳. It was after the love confession by him, when the dolidays were over and they were back to Delhi, she was very silent for few days, one day rano came over to her room and asked her if everything is allright' she told she wanted to speak to her, rano had asked if she n maan were in love, geet mocked at her mother for thinking so baselessly and approaching her with such stupid questions🤣, she had clearly told rano tat maan and she shared a great bond and it was not love😳, it was friendship it was mutual understanding😳, it was some feelings but definitely not love😳. Tears dripped her eyes seeing him like tat, couple of days she couldn't concentrate on her exams it was getting all the more difficult, but then once maan was fine he was prescribed some Meds, and they went back to HP, it was very difficult for her to part from him especially now when she knew that she loved him and knew he loved her too, but why did she runaway from accepting those feelings😉, its only when things fall out from your hand , you realize the true value, tat is what happened with her, when she saw him like tat is when she realized he completed her life in all circumferences and she was making a mistake😡, mistake of denythng their holy love🤢. Her life turned worse after he left, those 2 days changed her life, she would steal his glances, sneak into the room when he would be asleep, she made herself invisible to him, the point was she didn't want to face him this way, and only after he left it hit her hard'.😳

Since you been gone
I been hangin' around here lately
With my mind messed up
Jumped in my car tried to clear my mind
Didn't help me
I guess I'm all messed up now baby
Soon as I jumped into my ride
Those memories start to play
A song comes on the radio
And there you are baby once again

It's just another sad love song
Rackin' my brain like crazy
Guess I'm all torn up
Be it fast or slow
It doesn't let go
Or shake me
And it's all because of you

Since you been gone
I keep thinkin' about you baby
Gets me all choked up
This heart of mine keeps dreamin' of you
And it's crazy
You'd think I'd had enough
As soon as I get you out my head
I'm in your car again
Just one request from the radio
I'm back in love sugar once again

It's just another sad love song
Rackin' my brain like crazy
Be it fast or slow
It doesn't let go
Or shake me
And it's all because of you

Here comes the strings
Then somebody sings
Only takes a beat
And then it starts killin' me darlin'
Only takes one note, I tell ya,
From that radio
It's just
Another
Lonely
Love song.
It doesn't let go.




guys,... starting a new ff on April 5th... The Barrier My Veil... It's a story where maaneet are of different.religion💔 and maan falls for geet one side love story :)🤣she doesn't feel anything but due to circumstances they get married,🤣 and d sensitive life of inter religion develops,🤗 how far will she keep him away thinking she's not his caste 😡?? how far can he stay from her though he loves her, is his love supreme enough to break the barrier😎 ?? Her veil 😎??? His family despises her to d extent he loves her🤣, she breaks all d traditions since she doesn't believe in them😈, but will his love surpass all d barrier😎 ?? the veil ??? 😎


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Edited by ainaGURTI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 37
nice part...
so they love each other?
Maan confessed but Geet rejected?
sigh hopeless hai yeh dono...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan made tatto on his arm n told everyone its his craziness for his team bt its actually for geet bt told geet that its for geetakshi n whn geet felt sad then he confessed her bt she rejected him n she denied her mother abt their holy lov n nw maan is ill...uff ye geet v na...chi chi karke apne pyar ko kho raha hain...koi to usse samjhao..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part

Geet rejected Maan proposal when he had proposed her thinking it as sin before marriage

Continue soon

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