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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is one of the most beautiful confession between them!! I was like AWww all the way!!

Edited by Tanya_Swaronluv - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update
Lol Nicky part was hilarious..:p
Loved the update
Waiting for epilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its awesome..
1of d best n cute swaron confession that i ve come across...
cute n beautiful lost in their world n gang heard everything n were shocked...
swaron came out of their world wen they hear gang shout...
loved their confession...
nicky bros were hilarious...
testing swayam for love bites n disappointed not to find any was funny...
hope something like this happens in d show too...

Edited by vaishu88 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Here's the 1st epilogue 😆 hope you guys like it...exams r over 😉 so iss khushi ke liye, long one 😃

Epilogue 1 The Proposal

The view was breathtaking, their favorite view, their terrace'..Swayam had waited all day for this moment, this special moment'..one could see his efforts. On the terrace of st.louis candles were lit, all around the place flowers, especially orchids hung to disguise the lamp posts rose petals lay on the floor spelling out something, and in the middle lay a velvet blue box. Swayam, "Sharon kaha ho tum?" he heard a tiny gasp of shock and surprise and he knew it wasn't her, he turned to see taani, along with the rest of the gang'.well he hadn't expected this'.oh god help me he thought. "tum log yahan kya kar rahi ho?" simmi,"Sharon said we all had a surprise waiting for us on the terrace, but we dint know about this'.honest" the rest nodded. Rey walked upto him and said tumne mujhse kuch nahi kaha'..aur kya kaha tumne jab I asked you why were you wearing a tux? Swayam replied, official work'.Rey "tho ye hai tumhara 'official work'" taani: bhai aap ye sab karli? Bhabhi ke liye? I was wondering why you were doing so much of ordering yesterday and now I understand ;) SW: tum sab yahan ho, par siren kahan hai? Sim: wo actually Sharon ne bataya tha ki she'll be coming in a while had some work'idk what though.

Out of the blue, Swayam felt it, felt her, as strong as he had on the first day he'd seen her, it just hit him, and it was then he decided she was his'he won't live without her. SW: ok stay if you'd like but whatever you do, do it quickly'.she's almost here" Vicky: tumhe kaise bata? Nil: hey dude tumhe yaad hai, wo Sharon mein phd kiye hai so obviously he'll know :P SW: yaad and all baad mein, abhi do something and hide or leave. Rinni: I think hume jaana chahiye, this supposed to special and alone. All gape at her and rey breaks the silence ushering them all out, they come out of their reverie, wish Swayam best of luck and leave. As he went about to see whether everything was fine or not, he felt the presence watching him, he turned around and beamed at his angel, his siren, his world, his Sharon.

She was wonderstruck, how could one single person, love her so much?! How could he make her feel this special, whether she was worthy of it or not. How could 1 person do so much'feel so much for her and not expect anything in return? No scratch it, he expects things but never tells her, she knows though what he wants, his eyes are as open to her as hers was to him. She didn't have to acquaint with him to know what he wanted, she knew him the first time she saw him, she adored him, and she knew he was hers. But her ego stood in the way then, she came over her ego, she stopped trying to push him away, she let him in, she'd let him in her heart long back, but she'd let know after too much of hurt and pain. Then her health protested, she pushed him even harder but it didn't matter to him, he was hers forever whether she liked it or not. He could be adored by many, but to him, he was blind to it, blinded binded by his love'.for her. As she stood there and watched him these flew through her mind, making her eyes water. She saw him, her eyes seeked his. he turned and gave her the most adorable grin and motioned with his eyes to follow'.

He was lost yet again, in her beauty, he cant deny she looked gorgeous beautiful pretty hot out of this world all put into one word, she looked surreal, stunning in the white sari, he didnt know why she chose a sari but it was fine with him as long as she came. he liked her for her inner beauty, herself, she as a person, he could see right through her, litrelly, he was smitten by her, her aura, her presence was enough to lose himself, to make him insane, yes cupid had struck him the first time itself, but it kept striking everytime he saw her sensed her felt her, he didnt complain coz he liked it, the sense of falling in love, the hawa hawa looks she gave him, the pyaara pyaara hugs they shared, the intensity the chemistry, he chuckled silently, she told him once long back she was scared of his intensity, he tried toning it down...and would almost succed when something triggered it off again, but the time she told him she loved him...it wasnt he who was intense and passionate, it was she, she was more passionate about it, about their love, the past 2 years apart from bickering a bit here and there she never lost a chance to show her love, she was cute when she did antics to show her love. he slowly motioned her to look around...

she looked around, she noticed orchids her favorite ones hanging delicately the aroma of the candles made her feel like she was in heaven, peaceful and calm. Then something else had caught her attention, roses, rather rose petals neatly laid out asking her a question'..will u be mine? Suddenly Swayam took her hand in his and went down on one knee, she gasped. SW: Ms. Sharon raiprakash, you may already know this but I love you, I've loved you since day one and I hope to see you, love you more every passing day of my life. I want you just you, my siren my love and my life. Of course I might love 2 more girls later in my life'" he paused and smirked while she frowned, then he continued, "one of them is here, her name is Sharon shekhawat, my hopefully soon to be wife, I see her every day in college, but I just hope I continue seeing her admiring her, loving her throughout my entire life, of course if I get bored I'll soon have another girl to love, she calls me 'Dad". She will be our daughter, but all this comes down to one thing miss. Raiprakash'he paused for breath, will you be mine? Will you agree to spend the rest of your life, with me Sharon? As he waited nervously, she became intoxicated, drunk with happiness, she wanted to play a bit more'he looked too cute when he is nervous. She said, "I'm sorry Swayam'" she watched as his face fell'.she smirked and she continued, "Sorry'but I already have a guy in my life, I'm already committed to him, and he looks just like you, he calls me "mom", but he is a dream boy though'and I have one in real life too'he's super cute, makes me feel special, makes me feel loved, makes me feel out of this world, he makes me secure, and no matter what I'll never leave him, coz he is'.she paused for breath watching him, he is mine, he is my Swayam, my personal dose of oxygen, he is you, coz without you I won't live'.not for a minute'.and I would love to spend my entire lifetime, no not lifetime, one life is too short, I want to spend every life with him, coz where you exist I exist, if Swayam is there Sharon will be there. I love you Swayam, more than anything in this world, in existence. Words can't express how happy I am right now'.with that her vision blurred coz of tears. Swayam didn't like to see her cry and he asked if you are happy then why is u crying? Don't cry. Sharon replied your wish my command SW: kab se? she: abhi se, mera hone wali pati. SW: no Sharon, you never have to force yourself for me, I love you for who you are, so your wish my command. Sh: fine, as you say'.vaise thank you so much Swayam, this is all so beautiful, so pretty, sab out of this world ho, I can't believe it's real, it's so surreal, so like a dream I think I'm dreaming and I don't want to get up from this dream'.i want to continue sleeping forever if this is a dream.

SW: hush don't say that, *kisses her forehead* ahaan so you dream about this huh? *serious* sach hai, ye sab sach hai, tum out of this world lag rahi ho aaj, wait sari? Any special occasion? Haan, mujhe pata hai, tum propose karnewali ho, but I didn't expect this' Swayam frowned and asked her how did she know? He didn't mention anything did he? She replied,"I knew coz, I know you, if I'm an open book for you, then I can read you also" saying that they pulled in for a hug and when they broke apart they grinned at each other, excited and happy. They were gonna be to gether forever'and nothing can break it.

They went to the rehearsal hall to inform the gang and when they reached the hall they saw balloons streamers and a huge congratulations swaron banner, suddenly they were showered in confetti, as the gang sang congratulation, and hugged them both they grinned and smiled, never letting go of each other's hand. Simmi rushed to Sharon and demanded to see her ring, when Swayam remembered he smiled sheepishly and went down on one knee again'.and asked her, "will you marry me ms.raiprakash?" she blushed and smiled a yes and he put the ring a tiny delicate one which looked as though it grew on her finger, it had a minute inscription which said ily with a diamond in the centre. Swayam stood up and they embraced, nothing had could or will separate them, they were one soul with one heart in 2 bodies. As the gang cheered and clapped they looked into each other's eyes, content, all was well in their world.


So how was it??? this is 10 pgs on MS-word 😛 hope you enjoy reading it coz i loved writing it 😳😊 hopefully the intrest remains and i continue this into another story...to keep me interested in writing...you guys just have to like & comment 😉 this is vadhana signing off till then 😊❤️

AND:

THANK YOU!🤗🤗⭐️ to all those darling people who commented and liked my OS


Edited by sunvad278 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was really sweet
Loved it
Do write more os n pm me..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Sweet proposal and ending

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you all of you for comments and likes...i've got an idea...for an ff...and its kinda based on a true life incident...I'm gonna pen it down here first...i meant on the forum...not here here...those who'd like PM s plz add me to your buddy list :)Lol (loads of love),Vadhana
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved d update..
it was awesome..
beautifully penned..
i loved d whole proposal n sharon answer a lot...
it was sweet n beautifull...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
i loved your os...count a new reader vandhana. love..medha
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Loved the OS..:D

Do write more..:)

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