CIRCLE OF LIFE SERIES part 2 n pg 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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this s just a random thought which popped up n my head...here it goes...

THE CIRCLE OF LIFE SERIES

Two- shot: REALIZATIONS

She felt a bolt of pain in her neck and numb below her neck...Tears refused to stop flowing down her eyes. She felt a hand literally shivering push her hair back from her face...She was being sucked into a dark black hole ...no she didn't want to go... She desperately wanted to hold the manly hand and never let go of it...not knowing that its owner was equally desperate to save her...She felt so many voices calling to her...she wanted to respond but couldn't .she opened her mouth to say something...

"Rishab" was the only name which came out and in a jerk the hand soothing her was gone and everything around her went black...

"Madhu...Madhu..." was the name everyone was whispering...around her, begging her to come back as she was wheeled into the operation theatre...

Everything around him had gone quite and inexisistant...Somewhere there was a crack in his heart and the ice fort he had built had come crashing around him...

"Chief...Chief"

Bituji called out but to his astonishment saw a totally different person before him who feel on the floor on his knees with tears pouring out of his eyes ...

All Rk could see was the deep ,purest and the true love his heart held for Madhu...There she was his angel ,his personal ray of sunshine as he called in a very serious condition because of him...

Sultan felt a dread creeping in him after years ...He felt the same pain which he felt when he saw his wife Pari's dead body in front of him...He felt Aryan crying badly .his hands around him...Sultan stumbled back ...no he could not break not now...He had to finish of Bhujang who was responsible for Madhu's situation...

Rk felt the REALIZATION strike as a very powerful lightening...burning him... HE was faintly aware of hands which were shaking him...

"No the person in front of her was not RK anymore it was her Rishu..."Radha's maternal instincts kicked in ..

Everything he had done passed before his eyes as a panorama...all the cruel words,taunts,betrayals,insults he hurled at his Madhu came before him...All he wanted was to be the one who should die for killing an angel like Madhubala...His ego ,stardom and everything had turned into dust he killed her mentally and somehow he was the reason she was dying physically as well...He would never forgive her for trying to save a shameless animal like him, risking her own life ...but he would never..be able to love himself anymore if anything happened to her...

HE NEEDED HER TO FIGHT WITH HIM,LAUGH WITH HIM,COMFORT HIM WHEN HE THOUGHT ABOUT HIS DAD AND OF ALL BECAUSE HE LOVED HER MORE THAN HIS LIFE...

PART 2 in pg 7

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UK_VS thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice. I want this to happen.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome...brought a tear to my eyes
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully written 😊
Edited by mevanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gr8 part waiting for the second part of this two shot...👍🏼

ud soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ud soon nice part u nailed it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg.. I hope nothing happens to her.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing part..but I wish the story ends here...coz it actually matched the title...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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THIS IS LIKE A DREAM - RK REPENTING WHAT HE DID
GREAT STORY
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Posted: 12 years ago
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coming up next

Realizations-concluding part...

hw Madhu got injured ...wat s RK gonna do?...


MAKING UP TO YOU...

Can Rk really make up to Madhu...
RK spoiling Madhu rotten

AM I FORGIVEN?

the final part in the series...

will madhu give another chance to RK?
wat happens to Sultan's love?

guys do i hv anyone interested for this series ...each will hv two parts each...

anyone in...
the likes and comments will let me knw...
i am waiting...😭


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