AsYa OS- Kiss Me Goodnight

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Hello :D
This is my second OS in this forum. Its totally different from what I write. It may seem a little complicated at first but you'll get to know everything towards the end.
Hope you guys like it! 😳


KISS ME GOODNIGHT..


"When a person who really loves you
Kisses you..
It was not the lips he kissed
It was your soul... "


The leaves started to flutter with the cold wind which made her hair sway to its rhythm. She clutched her coat freezing because of the cold. Her wedding ring glistened in the moonlight as she strode on the lonely lane to meet her son. She had to make him feel special. He had turned 8 years old today.
She reached Mark's house whose mother greeted her with warmth.
"Hello Mrs Khan! We were just waiting for you. He is just dying to see you",she said with a broad smile.
Zoya nodded reciprocating her smile as she went inside to meet her son.
"Aatif!!!", Zoya screamed with joy as her son ran into her arms.
"Happy Birthday My dear",she said, pecking him on his cheek.
Aatif hugged his mother with all his might. He loved him, loved him very very much. She was his everything. Her smile was his best gift. He had seen her cry everyday hiding from him. He hated to see tears in her eyes. He knew they were there because of his father. And he never knew why she cried for him. Never had he asked her, nor was he planning to.

Zoya left him with his friends as he joyfully played with them. She had hated to send him to a boarding school. But she had no choices then. She couldn't even manage herself. How was she supposed to manage Aatif? She was struggling with life. She didn't want him to face all the grief. She wanted to send him away from all of that. But now she had decided that he was going to stay with her forever. No boarding schools now. She wanted her son with her now. She had felt sad that she couldn't pick him from the boarding school and thanked Mark's mother for doing the same.

"Lets go home dear",Zoya said with a smile.
"Ammi! Please can Mark also stay at our home tonight? Pleaaseee".
Zoya couldn't say a No. After all it was his birthday.
"Ofcourse",she said.
Aatif smiled. he was more than happy to be with his mother. She had promised now that he was going to be with HER now. Zoya bid everyone goodbye.
It was even more chilly as she walked her way back along with the two kids. They were playing with the snow in front of her as they ran ahead of her. She stared at Aatif and her lips curved into a smile. He was just like his father.
"Zoyaaa", he heard his sound behind her.
"Asad! You're late",she said.
"I know! I know! I am sorry !", Asad said as he pulled her into his arms. His fragrance always drived her mad. This was the place she loved the most in her life. His safe arms. She reciprocated his hug with all her might. Even after so many years of marriege, his one touch drove her mad. Asad cupped her face as they broke their hug.
"I love you",he said, closing the distance between their lips. Zoya clutched his shirt collar as he took her lips into his. The kiss was passionate and with time it turned wild as their tongues fought with each other for dominance. He ran his hand over her back while she ruffled her hands through his hair.
They broke the kiss struggling for breath.
"You didn't wish your son",she complained as she finally caught her breath.
"He knows my blessings are always with him",he said.
Zoya nodded.
Another chilling freeze. She closed her eyes as she hugged herself, feeling cold. And she felt his arms around her and she suddenly felt all warm.
She loved him and he loved her. What could be more wonderful than seeing the one you love, first thing in the morning. Getting him as her husband was her desire, her sheer destiny. He had sacrificed everything for her, from his family to his Life.
She gently opened her eyes and her smile vanished. He had gone. She looked around. There was no one. She sighed.
There never was.

***

She kissed Aatif goodnight.
"Ammi.."
"Hmm"
"Why hasn't my father wished me Happy Birthday yet?", Aatif asked innocently.
"He has. He was the first one to wish you dear",she said with a smile.
"No, he didn't! It has been so long. Where is he Ammi? tell him i am angry with him.",he said as he pouted.
Zoya giggled at his cuteness. She took his hands and placed on his heart.
"He is here",she said.
Aatif was satisfied. He was used to hearing that. He hugged his mother as he lied beside her.
Zoya leaned towards the table and took out a photo frame. Her fingers touched his smiling face as she ran her hands on his photograph.
"Asad.. Only if you were alive to wish your son",she whispered and kissed the photograph.
Zoya turned towards Aatif. She had to be strong. She knew Asad was there, somewhere up in the stars, looking at them. And she didn't want to let him down. She had a reason to live now.. Only reason. Aatif.
She wiped the lone tear from her eyes and snuggled close to Aatif as the stars smiled at them.

*****
Hope you guys liked it.
I would be looking forward to your comments and likes.
I welcome criticism with open arms. And for this OS, i am really looking forward for some as this is my first attempt to such a writing piece. I would feel M successfull if I made you a little emotional 😆
Do comment.
Thanks 😳
Buddy Me To recieve PMs for my future works on AsYa.
And if anyone didn't understand the OS, please do tell me :)

Another OS Of Mine


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Gurmeet4Drashti thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
Edited ...

Hey ...
Yayyy !!! I'm first 😛

It was so poignant

I just loved the mother-son duo ...

I just loved AsYa's scene 😃
I really thought he was there ...

OMG Asad is dead ... 😲 😭
Poor Zoya and Atif
Edited by Gurmeet4Drashti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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My heart broke for them. Really sweet OS :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was so emotional yet wonderful
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful❤️
I had tears in my eyes... U should definitely write more dear...😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its beautiful! <3

Asad's dead?

Omg! Aisa mat karo! Asad ko mat maaro! :-/
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

unres.

Although sad.

But WOOHAA. 👏 👏 👏 👏

Yupp THIS IS IT.




koi kasar nahi chori thi, hume rulaa ne ke liye!! 😆 😆
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So sweet. It made me sad. Great writing!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful n emotional os
like is not working..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*Edited*
Zoya has a son of 8😳
He stayed at a boarding school because Zoya couldn't let him suffer😕
AsYa cute moment
Oh my gosh!! Asad is dead😭😭
I feel so bad for the duo😭😭
This was so emotional😭
Wonderfully penned. 👍🏼👏
Loved it to every bits😳
Edited by asyaforlife - 12 years ago

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