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This is the first time I am writing in this forum. I actually wanted to see his scene in the show... so wrote about it. hope you like it :)


He searched her all around but she was nowhere to be found. He was tired, perspiring. His legs were giving away as he ran into the woods to find her. His body was collapsing. Blood was oozing out of his arm where they hit him but he didn't stop. He was undeterred. He had to find her at any cost.
He stopped suddenly. he could hear something. He closed his eyes to listen with concentration.
"Anklets", He said in mind.
He turned around and there she was running towards him.
before he could think about anything or say something she leaped into his welcoming arms.
"Asad! I was so scared. Where had you been?",Zoya cried in his arms.
Asad finally started to breathe. He was more than relieved to see her.. ALIVE, be it shouting at him but she was there with him safe and sound. He smiled into her hair and held her even more tight, his hands feeling every touch of her.
"I am so glad to find you zoya. Thank god you are safe! I was so...",he stopped.
Why? Why was he so scared? Why did he feel as if he was losing HIS LIFE? Why ?.. And that too.. for .. her... for Zoya.
Asad gently withdrew his hands from her waist. Zoya too took a back step, feeling awkward. Asad looked down at his shirt, which was already stained with blood, was now totally wet.
"Umm... Sorry",Zoya said understanding what he was thinking.
"Its Okay.. Lets go from here",he whispered.
Zoya quickly held his fingers ready to go wherever he wanted her to. She trusted him fully now. He had saved her life, not once but twice. She owed him too much. Zoya looked up into his eyes.
Asad felt a thunder go up his spine as he felt her fingers intertwined with his. And then the smile she gave him, blew his mind away. He fought the urge to pull her into his arms with much effort and quickly looked away from her eyes.

"There they are! ", they both heard a noise and turned around.
The men were there again. They found them finally. But this time asad won't let them hurt zoya. He would go back to bhopal from this cursed place and never come back to Mangalpur again. He moved closer to zoya who was visibly terrified.
"What are you waiting for! Shoot that damn girl!", Dilawar mamu shouted at his men.
In the next split second, a bullet oozed past zoya's stomach before asad could do anything.
"ZOYAAA",he screamed as she fell into his arms, blood oozing out of her abdomen.
Another bullet on her chest and she collapsed.
"NOOO!!! Stop!! Zoya", Asad screamed with all his might. Zoya lay in his arms trying to breathe but she couldn't.
"Asad...",she tried to speak.
"Zoya.. ! Zoya! Don't close your eyes.. please!",Asad cried, his heart was breaking into pieces.
The men ran away leaving them there.


~~~~
"ZOYAAA",Asad got up frantically from his bed. It took him a couple of minutes to register himself. he looked around to see his room. The clock had struck 3am. he touched his forehead and realised he was sweating badly. Was it a nightmare?,he thought. He threw the blacket away and ran out of the room.
The next minute he was in front of zoya's room. The door was ajar. He peeped in slightly
Zoya was there, sleeping peacefully hugging her pillow. Asad breathed a sigh of relief. He didn't know what this girl was doing to him, but whatever it was, it was strong. He walked inside and sat beside her bed, staring at her beautiful face. His hands stroked her cheeks gently as he reminisced the moments spent with her. He couldn't help but lean forward and kiss her forehead. He smiled to himself and stood up. She was making him feel what no one else could.
"I hate to say this Miss Zoya Farooqi... ",he said to himself looking at her face,"but I am falling in love with you".

~~~~~

How was it? hope you guys liked it.
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Thanks :)

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Supriya its fabulous!
So filled with emotions n finally Asad realizationTat kiss☺️
Superb work dear👍🏼


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Posted: 12 years ago
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this was very very very nicely written...loved how you showed the depth of Asad's emotions...amazing os👏 👏
PS-my fav line "I hate to say this Miss Zoya Farooqi... ",he said to himself looking at her face,"but I am falling in love with you".
do continue soon
PPS-your banner is awesome luvd it...😃
Edited by trouble_006 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was awesome 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: trouble_006

this was very very very nicely written...loved how you showed the depth of Asad's emotions...amazing os👏 👏
PS-my fav line "I hate to say this Miss Zoya Farooqi... ",he said to himself looking at her face,"but I am falling in love with you".
do continue soon
PPS-your banner is awesome luvd it...😃


Thanks alot dear! Thanku thanku thanku 😆

Thats my fav line too 😳

And for the banner.. Thanks..It was just a random edit by the way 😆
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wow awesome OS; clean write up

pls do contine soon
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awesome os
beautifully written
realization part was too good
d continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing os

Wish to see such a scene actually taking place

Hope cv's read ur os

Do write more


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