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Originally posted by: neha512

15 minutes if u want teaser in next part... 25 min if in this part😉

btao kya chahiye

Originally posted by: neha512

15 minutes if u want teaser in next part... 25 min if in this part😉

btao kya chahiye

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

i just came to check and saw this post... 😲

take half an hour.. but i want teaser in this part... warna u will make it the precap...

but does that mean u r leaving in a cliff again

NOTE

I read all your comments guys, but one thing was common in mostly all the comments and that was HOW CAN MAAN BE SO HARSH, VIOLENT AND MOST IMPORTANTLY LEAVE GEET THERE ALL ALONE???

So I am here giving you all my point of view of that part.

1. First of all it wasn't night or evening even, it was afternoon only, so night dark alone and others comment failed.

2. Saying that geet had done all that in gratitude of whatever shalini did and so maan should have been understanding, tell me does that gratitude gives her right to do anything even destroy other's life???

3. Point that maan is just sexually frustrated that's why he was being wild with her, so I agree he was angry of rejection, but more than sexual frustration it was an ego thing and i admit no man can take that in a healthy way... and moreover not from the woman who is his wife.

Secondly, no marriage is complete without physical relationship so kya hua agar maan wanted that too...

4. there is a saying, a girl is physically weak but had more mental strength whereas a man may be how ever strong physically, but they are the softest at issues of heart. And why is it that all are shocked if he left her alone there. Agreed she is 16 yr old, young hai, but why no one understands his mental condition.

I had read everywhere till now ki maan had great mental strength, he is caring even after receiving betrayal, but tell me if you would have been in his place in real life what would have been your reaction. As they say, in anger, we don't use our mind, so why can't that be applicable on maan too. This story is not just a fanfic i am trying to connect it with somewhere to reality, i want to show a real life in these immortal characters.

5. And those who blamed suhana, the girl didn't even know that her sister is in problem, then how she would have helped her.

i hope i had cleared your doubts.. for further issues, do ask me i will try to solve them too...

BEFORE READING THE UPDATE, IT'S IMPORTANT THAT YOU GUYS READ THE NOTE GIVEN IN ABOVE POST.

⭐️HAPPY WOMEN'S DAY GUYS.⭐️

PART 15

Maan went to his favourite place, a water canal, in the southeast region of delhi. The dam was filled with calmness, as pure sparkling water flew through it, the bright rays of afternoon sun was falling on water and sparkling it, giving a glossy effect in the surrounding.

Maan sat on it's bank, dipping his legs in the water, while his hand was busy in caressing the blades of long grasses that covered the entire surrounding area. Due to bright sun, the area was almost empty, giving him the silence and loneliness required.

He rethought the words that geet said. She hid so much with him, she cheated him, she made him hate himself. She broke each vow which we took, she didn't kept the honesty in our relation, she did everything just because of that chachi of hers.

Why why didn't you told me everything geet, 3 weeks, you had three weeks in your hand to stop all that, still you didn't. you had 5 days to tell me geet even after this marriage, but you didn't. agar mujhe aaj bhi nhi pata chalta to kya hota, you wouldn't had told me then too na, he said as he let the lone tear slip from his eyes.

Itna bada dhoka, hmara rishta, ab to mujhe wo bhi apna nhi lagta. Ab to mujhe tum bi apni nhi lagti. Pehle to itne door hoke bi mai tumhe apne kareeb pata tha, phir tum itni kareed hoke bhi mujhse door kyu ho gyi.

Aur maine kya kiya, I was going to destroy life of a 16 year old, it's a sin, even god won't be able to forgive me then how will I forgive myself. But was it my fault even, did I forced you in anything in our relation, nhi, it was you who gave me hopes and then destroyed them so brutally.

Geet I won't forgive you for this, you not only hurt me, but my family too, meri maa ko jhute sapne diye, mujhe jhoote sapne diye, mere ghar walo ko bhi dhoka diya.

He took a stone in his hand and threw it wildly in water, as it drowned with a splash keeping ripples in it. Kabhi mai bhi is pani k tarah tha, but you took away my calmness, my happiness. Kash mai bhi tumhare saath aisa kar skta, but I wasn't brought up with such low values. But you had your chance now, prove me ki you at least care for this relation, or then I will decide our future.

It was by evening when he reached home, around 6, sun was about to set while the sky glowed with pink orange shades, declaring the end of the day and maybe of some relations too. As savitri saw the, she asked him about geet, aa gye tum dono, bata ke to jana tha that you are taking your wife outside, mai to ek baar dar hi gyi tum dono ko na dekh ke, said savitri as she moved to bring water for him.

Are geet kha hai, ander nhi ayi, she said as she saw him standing alone at the door making maan shocked. He looked at the watch and wondered she proved me right after all, she doesn't think this marriage as anything. His heart pained, it so much wanted to prove his mind wrong but it seems, god isn't it's side now.

Maa mai abhi aya, he said as he moved outside and started his bike. He rode to handa house and saw geet still sitting there, looking nowhere at particular. Her face was filled with tear marks, kohl fully smeared near her eyes, she looked week, lost and what not.

His heart pained with the thought of his women in pain, but then his mind countered, did he really said HIS, what an irony his mind mocked. If it was a day before, he would have hugged her tightly and whispered sweet notings till she calm down but now did he even had a right to do that.

Ealier, he used to see a woman in her, a woman who was brought on this earth just for him, to satisfy his heart, but now he just sees a girl in her, a girl with whom he has no relation. And that marriage, yeah he values his vows and he will fulfill them but now in a different sense, he don't want to keep any relation with her not even of a friend.

And for her it was never a marriage, so it won't matter much to her, and waise bhi ek tarfa rishta sirf dard hi deta hai, so why to bind yourself with it.

He went to her and pulled her by hand. She came out of her reverie as she was pulled brutally from her earlier position. Geet was sitting there since the time he left, hours passed and her body tuned numb due to being in a same position. She was shocked when she saw him; he was the last person she would have expected at the time. Her eyes were locked on him, mind working hard to gather the reason of his presence, he is angry she is sure of that, but then what does he want now from her.

He sat down on his back, and jerked it to life, accelerating it and waiting for her to sit. Geet stood beside him looking at him, her eyes fixed on his little red eyes, she wondered did it was red because of anger or crying. Did he cried, her heart felt needles prick her, she could never think a strong man like him could cry, no it must be from anger only. Contrary to her assumption, maan did cried for arms after god knows so many years, and maybe it's only she who could have make him weak to this extent.

People say correctly, it's better to have thousand enemies than a someone special one, as that person can make you do things which those thousands of them can't do together. Will you mind to sit, or are you planning to stand whole day there, geet jerked out of reverie, as she heard his rough angry voice, her heart jumped as his words sent a chill down her spine.

Mai kaise, she whispered trying to understand his thoughts. Geet could you just shut up and sit, he said, his words spoke finality not agreeing for any argument now, and in the next second she sat behind him as the bike zoomed in air.

As they reached home, maan eyed her to go to room. He in no condition wanted his mom to see her in that condition. She would immediately know something is wrong, and he can't approve a bit of tension on his mother's face due to that girl.

He went to his parent's room where both were busy appraising his wife, thinking how lucky they are to get her. maan just wondered how will they react when they come to know about the truth. He entered inside and said I want to discuss something important with you guys.

His parents got concerned seeing his stressed face, those red eyes, and they knew the matter is something serious.

He sat near his mother and held her hand and said his decision.

Are you sure bte about that, itne achanak se, I think you should rethink about it bte, it's a big decision, her mother said worried.

Maa, do you have any problem with it, do you don't want her to go??? He said worried thinking hope his mother won't refuse now. it took lot of his strength to decide that, it's the last option for them.

Maan she is your wife, you have right, I don't know what to say, but I trust your decision, and ha did you arranged everything, you know na bhut sare changes karne padenge, did you discussed with your company about residence.

Maa you don't worry, everything is decided. Other employees were going with their family so company has given us separate flats only, don't worry; he said and looked at his dad, who was happy with his decision. He too was thinking about that since few days, and his son did exactly the same without him voicing his words.

He came to his room, where he saw her sitting on the end corner of bed. She was still lost thinking how can her chachi go away, like this as if a magic happened and she vanished. Maan just ignored her, tomorrow he is leaving for Mumbai, have late night train and a long day too, so it's better he take some sleep if he could get some.

He laid on his corner of bed, giving his back to her, she looked at him so silent, whenever she sees him, she realizes what mistake she did, but he should also understand na. she too laid on her place, not knowing what to do now, what her life would be now.

It was 9, when she woke up, she was late, she realized and ran up to take a bath. Her side was empty, it means maan was up before, babaji what's his mood now, I can't even think, she said as she ran to washroom.

At around 11, maan came and found his mother treating geet like princess, not letting her do anything. And the more he sees all that, the more he realizes that his decision was better. His mother came and asked, did you got ticket at the last moment, she asked worried.

Yes maa, tatkal ticket mil gya that too in the same bogie, I will arrange the seats later talking with TC. Her mother took a sigh of relief and smiled and then gave geet a smile. Geet had looked down the moment she saw his face, not wanting to see his anger again. She wondered what they are talking about, which ticket. Since morning she was shocked to see savitri super sweet, she didn't even chided her for sleeping too late, nor did she let her enter kitchen even.

Maan eyed her to come to their room, and she immediately nodded. As she reached her room, she looked at him, as he placed to empty suitcase on bed, and said, pack your everything, and I mean everything, I don't want a single piece that belongs to you in this room, in this house, samjhi, he said as he moved out of the room.

Geet knew he is throwing her out of the house, but can she blame him for it, no she can't. but now the main question was where will she go??? She can't go to handa house, she has no other relative in town, suhana, yeah she has enough money to reach her place but then her in laws would not let her in even, when they will come to know about the last one month.

Hotels, not even in her dreams, at the max she could survive in a low class hotel in delhi for a week and a day meal with the amount of funds she has. She looked up, leaving her fate on his hands, aapne bigada hai aap hi banao, as she started her packing.

Finally night arrived, and by that time she knew that whole family is aware about her leaving but they were far too happy with her leaving. She felt bad with that. Maan took both their bags, as he kept them in hall while his mother applied tilak on maaneet's forhead, wishing them a safe journey.

Dono ek dusre ka khyal rakhna, and atleast roz ek call karna, she said as they took their leave. Mai kha ja rhi hu, she asked as they both settled in a taxi. He didn't bothered replying to her and kept looking out of the window.

They reached railway station and their train was on the platform. Tum yhi ruko, he said as he started keeping their bags inside their coach. It was the last bag he was going to take inside, when geet asked, please ab to bta dijiye, ye aap kya kar rhe ho, she said as her anxiety crossed her level of patience.

Maan looked at geet with cold eyes. Geet knew she had sent him so far that it would be very difficult to get him back now.

Maan after a second said, geet it is said that god decides who walks into our life, but it's on us to decide whom we let walk away and whom we let stay, whom we refuse to let go. Geet you had chance to come back, to show that you still value this relation but you didn't. I left you in handa house alone, agar is rishte me tum manti to you would have come back, yha wapas ati aur mujhpar mere ghar par haq jatati, but you didn't came, you kept sitting there for long all alone still not once you thought to return that house. Now you had lost that chance and me too.

We both are going to Mumbai, I will get you admitted in a school to complete your studies. But yeah mat sochna ki I care for you, no I don't, I care for the vows I took to support you, to help you in difficulties, I will be beside you till you will be able to stand on your feet, but the day you will be self-sufficient, I would be freed from you. I could have got you registered here too, but the more you stay with mom, the more she will get attached with you and the more she would be hurt too. And I don't want my mom in the same condition as mine. I am keeping you away from her, so that she could get over with you, and at the right time I would tell her the truth.

Geet was shocked hearing that piece of information. She couldn't believe he is doing so much for her. even her relatives didn't thought so much for her, the way maan thought about her future. Her eyes filled with tears looking at him with gratitude while she actually wanted to die for the sin she did to him.

Maan saw her eyes filled with tears, and he knew what she was thinking, but ten stopped himself, did I even know what she is thinking, agar aisa hota to he would not have been in this condition.

He looked at her once again, and then at the vermillion that was filled in her maang. He kept his thumb on her forehead and immediately wiped her, making a tear spill of her eyes. He then said, geet that looks nice if you actually value it, ab to hamare rishta hi nhi to in sabki koi jarurat nhi. Ab even you want me to be back to you, but you won't be able to reach for me' never.

He said as he picked his bag to leave for Mumbai while geet followed him beside. Did he even know what he had done for her, she wondered as she sat beside him on coach.

Ok tell me how many actually thought that's what the teaser really meant. I actually made you worried for no reason' lOL'😆

The longest part I ever wrote on the occasion of women's day so I need long comments too.

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NOTE

I read all your comments guys, but one thing was common in mostly all the comments and that was HOW CAN MAAN BE SO HARSH, VIOLENT AND MOST IMPORTANTLY LEAVE GEET THERE ALL ALONE???

So I am here giving you all my point of view of that part.

1. First of all it wasn't night or evening even, it was afternoon only, so night dark alone and others comment failed.

2. Saying that geet had done all that in gratitude of whatever shalini did and so maan should have been understanding, tell me does that gratitude gives her right to do anything even destroy other's life???

3. Point that maan is just sexually frustrated that's why he was being wild with her, so I agree he was angry of rejection, but more than sexual frustration it was an ego thing and i admit no man can take that in a healthy way... and moreover not from the woman who is his wife.

Secondly, no marriage is complete without physical relationship so kya hua agar maan wanted that too...

4. there is a saying, a girl is physically weak but had more mental strength whereas a man may be how ever strong physically, but they are the softest at issues of heart. And why is it that all are shocked if he left her alone there. Agreed she is 16 yr old, young hai, but why no one understands his mental condition.

I had read everywhere till now ki maan had great mental strength, he is caring even after receiving betrayal, but tell me if you would have been in his place in real life what would have been your reaction. As they say, in anger, we don't use our mind, so why can't that be applicable on maan too. This story is not just a fanfic i am trying to connect it with somewhere to reality, i want to show a real life in these immortal characters.

5. And those who blamed suhana, the girl didn't even know that her sister is in problem, then how she would have helped her.

i hope i had cleared your doubts.. for further issues, do ask me i will try to solve them too...

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

update kahaa hai?

Originally posted by: neha512

piche h yaar