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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update
Luvd it... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago


thnks alot dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepa5

i known i known i am late 😔

sorry for this di 😳
honestly ur amazing writer love u ❤️
come to the point -
1st - yeh kya tha di, 💔 NUPUR, she is in trouble 😲
in sab me voh kahase agai 😡
2nd - bechara mayank, 🤪 kya connection hai di koi bhi NUPUR ko pechan nahi paya par hamare hero ne heroine ko pehchan hi liya ise kehate hai ishq wala love 🤣❤️


thanks for update me a lovely ans emotional ff
it precious for me
love u


Deepa
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its oky deepa...
thnks alot dear for liking my wirtings n ur kind words...

lol hasti ho tum un dono k haal per... bori baat hai..lol... han akhir woh hero hai woh nhi pechny k tu aur kaun pehcny ga ...
agay agay dekho kya kerty hain doo

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kinnzy

Amazing update

Luvd it... 😊



thnku so much
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Fiza, wonderful update.👏


u told me before that nupur will be the main key of the story ... n now i got it.😃

brilliant thinking fiza .👏... u r grt 👏... amazing story line ... 😃

nupur kitni asani se apne health ka faida utha kar sab kuch mayank ko bata dia ... yahan tak terrorists k position bhi ... par kisi ko pata hi nhi chala ... this is nupur ... jhansi ki rani nupur kumari ... beauty with brain😊 (sometime without😛) ... lol😆

i loved benji here. he ws so depressed that u dint give him a giirl in frist two, n he even dnt knw that u should giving him gf in this season or not ... lol ... poor soul😆

bt his act was so nice yet he remove every bit of tension. actually he cant remove, but decrease a lil bit of tension. like him.😃

so they r going for blue print ... 15-12=3 yahi logic hai na??😳

waiting for next update.

love ya🤗






thnks alit dear
intiially i thought shayd boring hojay ... as whole of the ff is a days story.. and not mayanknupur togther.. plus such kinda clues... but i love the fact th all of u loved it... im feeling so good

hn nupur kumari ki kya baat ... us k deemgh chal raha hai

benji ki dil k murad ab pori hogi... us k number agayg hai.. jusr wait
ya i donto want csi to loss its fun elemt so i hope i do jsutice to it ...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Rplyd to u all…

A very Happy birthday to Mehak( clustersofstar)

Chapter: 6

He entered in the dark house and nothing was helping it…nothing at all… in just few hrs the whole world everything around him has change so so suddenly…. Just in the morning he was planning all his vacations cuming in few days and now here he doesn't even know they will evry meet agin or not…

He cant be sure , he just cant be sure… the motive is unclear, who they are is unclear, the fact that nupur is there and they will not find out her identity there is no guarantee… and plus they way she has called and has started to make a plan.. he knew very well she is unstoppable now… she will do evry thing that she can to safe those people…. She will do evy possible thing without even worrying for herself…

For the first time in his carer he cant think like an officer , he cant make himself to comfort that she is on a mission that is it…

Everything has turn into a mess a complete mess… he press the ligt

As he press the light it didn't turned on…. Strange it is how can this be possible… he very silently placed his bag aside and than took his gun out… his house electricity not working surely indicte sumthing big… just recently he has shifted to delhi and threads from vikran's case are still there… he knew wht is the risk to them in all this…

He moved inside slowly look around.. there was no one in the corridors nor in the drawing area… as he opend the door and there was no one…

He moved more insde and then found gun placed on his forhead..

Hand's in the air… the person said…

Mayank: hold my gun than… Mrs Sharma

Nupur: donot play with me…. Seedh seedh jaha kah rahi hoon wah chalo

Mayank: kya baat hai.. shifting to delhi has its own perks… u have turned into a seductress… blind fold kaha hai…

Nupur: she moved her gun down to his cheeks to his chin seductively…. Really ACP Sharma u think so…

Mayank: sigh… I so belive so… n now can I make things they way I belive…

Nupur: chor siphai khel rahy hain hum.. sheela ki jawani nhi… anadr chalo…

Mayank: chukled… chalo.. utha ker lay jao gi kya… he droped his weight back to make himself fall on her..

Nupur: mayank… chalo nah…

He moved inside in the dining area… and smiled widely…

Happy birthday to you… happy

Nupur: yeah kya hai….

Mayank: tum gany wali thi tu mein ny socha kan band kerlo… birthday waly din deaf hojao ga tu socho achi baat hai kya…

Nupur: mayank sharam tumhari tu…

The dinning table has a small cake with a candle on it… lightening the whole place..he grip her hand and drag her infront… in all this not looking at her was making everything so incomplete… as soon as her face appears in the slight glow of the candle… he gasp.. its sight evrytime he look at her….

Mayank: u know… he moved her in his embrace circle his hand around her wiast…looking at her closely…. This is sight.. a sight I can never get enough of…

Nupur: my god mayank sharama ..yeah police ko kya hua.. shairy kerny lagi… happy birthday hubby…

Mayank: thanku so much wifey… he leaned forward and kissed her passionately savoring the moment… thanking her for her presence… and just letting him self feel him… she pressed her self more towards him to make the herself feel making it more deep..

Moving away she hugged him tightly as possible…. It has been just few weeks he is away and It felt so incomplete.. so much…

Mayank: missed ya to …..

Nupur: mein ny kab kaha k I missed u….

Mayank: really.. I can see that…

Nupur: acha chalo… cake tu cut kero…

They move towards the table… and he was about to cut it

Nupur: wish tu mango…

Mayank: kay mango

Nupur: kuch bhi…

Mayank: wht I if I have everything….

Nupur: than ask nothing change….

With that he blew the candle and cut the cake…

The light came in his house breaking his moment….

Samrat; kya hua light kyun nhi jali..

He looked around … and he came back to reality .. it was just a moment they have lived once

Mayank: nothing… I was about to…

Samrat sigh pretty well know wht he is feeling in all this…. But nobody can do anything … the only thing tht can help is solving this case ASAP

Mayank: chal yaha bhait ker dekhty hain sab

They all settle down

Mayank: ek baat meray samhj nhi aai… yeah log itni bewaquf kasay hain k us ko mjh se baat kerny day rahy hain…

Samrat: ajeeb se baat hai yeah.. per jasay woh baat ker rahi hai kisi ko pata nhi chaly ga…

Benji: abay kisi ko tu kya humin bhi pata nhi chal raha hai woh bol kya rahi hai… meray tu uper se nikal raha hai

Mayank: oye yeah itni intelligent batein teri smajh se uper hi hain.. tujh se ja kaha tha kiya

Benji: yeah lay airport k map…

Samrat: per yeah tu office mein bhi tha is mein khass kya hai

Mayank: yeah aur barha hai… more detailed

Beni: hum un k locations k kasay pata keray jo footage unhony di hai waha se kuch pata nhi chal raha hai..

Mayank: per jo info nupur day rahi hai us se kafi kuch pata chal raha hai….

Samrat: info…matlab..

Mayank: tu mjhy ktiny salo se janta hai

Benji: tu is waqt humari muhabbat k inmtehan layna chahta hai mayank… kya hogaya hai tujhy… itna ghara saadma laga hai tujhy

Mayannk: zayada bekar ki baatein maat ker warna zindagi bhar k sadma lagwa doo ga tujhy

Benji: yaar woh tu mjhy lagta hai nhi… pata nhi meri wali ki entrance iis season mein bhi hogi k nhi…sigh…

Samrat: aay khuda… mein saray bhagwagno ko bhoong lagoo ga is ki shadi ker ado..

Mayank: tum sab k hogaya…

Samrat: han tu bool

Mayank: watch mein change nhi kerta… aur yeah baat nupur janti hai… yeah sirf ek hi watch hai jo dad ki hai jo mein hamesha pehnta hoon chahy kuch hojay….

Benji: tu woh tery liyan gift mein watch kyun lay gi

Mayank: woh humain kcuh bata rahi hai

Samrat: matlab….

Mayank: yeah map dekh raha hai…. Yeah center mein waiting area hai international passenger k liayn… aur yaha on ur left Seiko k display area hai…. Yaha

Benji: yani they are here…

Mayank: yes..

Samarat: ek min aur us k ass pass circle mein 15 log hain jo guard ker rahy hain… my god..

Mayank: with the two head… in front of them.. nupur jaha thi us k bechy hi yeah point hai .. warna woh yeah nhi kahti k

Benji: us ny yeah watch li hai…

Mayank: excalty…

Samrat" brilliant….

Benji: 15 log tu zayda nhi hai

Samrat: kam bhi nhi hai..with arms…

Mayank: and hostages ….un ki safety sab se bara issue hai … hum waha ja ker fire nhi khol sakty…. Per ke baat samjh nhi aai… charo taraf ajeeb sa glass se kya murad hai uski…

Benji: yeah area glass windows k sath hai

Mayank: han per yeah tu sab ko pata hai… its irrelevant point woh mention kyun keray gi

Samrat: koi tu baat hai…. For sure…

Benji: ek min… sheeshay ki dewar yani jo nazar nhi ati.. is k matlab yeah k samny tu yeah log hai per aur pechay se they have covered the place to

Mayank: bingo… meaning there are plenty of them too there…

Samrat: kya baat nupur kumari tum tu cha gai yaar…

Benji: after all she is using two brains… tu

Mayank: two brains?/

Benji: han nah… ek us k khud k dosra little champ k jis k andar tu sadu mayank ki bhi genes hai tu soch woh kitna soch sakti hai ..

Mayank smiled this time from his heart….

Samrat: wasy just imagine in k choto hoga kasay….thora sadu aur thora tafree….

Benji: aur deemgh per kuh control lagna paray ga as indono k combo… phew… but ek masala hoga..

Mayank: kya

Benji: us ki love life hum log dekhy ga as us mein us k dono parents padal hai

Mayank: tu tu pass bhi maat jana us ki love life k samjha… ek ki jaga 15 hogi phr uski… n guys lets get serious…. lets hunt any place that we can get inside of this airport… we have to move in

Samrat: its not that so easy

Mayank: I know tht samrat… per hum asay hath per hath dhary tu nhi bhait sakty nah

………..

Nupur: pls mera BP bht high rahta hai.. mera baby problem mein ajay ga…. Mjh un se baat kenry dain… mein koi asi baat nhi ker rahi hoo ap khud poch lay… bus woh pass hongy tu..

He was hating it.. she was hating his weakness and he was hating it.. he knew wht it means at this stage of time to have ur partner beside u… he pretty well knew that…. Plus they way this girl is she seems to be very weak and fragile… sigh this isn't done.. emotions in his work are not at all involved… yet he cant see another woman die with the thought of her child 's death…

Man: no

Nupur: mein kya kerlo gi… mjhy thori pata hai ap kaun ho…

She was right sumhwere she cant do anything even if she will tell anything about them she cant do anything… and whterver they have been discussing infront of her if she will tell anyone they are checking her talks .. so it will be checked so easily….

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" 6 hrs has been passed but the security departments and intelligence agency are failing to know anything abt this attack… reports says that they are not even demanding anything and the fact 5000 people are with them .. making the things worse for the department to take an aggressive measure…. When we talked with the head of all this ACP mayank Sharma… he said the same old story we always hear…

Sir wht are u planning to do.. just sit here and do nothing

Mayank: we are doing wht we are meant to be doing… we cant just enter the place and blew it off killing 5000 people there…

Sir u have been called the best security planner

Mayank: I never called that myself.. u guys gave me that name .. and if u want to take it away ur choice…. No more questions..

Police is escape medie's questions as they donot have any anwers to all this…. Let see how this day ends on…"

…..

Benji: motive clearly na show kerny k maqasd sirf do hoskaty hain

Samrat: ek ya tu they are taking there time…

Mayank: delaying the conference… or they have nothing to do have any demands

samraT: they just want to use airport

Mayank: maybe…. But wht for… this is the question…. Humain koi asa programmer chaiy jo interior k surveillance ko break ker k…un cameras k control ko restart ker saky…. Benji tu ker sakta hai

Benji: yaar mein ek had tak ker sakta hoo but yeah jammers buhat ajeeb codex k hain

Samrat: benji ek insane ker sakata hai

Mayank: kaun

Benji: no way…

Mayank" koi mjhy batay ga k kya horaha hai….

Samrat: he has a girl

Mayank: WHT

Benji: yaar as kuch nhi hai just frind

Mayank: aha…just friend… naam kiya

Samrat: diya…

Mayank: ab yeah diya kaun hai

Samrat: in ki zindagi mein aya ho naya gulab…

Mayank: OHooo really yeah hadsa ( incident) us larki ki zindagi kab hua aur tum dono mjhy ab bata rahy ho… aur samrat yeah tujhy kya hua

Samrat: yaar mein kya kero is ny mjhy asay hi bataya tha…

Mayank: han tu bhi diya k piya…. tu bolay bhi … bhabi ko yaha

Benji: yaar pls asa kuch nhi hai

Mayank: acha Sharma tut u nai dulhna k tarha raha hai han.. bolna na bhabi ko

Samrat: kasay bolay ga is ko pol khul jay ga

Mayank: matlab

Benji: she doesn't know that I m in CSi

Mayank: kyun

Benji: bus pata nhi yaar woh samjhi mein bhi IT wala hoon tu mein ny us ko correct hi nhi kiya…

Mayank; uff.. aag itni lag gai hai k tu us ki baato ko rukhna nhi cha raha tha… wah..

Benji: dekh its to early to say so….

Mayank: say wht… yahini asa kuch hosakta hai.. aur tu subha se humari asai paka raha hai…

Benji: yaar ab bus kero… pls us k samny maat shoro hona

Samarat: kyun bhai… tu ny humari waliyon k samny humain maaf kiya tha kya

Mayank: beta ab tu agar nupur ki language mein kahay tu camel came under big wala mountain…ab tu tu dekh hum tere band baja barrat sab nikaly gay….

Bneji: rehma krdo… lakri set hony se phly hi bhag jay gi reham…

Mayank: acha on serious note… whtevr we need her ja aur us ko sab bata aur bring her on… if she can do this we need her… yeah best way hai to know hum andar kaha se aur kasay ja sakty hain… go..

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Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb...
i loved it...
it's beautifully written and funny too :D
lol benji ki gari b a gayi use lift dene ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb ...
nupur is great .:)

m lovig this crime plot of yours but yet clueless what they actualy want?
Edited by kheya-mayur - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally Benji ka luck khol gaya..
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting updt fiza
so Benji got his girl in this session
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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