OS: aakhri nishaani...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hola amigos...como estas????
m back with an OS...
do tell me how it is...
emotional hai...bear me...
iska idea mujhe ek aur os se mila... sirf idea liya hai..aakhri nishaani ka... story to meri hi hai... if this is not permitted, then you can report this...



she saw her little bundle of joy, playing with the water…. he sat by the pool in her room, dressed in sky blue colour shirt, and black pant….. oh he looked soo adorable……

"riya…… I told you na ki beti hogi…."

"beta"

"beti"

"Arjun, I know…. Its junior Arjun……."

"no riyu…. Its lil riyu…"

"Arjun…."

"riyaa…"

"mamma…… ye dekho…. Jumroo……"

"fireflies…."


Just like him….apne ander ki aag se duniya ko roshan karna chahta tha………..


"they are soo pretty na mamma…. Mammmaaa….. where are you lost????"

"o kahin nahin beta….. yeah dey are cute…. Just like you…"

'she ruffled his hair and kissed his forehead…

"mamma…… aap mere baal mat bigaado….. samjhi ya….samjhau…"


She chukled at his words and instantly she was transported back in time….

"riyu, you look soo adorable in this gown…. I wish I could just take you back to our room and lock us in for eternity….."

"Arjun….."

"hmmm…."

He encircled her waist with his arms and kept his chin on her shoulders.they swayed to the music.

"pata hai Arjun?! Aap jab bhi aisi baatein karte ho na….to aisa lagta hai maano ki poori jahan mujhe mil gayi hai… har khushi, har iccha aap se hai Arjun…. Maano meri duniya aapse shuru aur aap se khatm ho jaati ho…. I love you soo much…"

"I love you too….. and chahe tumhari duniya mujhse shuru ho, but khatm kabhi mujhpe mat hone dena riya….. agar mujhe kuch hogaya to……"

"aap bhi na…. aisi baatein nahin karte Arjun….."

She released herself from him…..ruffled his hair and walked off saying….

"aap bhi aaj kuch kam handsome nahin lag rahe ho ACP….."

"riyu…..mere baal mat bigado…. Samjhi ya…..samjhau….?"

She was brought back to the world by sameer's call….

"Riya….. party start hone waali hai…. Sab guests aa chuke hai… jaldi neeche aa jao…"

"ji sameer… abhi aayi… isko leke aati hun…"


She went down with her son in her arms...

It was supposed to be double bash… two happiness…. Her son's 4th birthday and this year she had won best business person of the year….. yet she was not happy…

How could she….without him….?!

All she wanted was to lock herself in the room and live with his memories……

"riya iss waqt koi jalebi khane jaata hai kya???? And moreover, due date is very close and lets not take risk…"

"nahin nahin nahin… I am perfectly fine… aur mujhe jalebi chahiye. Aap mujhe leke jaa rahe ho ya main sameer ko bulau???? "

"theek hai….. chalo…. Careful…."

"yeah oki….."

They drove to the sweet shop and she had her craving sweet to her heart content….. she had a piece in her hand she was munching it in the car and Arjun was driving…

He saw a crumble of sweet in the corner of her lips and averted his gaze towards her and busy wiping it….

"ARJUNNN….. aage dekho….."

He turned to the road and saw a truck speeding at breakneck speed and that too to riya's side… he did not had a way out of it so he shifted the car to complete right and threw himself over her…

The truck hit the car on riya's side and glass shattered into thousand pieces. Arjun covered her as a shield. The car skidded meters along the road and finally toppling round…

Passers by came and saw the scene… they immediately rushed to pull them out and were successful too….

Riya was clutching her tummy in pain and crying for Arjun….

And Arjun was somewhere...far away...where her cries would not bring him back…… he left the world to protect her and their symbol of love...

People saw his neck twisted in odd angle and blood oozing out of his head and face... they immediately called ambulance and took riya and arjun's body...

"riya... you are alright na...?"

"yeah sameer... aisha bhabhi kahan hai? Dikh nahin rahi hai wo..."

"yahin hai... wo rahi... abhi usse idhar bhejta hun... bdw choti... tum khush to ho na..."

"duniya keliye... apne bete keliye... apne liye khush hu ya nahin... ye to nahin pata..." she smiled a sad smile...

Sameer knew that how hard was it for her to cope after arjun's sudden death...

It was for her son she lived...

For their son, for whom her husband gave away his life...

She had left ETF and took the ancestral business of Raute's in her hands and now their company stood amongst the world's leading company and here she was... Mrs.Riya Arjun Raute as best business personna of India for 3rd year in row...

"Mrs. Riya... ye baccha... is he your son???! He is soo adorable..."

"yeah... my son... Abhimanyu... Abhimanyu Arjun Raute..."

Unki aakhri nishaani...(she added mentally...)



how is it????

do like... comment bhi zaroor karna...

appreciation and critisisma... i l accept both...

cos comments means lot to me... i would love long ones but one word, one line ka bhi chalega... but comment kardo...




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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 !!!!!

wow!!! abhi is same as his father!!!

awesomeee os 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice OS...
very sad one though...beautifully written!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
lovely a bit too emotional

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os! Written very well!
You brought tears in my eyes! :(

Thnx for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was such an emotional OS 😭 loved it
i literally had tears in my eyes while reading it
great job 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Undoubtedly Very emotional.. last part was v sad...
Arjun died to protect Riya... this is wat true love is ... Selfless... Not carin bout uaself 4 the person you love...
Btw I dint get wat u meant by "his neck was in strange position"...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Excellent work. Emotional. Beautifully written
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Awww... Sooo Sad bt still sweet!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Omg arjun die!!!
me crying
beautiful
loved it
claps
amazing wrk
gud title

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