fan fiction will bani for give jai

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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok guys im gone write a knew FF for you all out there. but please bear in ur mind cause as my FF cont some of you might get mad but belive me its some thing different nothing to what ive read so far

Intoduction to the chatacters

Raj walia A well known bussiness man who bought his company to the great hight that no one can come up against him and has one son and one daughter Jai walia and Jigyasa walia but recently in a car crash died and left his son to look after the family and his business

Jai walia A stuborn business tycoon who just gets what he wants by hook or crook, simply describe him would be he does'nt take no for an answer. He wants his job done then and there

jigyasa walia Oh well what can we really say for the great jigyasa she married her jai bhaiya best friend Aditya but things did'nt work out after 10 years of married life.she decided to take a divorce she has three children Ranveer Sahil and Anu she never haves time for her kids cause she always busy with her kitty party and her friends. she rude and horrible as anything so its best to stay out ofher way

Aditya His a loving guy whos been friends with jai walial all his life.Dispite his and Jigs divorce there friendship did not change over the years cause deep down his friend jai knew it was his sisters fault.

Masi {Jai Auntie} whos bought him up after jai mother past away when he was very young. she like a second mother to him they share a mother son relationship a bond that cant be described

Dadi {Aditya mother} she a complet film freak she just loves watching films and is always on obout them her and jigs cant evan see an eye to eye cause they cant comunicate with one another.but dadi is sweet as a baby doll.

Ranveer very moody hardly ever smiles just like his mother jigs.

Sahil goes to college and fails every year cause he never studies cause his always chilling out with his friends

Anu she sweet like her dadi but very innocent her jai mama loves her cause she the youngest and always gets what she wants from him by hook or crook just like her mama ji

Bani dixit the oldest very sweet simple and strong evan at the age of 22 she still strong for her sisters.

Pia dixit evan at the age of 20 very mordern and wants a lot in life and has big plans.

Rano dixit very simple like her Di but depends on her di for little little things.and cant evan dream to live life with out her sisters

ok her ive introduced the characters in a few hours i will up date the first part. feel free to give your views mwah.xx

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hun ! sounddss grr88 !!
will be waiting for the firt part !
updatee it sooon ! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😊 cant wait for da 1 first part 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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It was storming and raining heavyily out side as masi shouted tony tony
TONY ji masi
MASI ghar ke sharb khirki dharwaz bhand kardo lagta hai bhoot zoor ka toofan aanewala hai
TONY ji masi
As masi turned around to look and see what dadi was watching on TV and looked on the screen and there dadi was watching the great SRK movie dilwale dulhaniya lejenge
DADI shouting aare wah mere SRK
MASI yeh dadi bhi na khabhi nahin sudhra gi hameesha in filmo ke chakar mein parein raahein gi
MASI aare anu beta tum khy kar rahi ho
ANU kuch nahin masi
MASI tiyke hai munna aur there papa office se aate hi honge ja zara dekh tony ne kahna tayar kiya hai ke nahin tujh pata hai nai ke munna aate hi kahe ga mujh bhook lagi hai

As masi got up to go and set the table for the evening dinner she looked at dadi who still very busy watching the movie un aware of what was happening around her.and masi laugh away

As the central train reach mumbai train station making all that loud noise and then finaly stopped giving some smoke.we see three girls picking up there bags and getting of the train.

GIRL 1 wearing a nice black and red churi daar suit with matching bangles, and earrings,and a side partine hair all open all nervouse seeing so many people running around in there own thought to evan stopping and ask if there need any help just trying to look around which way the exit is.

GILR 2 wearing a black sexy short dress with big hoop earring hair all open every guy thats going pass is just staring at her and saying owe wow.

GIRL 3 wearing a haki colour pants and a simple top and wearing glasses and {shouting} pia kuch aur nahin pain sakhti thi dekho saab log aisa ghoor ghoor ke dekh rahi hai humia.
RANO di mujh dar lag raha hai
BANI dario mat rano mein hoon nai hum abhi raj uncle ke ghar chalte hai
PIA jaldi kario di mujh bahut bhook lagi hai subha se kuch nahin khaiyia
RANO tum aur tumhara yeh pait khabhi kuch aur bhi soochti ho
PIA haan khoy nahin tumhare aur di ke bare mein kyunki mein jaanti hoon tum dono ko bhi bahut bhook lagi hoye gi {RIGHT}
BANI laugh
RANO laugh

As bani pia and rano walk away from the train station near to the taxi stand looking around to see if they can get a lift.

BANI escuse me please bhaiya could you please drop us at this address
TAXI DRIVER as the driver looked at the address and said aap ko WAILA MANSION jana hai
BANI ji bahiya
TAXI DRIVER tiyke hai batiye
PIA screaming yes di jaldi karo.....

As the driver put the bags in the back pia rano and bani sat in the taxi and soon where near heading to the WALIA MANSION.
it was raining heavy out side as jai ranveer and aditya came home from office masi was happy to see them and told them to go and get changed and come down and have dinner
soon every one in the WALIA MANSION was seated having dinner MASI JAI DADI ADITYA JIGS ANU SAHIL and RANVEER when tony came and told jai that there someone her who wants to see RAJ sir jai was shocked for one minite thinking who could come to see his dad everyone knew his dad had past away a year ago. but not saying a word jai got up and walked towards the living room area thinking who could it be.

ok guys i hope you like it please do give me your views and ideas plus my FF wont have no raaz nothing like that totaly different to what ive been reading on the forum so far.
what will bani do when she finds out raj uncle has passed away long time back?
will jai give them a shelter?
what will jig say?
keep reading and find out love you all 😉
Edited by perveen - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey perveen,
this was different.. please continue soon........ please
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Great Intro and first part hun
make Jai go heads over heeels for Bani at first sight
please write soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok guy thanks to all you lovely people out there for reading my FF. 😊

ok her the next part cont........

As jai walked over to the living room to see who was her to see his late father. jai saw three girls sitting on the sofa all three of them where beautiful in there own own way. But completly different to one another.

Soon masi had finished her dinner and decided to join jai and see who was actualy her that had come to see RAJ.

As jai approached and said
JAI kahiya aap ko kis se milna hai
BANI humia raj uncle se milna hai
JAI was suprised as he looked at the beautiful girl who was standing infront of him and just kept on looking at her
MASI beta khy tum nahin janti ke raj bhai sab is duniya mein nahin hai on ko guzra howa ek saal hoye geya hai
BANI was shocked to hear that....as tears rolled down her eyes 😭 and with a {BANG} her hand bag fell on the floor bringing every thing out that was in her bag
JAI looked at the floor and then gave one glance to bani thinking what did masi say that bought tears in this beautiful girls eyes.
MASI as she bend down to pick up bani bag for her she saw picture of raj and the three girls she was suprised to see them thinking who they where, and why raj never mention them.
PIA di ab hum khy kare ge, kahan jaye gi
RANO di bolo na
BANI was to shocked her self to say anything to her sisters raj uncle was there last hope and that hope was broken too......as bani told her sisters to lets go taking her bag from masi and walked away.

jai and masi looked at one another thinking what just happened.

JAI tehro tum log mere papa se milne aaye thi aur yeh sun kar ke wo ab isi duniya mein nahin hai bina kuch baatia ja rahi hoo
BANI took out a letter from her bag and gave it to jai which said on the envelope TO RAJ

DEAR RAJ
tumne hameesha ek dost hone ka farz nibhaiya hai. aur aaj mein tumia ek aisi zimadari de raha hoon.
jis ka mujh pura yakeen hai ke tum nibhio ge.
mere bad meri theenio betiyio ka khoy nahin hai siva tumhaare isi liya mere jaane ke bad tum inka khayal rakhna.
khaas karki bani ka mere jaane ke bad vo puri tara se toote jayegi vo yeh bardaashti nahin kar paye gi.
Ab woh tumhaare betiya hai.
tumhara dosti


Nishkant

As jai finished reading the letter and shouted out for tony tony
TONY ji sir
JAI out house ke safa kara do aaj se bani aur os ke behna waha raha gi
TONY teek hai sir
JAI tumia pareshan hone ki khoy zaroorat nahin hai aaj se tum log yahi raho gi kyunki nishkant unlce mere papa ke dost the isi liya ab mera farz banta hai ke mein tum log ka khyal rakho
BANI didnt know what to say or do cause she was to shocked by hearing that raj uncle had passed away a year ago
JAI masi aaj se aap in ka khyal rakhengi aap logo ko kuch bhi chaaiye aap masi se khe de na tiyke hai.

As masi took the girls to the out house and told them to make them self feel comfortable at home cause this is there house know rano and pia where to tired so they just eat and went straight to bed.

what wll jigs say when she finds out that bani and her sister are gone stay her?
what is bani gone do after knowing RAJ uncle dead?
whats in store for the three girls?
keep reading and find out love you all.mwahxx
feel free to give your commets
Edited by perveen - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww...love jai...hes so cute... 😳 😳 😳
letting the girls stay...and not mad like he was in the show...lol... 😉 😉 😉
continue soon... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cont next part enjoy

bani cant sleep and she crying and decides to get some fresh air. 😭
Thinking raj uncle no more papa has left us in this big world hum kaisa jiyenge onke bina and she holding on to a photo frame where bani rano pia are in a pic with raj and there dad and bani hugging raj in it.

on the other hand jai is in his study working on his lap top when his room window keeps on going back and forward making noise so he decides to closes it as he gets up and is obout to close the window he see bani sitting out side the out house on the bench crying holding on to some thing. 😭

Jai decides to go and talk to bani so he come out and heads towards the out house when he see bani hold tight on to a picture and crying.

JAI bani bhaare kafi thand hai
BANI gets shocked and gets up from the bench putting the picture down
JAI sorry mera irada tumia darane ka bhilkul nahin thai bani
BANI it ok mein aisa hi beti thi
JAI could tell that bani had been crying from the past few hour looking at her eyes. you should go and rest know its quite late
BANI walks away saying good night to jai forgetting to pick up the picture
JAI as his obout to walk away jai eye hit on the bench and he picks up the picture turning it around to see what was it that bani was holding and crying and is suprised to see a picture of his father and the three girls togeather including another guy around obout his dad age which makes it clear that was bani father.

The first thing that hits jai eyes is the way bani was hugging his dad.
It was like they must have been really close to each other but one thing kept on hitting his mind was why did'nt his dad ever mention bani and her family to him.

feel free to give your views mwah love you all

Edited by perveen - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW!!!!! That was an Awesome sart!!!!!

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