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Posted: 12 years ago
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Onir ran from ovi to purvi's room so that he could do purvi's surgery now but before going he asked arjun to buy some medicines from a near by medical store.Once Arjun left from there he started the operation and with much difficulty a prematre baby girl was born.Onir was feeling ecstatic by holding purvi's girl but suddenly he remembered how ovi had give birth to a still born child.he thought agar ovi ko pata chala keh usne aik mare hue bache ko paida kiya hai to woh toot jayegi and she might act weirdly towards purvi yeh soch keh purvi's child is alive while her child is dead.nahi mein purvi ko aur dukhi nahi dekhna chahta,itne mahinon keh baad dono behnein aik dosre keh kareeb aayi hain mein unko dur hote nahi dekh sakta..yes mein sab ko yehi kahoon ga keh it was purvi who lost her chil while ovi's baby survived the accident.Slowly he kissed the baby on her forehead and took her toward spurvi and said i m sorry mishty mein na chahte hue bhi majboor hoon par mein kya karoon ovi apne bache keh jaane ka dukh bardast nahi kar pai gi and she might do something dangerous isliye i m going to give her our baby.With a heavy heart Onir kept the baby in the incubator which was place behing ovi's room and when he turned back he saw arjun standing here who asked onir kya hua ? Purvi and ovi teekh to haina and bache woh to teekh hain na ? Onir said Arjun Ovi ko beti hui hai .Arjun smiled widely and hugged onir and said yeh sab tumhari wajha se hi possible hua hai onir ,kyunke ovi ki itni complicated pregnancy hone keh bawajood tumne uska treatment kiya..i just dont know how to thankyou onir.Onir smiled and says mujhe thanks mat karo arjun kyunke yeh sab mehnat ovi ki hai,aj ussi ki himat ki wajha se yeh possible hua hai.Arjun says Purvi teekh hai naa..uska bacha ?Onir smiles fades away and says arjun mein hamare bache ko nahi bacha paya.Arjun is shocked and with tears in his eyes kahan hai woh ? mein mil sakta hoon usse kya ? Onir nods and both entered in purvi's room who was staring the empty cradle without any emotion.

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I m sorry purvi..tumne aur onir ne meri wajha se apna bacha khoya
i m so sorry purvi Arjun cried
purvi stared at arjun blankly


P.S enough of my blabbering...my name is zoha and i m a fan of Arvi who loves them and i m writing for the first time so kindly do leave ur suggestions and likes and comments.Continuation of the story would be depended on the response i would get for my story
and this story is for my bestie friend Huma <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyy zoha nice one ... do update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hmm.. So dis is a diff plot.. Nice start.. Update soon !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey zoha...very nice update... 😳 plz do cntinue and update soon...nd plz do pm me wen u update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Zohi darling awesomee awesome OS👏
do continue! w8ing for next Part!
& u rem my req na 😉
btw btw super awesome Title Muahsss baby ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Do continue soon ! (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 2:

Arjun with a heavy heart entered in Purvi's room and saw Purvi staring at a empty cradle with no emotions.His heart broke into pieces watching Purvi in this condition.He sat beside Purvi and said Purvi I ,Arjun stammered not knowing how to console Purvi.Purvi without any emotion took a glance at Arjun and her turned her face away from Arjun and kept staring at the cradle.I am so sorry Purvi..I know mein tumhare bache ko wapis to nahi lasakta and that meri wajha se tumne aur Onir ne apna bacha khoya hai and for that I am really very sorry.But before Purvi could say anything,nurse came and called for Arjun as Ovi had gained consciousness .Arjun wiped away his tears and went to Ovi.Inside Ovi room,Ovi started to panic regarding her baby but Arjun reassured her and said shhh Ovi Dont worry,Beti hui hai hamari woh dekho and he slightly turned her back and watched Ovi who was having tears of happiness.Arjun and Ovi both went and saw their baby in incubator and wept having tears of happiness.I just cant believe it Arjun,itni complications hone keh baad bhi yeh sab possible ho paya.I need to thank Onir for this because aaj yeh sab possible ho paya hai to sirf Onir ki wajha se.Arjun tried to hide his tears but was unable to do so.Ovi asked him Arjun tum teekh to hona,i mean Purvi teekh to haina uska bacha kaisa hai,teekh hai naa ? Arjun didnt knew what to give an answer to Ovi's questions.He made her sit on the bed and told her that Purvi's baby is no more.Ovi was beyond shock.She was literally in tears and demanded to meet Purvi right away.Arjun tried to calm her but she was in panic state so he took her to Purvi's room.Inside Purvi's room,Purvi was hysterical and Onir was not able to control her.She was throwing things around and in her semi conscious state she slapped Onir and asked him Kyun Onir apne hamare bache ko kyun nahi bachaya,kyun use is duniya mein aane se phele hi jaane diya.aap jaante the naa yeh bacha mere jeene ki wajha tha to phir kaise aapne aik pal mein har maan li.She was continiously hitting Onir trying to vent out her emotions.Onir tried to hold Purvi's hand but she didnt listen to him and with full force took out her bandages and canola.Even though it was paining her but this pain was not that much hurting her as compared to the pain which was in her heart after loosing her baby.Arjun and Ovi entered Purvi's room and saw Purvi throwing away her things and going out of control.Purvi saw Arjun and Ovi with bloodshot eyes and finally after having no strength left in her,broke down weeping for her lost baby and said Onir mujhe mera bacha wapis chahiye.Arjun was in tears seeing Purvi in this condition and he didnt knew how to console Purvi.Ovi thought only Aai can handle Purvi now but i dont know what would be Aai's reaction to Purvi's miscarriage.


Precap:

Family gets to know about Purvi's Miscarriage and Archana consoling Purvi.


Note: I know i had been irregular but that was due to my exams but now that my exams are finished,i m going to give regular updates :D
Sorry for the Irregular updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice!

Okay Im kinda confused did Onir tell Purvi before switching the babies? Or did he just do it?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -LiveLaughLove-

Nice!

Okay Im kinda confused did Onir tell Purvi before switching the babies? Or did he just do it?



nopes he didnt told purvi about the babies and switched them
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update 😳
so purvi doesnt know dat onir swapped the babies..she's gonna be real mad at him when she comes to know the truth..
looking forward to ur next update...
plz update soon 😊

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