Jaga FF Redemption 19/2/13-Chaps 2-5 UPDATED - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: stuti..


Yes Dr. Nix, Shahshank has evolved into a very fine actor. I have to admit here, personally, I used to get more absorbed by the acts of Surekhaji and Pratyusha (a natural find). Though, have always observed him competent and adequate, but lately, he has raised the bar and acting superlatively. The act deserves a praise. For he has to deal double whammy of an inherently weak, thankless role as well, continuous string of topsy- turvey, inconsistent tosses at the hand of writers- as and when it suits their whims or requirement for other developments. Considering writers' remarkable dexterity in their other deliberations, his remains a feebly supported role.
Also noticed, this FF is more a direct reflection or interpretation of the actual serial, than an entirely free fiction loosely based on the original premises. In this, it's engaging to read your unique touch and fresh angles from Jagya and Ganga's perspectives. A slight misgiving is on the bumps in form of another twists or inconsistencies on these expendable, 'sub prime' characters- about which writers are not entirely trustable if the need or their penchant for other glorifications recurs. Meanwhile thanks for your exquisite work.


Jagya might be a hated role but from a true actor's perspective he is a gold mine. Neither black nor white but multiple levels of grey playing him is like getting a rarest of rare cases in med school.
As for my FF yes right now it is following the show but I cannot guarantee that it will continue to do so.
As for my work-I am as red as a tomato right now at that lovely comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dr.Nix

CHAPTER 5

" I'm Your DOCTOR and You'll stay in this Bed until and unless I say so-Do you understand me?! What exactly are you planning to do huh? March into that house and take your child back. Really , because that didn't seem to work out so well the past dozen times you tried it!

Now I'm in charge and I'll be hanged before I see you in that situation again. I'll get your baby back for you , I promise-Do you hear me, I promise but we'll do it my way all the way. So now SHUT UP and go back to sleep, Now!"

She did, much to his surprise

He gave her a sedative to avoid any more further incidents before he asked the jurse to call in the wardboy. He needed to yell at someone other than himself right now

Ganga stirred in her sleep

"Mannu"

Jagya's eyes grew moist as he stared at the little woman. She had been through so much , so very very much and there was nothing he could do to ease her pain right now

Somehow, lost child is opening a painful memory. This, a mammal's parental instinct, is well understood at both levels. As her doctor as well as a fellow human who had his own share of grief on a loss- even severer in his case for its irreversible fatality.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: stuti..

Somehow, lost child is opening a painful memory. This, a mammal's parental instinct, is well understood at both levels. As her doctor as well as a fellow human who had his own share of grief on a loss- even severer in his case for its irreversible fatality.


I know, losing a child is the hardest thing in the world. Even a woman who has given birth to a child who died in utero takes a long time to get over the trauma. I cannot imagine what it must be for someone who has brought up their child , loved her child with everything only to have the baby snatched from her arms by a guy she isn't even sure will take care of the child

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Writer, please write more chapters here. Loved all of them...please,maintain this thread, so its easier for us to find you...i never read these OS or FF... Not even sure what those means...but I find your writing is really good...thanks again
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Libra123

Writer, please write more chapters here. Loved all of them...please,maintain this thread, so its easier for us to find you...i never read these OS or FF... Not even sure what those means...but I find your writing is really good...thanks again


Thank you. All updates for this FF will be posted in this thread only😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Truly awesome Nix I wann reading it again and again !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dhruti_rocks434

Truly awesome Nix I wann reading it again and again !

Well I hope I'll be able to give you some new updates before thatšŸ˜†

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