Jaga FF Redemption 19/2/13-Chaps 2-5 UPDATED

Prologue-Part 1

She was running ,running, running . Her breath came in short bursts, her lungs felt like they were on fire ,tears were streaming out of her eyes and still she kept running. She couldn't stop, Oh God she couldn't stop

That fiend was after her, he and his entire band of ruffians and God help her and her innocent darling if he caught up with them. She knew it was madness to have ran out like this, utter madness but one more minute in that wretched house would have been the end of her. If it was just her she had to worry about she would have hanged herself in the devil's own courtyard ages ago and given the villagers something to talk about as well as rip his precious honour to shreds. But there was her poor darling to consider, her precious innocent baby and for his sake , for his sake at least she had to escape. Tightening her hold on her child she chanced a look behind but kept running

She had it all planned out. She would take the first train from Jaitsar and reach the city. Once she reached the city all would be well. An old friend of hers had married into a decent family in Jaipur and she had pledged to help her. All she had to do was get to the city and she and her child would be safe. But before that……she chanced a look behind terrified that even now he would be on her

Wham! She had run into something solid. Something solid and large. She jumped back instantly-Oh God had they caught up with her already? Fighting down fear she looked up at the person who blocked her way

The first thing that came to her mind was that he was startlingly handsome. Not even the scruffy beard which covered his face could mask the perfect features and the beauty of the sculpted planes of his face. The second thing that flashed through her mind was that it was a "he".

Immediately all her senses went into overdrive. The word "man" had only one meaning for her-Danger. She clutched her baby closer and willed him to move away with all the anger she could muster.

He didn't seem to understand . He stood staring down at something on her arm and suddenly spoke. The words were lost on her. All she could think about was that he was moving towards her and panic stricken she screamed" Don't! " He stilled and she looked about her terrified ,she needed a weapon a weapon please God! Her eyes alighted on the small fire nearby and she quickly dragged out a flaming log

Emboldened by the comforting feeling of having a weapon in her hands she said again ,more calmly this time" I'll burn you if you come near me"

The threat would have been enough to stop one of her husband's ruffians in his tracks but this man seemed to be as foolhardy as he was handsome . He advanced towards her muttering some nonsense about her burns and him being a doctor. Ha ! As if she would fall for that. He was close ,the log moved without her even being aware of it and the man jumped back with a cry of pain

Somewhere in her overactive frantic mind she grinned. That would teach him to take advantage of defenseless females

The man nursed his arm and then raised his head to glower at her. He had lost his calm faade and was angry now, she thought with satisfaction. For some reason that pleased her. She jumped a little when his angry voice cut through the air" Pagal ho gayi kya?Here I am trying to help you and you end up burning me?!"

Help! Help from a man, a creature of the race which only knows how to hurt and conquer and use force and cause pain and misery to others?" Rage spilling out she screamed brandishing the log" I don't need help from any man!"

The sound of footsteps recalled her to her present predicament and forgetting the man in front of her she resumed her desperate race

Originally posted by: Shinya

Doctor ji! your post was too good. But there is a small mistake -

"She had it all planned out. She would take the first train from Jaitsar and reach the city"

1. Jaitsar has no rail service yet. There was some manipulation in the rail project budget figures that Shiv had prepared and so it wasn't passed by the rail ministry.

2. Ganga does not live in Jaitsar

🤣

Originally posted by: Dr.Nix

A/N: Firstly, let me introduce myself. I am Nixe, known as Dr.Nix by my friends and I happen to be a newbie to the show.

It all started out like this. I am a die hard fan of love stories and got into Indian soaps via IPKKND. When things went downhill I switched to Madhubala. That's when a friend of mine recommended BV saying Shiv Anandi have great chemistry. Um , it could be because I have seen only the after marriage episodes , I didn't really feel the chemistry

So I did a background check by digging into past episodes of BV.That's when I came across the Jagya Anandi beginning episodes and I fell in love with them. They were sooo cute and I hated Shiv for coming in betwen them

My feelings at that pont of time were

WHY SHIV WHY!

Then I saw with horror my adorable Jagya transform into Machiavelli cum Hitler and I was all

WHY JAGYA WHY!

Then Shiv comes into the scene and he is amazing to Anandi and helps her out and they get married and then Anandi decides to put a halt to the romance with her insecurities( With which I completely sympathize because Hey! a woman can't forget her past that easily) so my feelings are all

WHY ANANDI WHY!

That being said and now that Ansh track is kind of at a halt right now I absolutely love the new entry Ganga. I think Jagya does need love in his life as having seen his earlier episodes , I don't think he is a bad guy-though his behaviour to Anandi was horrible( I blame it all on the vamp😡)

I seriously can't wait for Jaga track and so as usual I started writing on them

From the above track you might have gathered that I'm scatty , shatter brained a , a little crazy but of course adorable😉

My story starts below-If you have a high tolerance for pain,have a look😆

hey dr nixe u mentioned that u like indian serials which have love stories.did u watched GEET, DIL MIL GAYE ,ODHINI so many r there. but no one beats our ansh.especially razy about shiv .when ever i get time i keep on repeating their scenes.these day ony on ansh lala land

Originally posted by: Sunna_Deewani

You have written well. But take care of the details what the other member(shinya) has mentioned. Anyway its your story, you can place ganga in jaitsar too, if that is ur plan.

In the show, If Ganga was in jaitsar, anandi aajayegi beech me, jagya ko koi kaam nahi rahega😆

Originally posted by: Shinya

Well said. if she ws living in Jaitsar, our mahan sarpanch would have solved her problem in on 'chutki'

She cant solve her own SR problem and solves other people's problems in no time like a magic show.

😆