HESITATION... AN ARHI SAGA

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys! I am fakiarshi. This is my first attempt to write something. I have been a silent reader for almost a year now and have been following some writers from whom I have learnt a lot. I was extremely scared before writing down this FF because I had no idea how you people will react as I have no friends on IF but as they say 'fear is not good for grades (3 idiots)' therefore, after a huge debate with my mind I am here with my first FF. I hope you guys will like it. Please it will encourage me a lot. So without further ado here I am with 'HESITATION' AN ARHI SAGA'
PROLOGUE
15 years ago, India
Khushi: mama kaeh rahi hain ke hum U.K. ja rahe hain hamesha ke liye L
Arnav: to kya tum mujh se dur chale jaogi?
Khushi: tum itne menti kyun ho rahe ho?
Arnav: menti nahin senti' jab English boli nahin jaati to bolti kyun ho?
Khushi: main tumhein marungi zor se
Arnav: Get lost'
Khushi pushed arnav on the floor and he fell down. She sat on him and started to hit his face. He put his arms in front of his face to save himself from the punches but Khuahi wasn't stopping. When she thought that she had had enough she stood up
Khushi: aaj ke baad panga lene se pehle 10 bar sochna.
With that she ran away leaving behind a flustered arnav.
15 years later:
Assistant: Ma'm these are the files you asked for.
Woman: Ya fine just put these files over here I'll have a look once I am done with these mails.
Assistant: Ma'am I am really excited' we'll be working with one of the best fashion houses in U.K.
Woman: It's still not confirmed Cindy' keep the hype down please' (Without looking at her assistant and still checking the mails)
Cindy: I was just'
Woman: I want you to arrange a meeting' I would like to meet the CEO of 'AR fashions'. I'll see what they want from us and don't forget Cin' we are one of the leading event management companies in Manchester' such top level companies need us' we don't need them.
Cindy: Of course!
Woman: Hurry up! Talk to them' we need to do a lot! Henry Seacrest will kill us if his WHITE BEACH EXTRAVAGANZA gets compromised because 2 ladies were busy in talking' hehe move.
Cindy: Haha sure ma'm
She leaves the room and sits in her cabin which she shares with Ray, a gay guy who worked for the company.
Ray: Hey Cin'
Cindy: Shh! I need to make an important call (she brushed him off and picked up a file and held the phone receiver.) Hello! I am Cindy Shack personal assistant to Ms. Khushi Kumari Gupta the CEO Of 'JUST DAZZLE!' she would need to meet your CEO to discuss the latest fashion event you people are organizing and approached us' ok alright' sure ' 10 a.m. Monday' at AR fashions headquarter' sure' thank you' you too have a good day! (she dropped the phone and move towards Ray) hahaha the CEO of AR has a very strange name.
Ray: And what's that?
Cindy: Arnav Singh Raizada' I can't even pronounce it properly.
CHARACTER SKETCH
ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA:
a ruthless businessman but a very fun-loving man' has many friends and is just loving. Aged 25 years.
KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA:
a sophisticated lady' extremely hardworking and lives in a shell' by nature she is extremely caring and fun-loving but has changed a lot due to some reasons and does not show her happiness that easily. 23 years old.
NK SINHA:
childhood friend of arnav and khushi. Has been with arnav for the past 15 years and they live next to each other in a posh apartment. They work together in one company where Arnav is the CEO, NK is the marketing manager.
SHEETAL SINHA:
wife of NK Sinha. She is a housewife she is not loved by her husband. She is also the childhood friend of Arnav and Khushi.
MANOHAR RAIZADA:
(dodo) father of Arnav.
GARIMA GUPTA:
mother of Khushi. She is a widow and lives with her son in London.
SHYAM GUPTA:
brother of Khushi. Lives in London.
ARAV GUPTA:
nephew of Khushi
ANJALI GUPTA:
Khushi's sister in law
OTHER CHARACTERS WILL BE ADDED WHEN REQUIRED. THESE ARE THE MAIN CHARACTERS.

INDEX
PROLOGUE PAGE 1
CHAPTER 1 PAGE 1
CHAPTER 2 PAGE 2
CHAPTER 3 PAGE 3
CHAPTER 4 PAGE 4
CHAPTER 5 PAGE 4
CHAPTER 6 PAGE 5
CHAPTER 7 PAGE 6
CHAPTER 8 PAGE 6
CHAPTER 9 PAGE 7
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love the start:)
plzz do pm me when you will update next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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when are you going to update??
plz do update soon because l want read more dear;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hdefinitely a good beginning! though the character setting has me thinking. waiting to see how it plays out. lots of promise and potential. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start. You had me at the title.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 1 'ANGREZI BEAT TE'

Khushi was sitting in her cabin when there was a knock on the door.

Cindy: merry Christmas ma'am.

Khushi: hey! Merry Christmas in advance Cindy. Why don't you take some time off? I mean I know that you might have to do some last minute shopping.

Cindy: mmm actually ma'am I needed to go to a party.

Khushi: Wow! party? cool… you may leave.

She said this and turned towards her laptop.

Cindy: mmm… Actually I came here to invite you. Everyone from 'JUST DAZZLE!' will be joining so… please!

Khushi: Oh no no… I don't party.

Cindy: Please ma'am.

Khushi: Sorry ci… she could not complete her sentence when all her staff members gathered on the door.

Everyone: please!

….

Arnav: NK tu ja mujhe bohat kaam hai.

NK: chal na! It's Bill's bachelor party and you know what that means.

Arnav: No!

NK: chal na!

….

Khushi enters club BASILISK.

After 15 minutes Arnav and NK enter the same club.

An Indian famous song was being played by the DJ on someone's request.

Mundeyan nu chardi thaari thaari thaari ohdi heat te
Marjani paundi bhangra
Angrezi beat te

NK pulled Arnav on the dance floor and then there was no tomorrow for both of them. Both of them danced as if no one was watching and Arnav entertained everyone with his funny steps. He was doing typical Indian steps which made everyone roll on the floor.

Ohde silky silky waal, nasal di gori aa
Oh 6 footi muteyaar, ganne di porri aa
Khafa rata ni hundi, kise di cheat te
Marjaani paundi bhangra
Angrezi beat te

Arnav was an attractive man. Much attractive than NK therefore within no time girls started to gather around him so that he could dance with them. NK was just smiling looking at him but then he saw someone and he thought that he had seen that person somewhere.

O khad taan ja, tu nede aa
Bai idda naa tu gede kha
Oh kahton enni desperate, saanu dasde ke ae rate
Shoe teri da, dress teri da, ghadi jo paayi, guess teri da
Chaaro paase vekh lai kudiye, charcha hotness teri da
Nachdi mainu lagdi shudain, sacchi main taan ho geya fan
Machdi hik nu saambh kude, ni tenu government ne kar dena ban
That is why salah ik laila, main tera majnu bann meri laila
Main teri laila, oh meri laila
Khad ja pehla saah taan laila
Marjaani paundi bhangra
Angrezi beat te

He excused himself and started to walk towards that person. Arnav saw him leaving and turned towards the direction he was heading to and then he saw her. Was it really her or was it just an illusion?

Poori beer-sheer pee ke, rum chada gayi oye
Marjaani nachdi nachdi, gota kha gayo oye
Kehnde hundi kharabi, peeti neat te
Marjaani paundi bhangra
Angrezi beat te

Khushi was feeling quite uncomfortable. She did not drink nor did she dance so what was she doing here? She never went to parties so how did she accept this invitation today? She started to leave when she heard someone calling her.

….

Precap: a look into Khushi's life + the great meeting + Arnav following Khushi? Yeah you heard it right :-P

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yipee...me first...😛😊
both the prologue and chapter are nice...
waiting to know why khushi changed...and after all these years, arnav recognizes her????... thats so cool...
will be waiting for ur next update...😊
do pm me whenever u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update..
wating to know abour their past and also the meeting
loved it..continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh why did you have to stop there? was hoping arhi will meet.
Here it seems khushi and arnav had role reversal from the usual dancing khushi and 'wonder what am doing here' arnav.
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 2 GHODI LE KE AAYE LE JAYE

Khushi was feeling quite uncomfortable. She did not drink nor did she dance so what was she doing here? She never went to parties so how did she accept this invitation today? She started to leave when she heard someone calling her. She ignored the voice as she thought that an employee of hers was calling her and if she stopped then she would definitely be trapped therefore she just ran away.

….

Monday, 10 a.m. A.R. FASHIONS headquarter

Khushi: Hey hi! I am Khushi, I have a meeting with your CEO.

Receptionist: Yes ma'am he is waiting for you please have a seat and let me just inform him. (Khushi just smiled at her and turned to sit on the chairs in the lobby when the receptionist called her.) Ma'am he is in his cabin on the first floor. He is waiting for you. 2nd room to the right and here please wear this badge as it indicates that you are a visitor. Thank you. Have a good day.

Khushi: Thanks.

Khushi turned around and inhaled the ambience of the place. The building was HUGE and was made of exquisite marble and glass. The lobby itself was huge and her office seemed to be minuscule as compared to this place. She smiled and thought that it would be great if she could work with A.R. FASHIONS. She strolled towards the elevator and stepped out when it said 1st floor. She searched for the said room and found it. It had a name inscribed at the door:

Arnav Singh Raizada

Chief executive officer

This name… sounded familiar. Khushi frowned but then smiled thinking that she has actually lost it. She knocked twice.

Arnav: Come in!

Khushi swiftly opened the door and flashed a smile towards Arnav.

Khushi: Hey! Arnav was working on some files when he heard her. He looked up and saw her. He was shocked. He stood up from his chair.

Arnav: Hi! He smiled his famous crooked smile.

Khushi: Hi I am Khushi… Khushi Kumari Gupta… I am the… I am from JUST DAZZLE! She held out her hand for him to shake. What the hell had happened to her. Why was she stuttering? Was it because he was such a huge tycoon or was it because he was astronomically HOT! Arnav took her hand and shook it and his smiled increased. He left her hand and came towards her. GOSH why was he coming towards her please please please stay away. He came extremely near. So near that Khushi could count his eyelashes. Khushi's eyes popped out when he did something surprising. NO SHOCKING. No bewildering. He caught her in a bear hug! The hold was so tight that Khushi thought that she couldn't breathe for a second. He left her and cupped her face with his hands.

Arnav: 15 years!

Khushi: WHAT?? Excuse me I think there is a mistake I should leave now. She started towards the door when…

Arnav: teri ma ki… ruk…

Khushi was stunned. She turned towards him with her mouth open and saw him leaning on his table with a casual smile playing on his lips.

Khushi: WHA… (she couldn't complete her sentence when a realization hit her. She now realized that why did she find the name Arnav Singh Raizada so recognizable) Arny? (He just spread out his hand as if indicating that it was quite obvious.) Wow!

She smiled. Suddenly someone barged in the room.

NK: Arnav woh HITHOCKS ka tender…

Khushi: Woah!

Arnav: pehchaan kaun!

The deal was totally forgotten as the three friends met again after 15 years. However, Arnav sealed the contract and JUST DAZZLE was to organize the next fashion show of A.R. FASHIONS that showcased their fall collection.

….

Wednesday, 6.30 p.m. traffic signal

It was snowing heavily therefore Arnav had to leave his office before a blizzard started. His car stopped at a traffic signal when he turned right and saw Khushi sitting in the car next to his. He thought of following her just to know where she lived and thought of giving her a surprise. As the signal showed the green light he turned his car to follow Khushi's. Her car stopped outside a place called SAB EK HAIN orphanage. He saw her going inside the orphanage. He thought of waiting for 5 minutes before going inside. When he went inside he heard a sweet voice singing a song.

Heer Heer na akho odiyo, Main te Sahibaan hoye,
Ghodi leke aaye le jaaye, Ghodi leke aaye le jaaye,
Le jaaye Mirza koi, Le jaaye Mirza koi,

Khushi was sitting in the middle with a guitar in her hand, a smile playing on her face. There were a bunch of girls surrounding her and they all had smiles plastered on their faces as if they were totally enjoying the moment.

Ohde je hi main te oh mere warga,
hansda ae sajra sawere varga,
ankha bandh kar la te thande hanere varga

Khushi was singing this song but her mind was somewhere else. She was thinking that no one deserved heartbreak because it is never anyone's fault. It was not her fault that she had to face… no she should not think about that day.

ohde je hi main te o Mirza mere varga
Naal naal tur na te vith rakhna
hadd rakh lena wich dil rakhna,
chhanve chhanve paawe assi teri parchhawe tur na

She left her guitar on the floor and stood up. Watching her other girls stood up as well. She twirled around and started to dance. Arnav was just watching her and was mesmerized. She was GRACEFUL! HELL GRACEFUL!

ohde je hi main te o Mirza mere varga

The song stopped playing and a girl from the crowd got up and hugged Khushi.

Girl: Aap jaldi se shadi kar lo… main iss hi gaane per dance karungi

Khushi: Lekin Pari main to kabhi shadi hi nahin karungi…

Girl: Arey who dekho wahan kaun khada hai… she pointed towards the door.

….

Precap: visiting khushi's past (what was the incident she was talking about?) + Arnav finding out the truth of Khushi's past (who will tell him guess guess!) + mission 'making Khushi Kumari Gupta the old 'SHI''

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