For Dr. Khurana, with love, MG SS, pg 177,178 - Page 120

Originally posted by: had2bu

Teri exam ke baad start hogi... abhi overtime chal raha hai..

I've rarely had to say "I have so much to say but I can't" but today, I certainly understand the sentiment. In a word, I am overwhelmed.

I've tried to take this bit by bit, character by character and all the rest of it but every time I sit down to comment, nothing. I've been staring dumbly at this thread even while talking to you today. (Hence 😳). Okay, let me try once more to climb my self-made mountain (Hoslon se veer ho, sankaton mein dheer ho...)

I think people are right when they say that there really is always something more. Taking two people in love who are left more or less on their own as the example, I think that even when they build their own world of happiness, there's still that small wish for their parents, for their family, especially if things broke off on bad terms. And so I'm very very happy to see the Khurana family resolve their problems. I liked seeing their different dimensions, Pammi especially. No one is without their redeeming qualities.

If Mariam is the reason I'm the train loony, you're the reason my fellow bus-goers shake their heads at me. Dr Khurana and his double dose of multivitamins killed me! Pregnancy hormones se pidhit patiyon 😆 Somehow, I don't believe he would have complained much at the time ;)

I am so in love with this teasing, sexy and loving couple. Every action speaks of their love and also of their passion. I feel blessed to even read of such a couple.

Honestly Avi, this story has made a place in my heart. You are very talented and of course we want - no, demand - more of your brilliant tales! 😃 I only wish you had written this while the Geet Forum was in its heyday; everyone should have a chance to read this beautiful, hilarious story.

Oh, also, sorry about the whole emoticon mishap. You have nothing to fear; I have serious, bias-free doubts of whether I could dislike anything you write. And it was definitely not 'too much'. Instead, tasteful and perfect.

Originally posted by: TheBrat

Love is a miracle, isn't it? It changes people. Makes a person, breaks a person. The woman who had lost her child had revived due to the love showered on her, the woman now was confident enough, and was all but beaming with happiness, the man who left his family got back it, due to the very girl who was been rejected by his family. While she forgave them, he took time in doing so. And there's another woman, who though not all genial with the son of her husband and showed to world as if she was indifferent, had forgotten everything and was miserable when her husband got an attack...Something about loose ends and me... I don't like to leave them in. As much as I would like to think that people are black and white or good and evil, I find that it is sometimes just an incident that makes us stereotype a person. I like to think that there is good in all as there is God in all. Sometimes it is also the fact that we find in people what we seek in them. Maybe simplistic but somehow it helps to live life like that. No judging.. let the man/woman upstairs do that.. I actually felt good to redeem Pammi in the story because as Z said unless the family is happy it is kind of hard for any one person to be happy. No man is an island and all...
This story was not just a love story between the leads. Rather it is about family, values, standing up for each other told in a subtle way. Care which was hidden behind mountains of teasing and leg pulling. I love this Maan and Geet a lot.

Personal interest in that: I fell in love with the characterization of Maan in the show and wanted to one up that... just being a show-off..😆 and if Maan was getting better could not leave Geet behind...girl power and all...

Thanks for giving them to us Avi. Would love to read more of them and anything written by you🤗

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Avi where r yew ??? 😔

Finally commenting something, being so late has a reason, telling the reason wud make u laugh so, Backing off 😳

Loved the Epilogue wid heart n soul ❤️
Dr. Khurana was one of the best I've ever come across 👏
N thats defo not because U happens to b my behna 😃
Its true that yew were hiding ur writer self from us, but , all comes out at the end of the day 😊
Ok now coming to Dr. Sahab 😉

I wanna say sooo much, but no words 😕
Loved the family reunioun yew did, all was more than happie at the end 😉
Love this Maan n Geet loadz, their teasings, their beautiful relationship, their ease with each other , their unbounded love for each other, Selfless love ❤️
Caring for each other at the tym of need, providing wid the warmth of self at need 👏
Romance toh wat should I say 😳
N the comic flavour yew added just left me rofling 😆
Hormones 🤣 Multi Vitamins 🤣
Unki be-intiha mohabbat k lye kuch yaad aaraha hai...

Teri be-parda nigahon ka nishana ban k,
Khud se jhagra hun bht, tera deewana ban k☺️

This goes wid their extremely passionate love as well as the 'torture' Maan had to bear due to those pregnancy hormones of His Sherni wife 😆
Once again it was beyond the word beautiful when u described Maansi on Her father's chest ❤️
Mothers r the exceptions, but When a father is being caught wid the kind of scene yew drew, its lyk overwhelming 😳 👏
I felt lyk seeing it in front of me 👏
Then comes the mischievous side of Mr. n Mrs. Khurana 😆
In the above portion their romance left me breathless 😳
N then their 'comedy' ... Fits of laughter attacked me n I was laughing gazing at the screen , n no one had a slightest idea k in wat mushkil I was trapped 😆
This I can surely say that I've never come across an epilogue lyk yew gave us, Its truly a masterpiece Avi, thanks wud b very smaller word to say for giving us this 👏

em so looking forward for ur further stories 😃
N I guess the confidence yew needed is there now 😃
So Waiting till Sweety comes n then yew will complete another journey of Maaneet romance wid success 😃
Kudos Behna 🤗

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

I've rarely had to say "I have so much to say but I can't" but today, I certainly understand the sentiment. In a word, I am overwhelmed.

If that is how you feel about this then imagine what we feel reading you😆

I've tried to take this bit by bit, character by character and all the rest of it but every time I sit down to comment, nothing. I've been staring dumbly at this thread even while talking to you today. (Hence 😳). Okay, let me try once more to climb my self-made mountain (Hoslon se veer ho, sankaton mein dheer ho...) 😆

I think people are right when they say that there really is always something more. Taking two people in love who are left more or less on their own as the example, I think that even when they build their own world of happiness, there's still that small wish for their parents, for their family, especially if things broke off on bad terms. And so I'm very very happy to see the Khurana family resolve their problems. I liked seeing their different dimensions, Pammi especially. No one is without their redeeming qualities. I think the inherent need in everyone of us to see symmetry in things. Returning things as they were even when they never were the best of relations to begin with.

If Mariam is the reason I'm the train loony, you're the reason my fellow bus-goers shake their heads at me. Dr Khurana and his double dose of multivitamins killed me! Pregnancy hormones se pidhit patiyon 😆 Somehow, I don't believe he would have complained much at the time ;) I am so in love with this teasing, sexy and loving couple. Every action speaks of their love and also of their passion. I feel blessed to even read of such a couple. I loved them a lot too. There was a very small hint of that in the show when he kisses her fingers and he was playful with her. I think being playful with someone is just an indication of how at ease you feel with them and opening of trust. One thing I think everyone missed out was the first time Maan misses the date with her was because of a minister with bedroom problems... the impotency of the corrupt... But I think in that update the paratha making became the focus... 😳

Honestly Avi, this story has made a place in my heart. You are very talented and of course we want - no, demand - more of your brilliant tales! 😃 I only wish you had written this while the Geet Forum was in its heyday; everyone should have a chance to read this beautiful, hilarious story.

Oh, also, sorry about the whole emoticon mishap. You have nothing to fear; I have serious, bias-free doubts of whether I could dislike anything you write. And it was definitely not 'too much'. Instead, tasteful and perfect. Thank you Zarin. For writers like you to think it worthwhile I feel truly honored...🤗

when i saw threads name.. i felt you have written epilouge 2.!! and i didnot even knew about it.!!

Originally posted by: sweetkj

when i saw threads name.. i felt you have written epilouge 2.!! and i didnot even knew about it.!!

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