For Dr. Khurana, with love, MG SS, pg 177,178 - Page 122

Originally posted by: had2bu

And I don't even like papad!!!😆

Originally posted by: sweetkj

you should never do business of things you like..!! specically in case of eatables!! 😆

Originally posted by: had2bu

Point noted... C u are a better businesswoman than me..

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi dear...waiting 4 ur new ss! 😊

Originally posted by: Tyro

beautiful epilogue...loved all the teasing between Dr. & Mrs. Khurana...such a light hearted part ... enjoyed reading it Avi...thnx for PM ...

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Finally commenting something, being so late has a reason, telling the reason wud make u laugh so, Backing off 😳

Loved the Epilogue wid heart n soul ❤️
Dr. Khurana was one of the best I've ever come across 👏 I love him too. Haiyee mera doc
N thats defo not because U happens to b my behna 😃
Its true that yew were hiding ur writer self from us, but , all comes out at the end of the day 😊
Ok now coming to Dr. Sahab 😉

I wanna say sooo much, but no words 😕

Ye baat alag hai that everyone wants romance but jab batane ki baat aayi toh kahenge ke what can I say...😆

N the comic flavour yew added just left me rofling 😆 Hormones 🤣 Multi Vitamins 🤣 Sach mein mujhe likhti waqt itna hasi aa rahi thi that hubby was wondering ke tu ab sach mein pagal ho chuki hain
Unki be-intiha mohabbat k lye kuch yaad aaraha hai...

Teri be-parda nigahon ka nishana ban k,
Khud se jhagra hun bht, tera deewana ban k☺️

Bohut khoob Naureen. Your shaiyari has added such a beautiful flavor to the story ke main kya bataaon.. It would have felt much less if it was not there..🤗

This goes wid their extremely passionate love as well as the 'torture' Maan had to bear due to those pregnancy hormones of His Sherni wife 😆
Once again it was beyond the word beautiful when u described Maansi on Her father's chest ❤️
Mothers r the exceptions, but When a father is being caught wid the kind of scene yew drew, its lyk overwhelming 😳 👏
I felt lyk seeing it in front of me 👏 So sweet na. Maine bhi aise hi visualize kiya tha... mountain of muscle with pink baby cloud..
Then comes the mischievous side of Mr. n Mrs. Khurana 😆
In the above portion their romance left me breathless 😳
N then their 'comedy' ... Fits of laughter attacked me n I was laughing gazing at the screen , n no one had a slightest idea k in wat mushkil I was trapped 😆 Har waqt Maan kyun chase kare ya pyaar kare... Wife ko bhi karna chahiye na ... Aur waise bhi with a hubby like that I am sure a wife would not mind all her duties... 😆
This I can surely say that I've never come across an epilogue lyk yew gave us, Its truly a masterpiece Avi, thanks wud b very smaller word to say for giving us this 👏 Apni baatein kabhi yaad rakho... no thank you...

em so looking forward for ur further stories 😃
N I guess the confidence yew needed is there now 😃
So Waiting till Sweety comes n then yew will complete another journey of Maaneet romance wid success 😃
Kudos Behna 🤗

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Han to ye readers ka haq hai k wo writer se kahen k V dunno wat to say after such amaxing piece of writing 😳
Playing wid wordz is writers job not ours, to b precise its ur job not mine 😆
Mountain of muscle wid baby pink cloud
Hubby-Wifey k baare me kuch nhi kahungi, Zip 😉
Usey experience karne me abhi tym 😳 😆
Next one will come out even better, u bet 😉
Ham dono behen, toh automatically meri behen hui na urs 😉
🤗

Originally posted by: had2bu

Phir se Thanks bolungi aur phir daantogi

Haan but u and Sheen r together And I am so far from my sisters.

Lucky you.

Thanks for the support during the story.