You Were The One-Virika OS - Part 5 - Page 19

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Virika OS based on two song lines "Pehli nazar mein, Kaise jaado kar diya" from the song Pehli Nazar Mein. Thanks to -ayeshabfd1-for the title.



An ordinary day for Viren and Jeevika, they were both going about their daily life routines, Viren always stopped at a cafe to get a short break from work, being a lawyer had it's tiring ways especially because his family was always was proud of him for being such a successful one, he had never lost a case, at first he never wanted to be lawyer but after a few months into the profession he started to enjoy it, but he always had a passion for art, he loved to draw and no one is family knew this, all the men his family followed the pursuit of becoming a lawyer first it was his Dadaji, then his dad, then his chachu, then him, then it was Virat.

Viren drove to his favorite cafe and he parked his car, and got out, he stared at the scenery for a while he always the looking at his surrounding even it was a city's scenery, he painted and drew many things, things that he loved, he walked up to the cafe when someone came out the door and bumped into him, she was about to fall but he grabbed quickly, he kept looking into her eyes and she also kept looking into his eyes, they were both hypnotized by each other, their hearts were beating faster then usual, he realized that he was still holding her so that she didn't fall down, he brought her up and spoke.

Viren: I'm so sorry.
Jeevika: You shouldn't be sorry, I should be sorry, I bumped into you.
Viren: I should have been watching were I was walking.
Jeevika: I could have watched were I was walking as well.
Viren: Well it's settled, it's both of our faults.
Jeevika: I guess it is, and were both sorry.
Viren: That is true.
Jeevika: I must go now.

He saw that her earring had fallen off, he picked up and said "Wait your earring." When he looked up again, he had realized that she had left. He put the earring in his pocket and went inside the cafe and ordered and then head back to work, after he had finished he went home and went straight home and took out some paper and drew the earring girl he called her that as he didn't get her name, he looked at his drawing and said "When I first saw you, you hypnotized me and I fell in love with you." He put the earring and the picture into his drawer and went about the rest of his daily routine.

The next day, Viren went to the cafe in order to see if he could find his earring girl, but she didn't show up, he went back and drew her again, he went back the next day but he still earring girl didn't show up and he would go back home and draw her just to stay close to her, every single day he would go to the cafe and when he didn't see his earring girl then he would always come back home and draw her, this become part of his daily routine, a whole year passed but he didn't give up before then but he finally gave up on earring girl and realized that he would never see her again and said in the spot that he had met her in "When I first met, you hypnotized me and I fell in love with you." Viren kept all of his drawing of earring girl and her earring, even though he had given up on her, he didn't want to forget her ever.

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Part 2 - Page 5
Part 3 - Page 10
Part 4 - Page 15
Part 5 - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
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You updated so fast! This is just amazing! Love how you used the earring in the story, really loved the love at first sight part! You showed the emotions perfectly! And the best part is the way you ended it! Please continue, atleast another part. Thanks,, Ayesha 👏😉

Edited by ayeshabfd1 - 12 years ago
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superb one dear...bt it should be a ss/ff ...i really want u 2 continue this story
Edited by amritaluvskryan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finished writing my OS on Virika.😊
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Originally posted by: ayeshabfd1

You updated so fast! This is just amazing! Love how you used the earring in the story, really loved the love at first sight part! You showed the emotions perfectly! And the best part is the way you ended it! Please continue, atleast another part. Thanks,, Ayesha 👏😉



Thanks, I'm glad you like, I'll see what response I get from other people and if they want another part or not. 😊
Edited by HappyDayDasies - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: HappyDayDasies



Thanks, I'm glad you like, I'll see what response I get from other people and if they want another part or not. 😊

Np, & im sure people will love dw :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayeshabfd1

Np, & im sure people will love dw :)



I hope they do.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: amritaluvskryan

superb one dear...bt it should be a ss/ff ...i really want u 2 continue this story


Thanks, I'll take that into mind and see the responses from other people. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb yaar
loved it...nicely written
plz continue it
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Originally posted by: vishwa94

superb yaar

loved it...nicely written
plz continue it


In glad you like it, waiting for a few more responses. 😊

Thank you 😊
Edited by HappyDayDasies - 12 years ago

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