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dlip

@dlip

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: adi2512

Dixie.,

Glad u liked it...though not sugar...😆😆😆

Yes., I 've always imagined Young Shiv that way...
I personally feel., one need not always face ordeals when young to become a refined human being...it
depends on the inherent zest., and attitude they develop through their younger days...
That's how., Shiv is a wonderful man that he is now...😳

Like the story. But liked more your thought process behind it. Great!

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Uma

@adi2512

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: melliflous
Uma 🤗

This was fantastic. So inspiring ... So deep! The pond scene was something different... Something unusual about it... Something too deep. This was splendid writing.. Well, after a horrid day if I get to read this at the end then it just me feel hopeful and good again!! Thank u!

Melli.,

Glad U liked it..

Yes., The pond scene is indeed quite unusual...it has a very deep meaning to it...as far as I have perceived it...

Do see my take on this...on my reply to @umam here...😃

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Uma

@adi2512

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Malika
Uma - Its so very insightful and pure - Loved the way you described AnSH's current state without even mentioning their names once.Its not a scenario bit the cvs can surely take a deeper insight into the story from this piece...its beautifully written.

Thank U Malika.,

Feels good to see words of appreciation from a great story writer like U...😃

Edited by adi2512 - 13 years ago

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Nandita / Tina

@5cents

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

JUST ONE WORD...SUPERB!!! Such deep thoughts & such translucent language 👏

They FIGHT…..together…as ONE…

They fight…for what SHOULD be theirs….a world of their own…full of Love ., Order and Symmetry.

You know You & I always agree on this that they are ONE. And we are positive the fight will be theirs. Their love will get perfected in PAIN😳. With their unconditional love & support for one another they'll create the symmetry & order😳

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Myraa Khan

@QuagMyred

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

OMG!!!
UMA!!!

Only you can churn out such pieces of brilliance!!!

Awesome!!!

Clear and Simple!!👏

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Uma

@adi2512

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: QuagMyred
OMG!!!
UMA!!!

Only you can churn out such pieces of brilliance!!!
Awesome!!!

Clear and Simple!!👏

Thank you ...Myra.,😃

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shazia

@tv_princess

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

that was indeed a beautiful n deep description..truly awsum..!!👏

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Lumos

@Lumos

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Excellent writing and thoughtfullness! 👏

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Pragya

@Siya_

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Same apology as always: old OS, but hadn't seen it, it is lovely, and so I had to comment. 😛

This is gorgeous. I actually like this even better than the AT OS, because it's more poignant, and somehow more powerful. It feels like the written essence of a snapshot of these two in their moment at the lake, except that the snapshot you've taken presents a much more serious, grave and more sensible version than the CV's did. It suggests black and white and silhouettes to me, and I love it.

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Uma

@adi2512

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Shivandi
Same apology as always: old OS, but hadn't seen it, it is lovely, and so I had to comment. 😛

This is gorgeous. I actually like this even better than the AT OS, because it's more poignant, and somehow more powerful. It feels like the written essence of a snapshot of these two in their moment at the lake, except that the snapshot you've taken presents a much more serious, grave and more sensible version than the CV's did. It suggests black and white and silhouettes to me, and I love it.

@Shivandi.,

You are making me nostalgic., getting all these oldies of mine., infront of me once again...and am' loving it..😳

Thank You for same., and am' glad you liked this as much as you did...😃

Well., actually there was a hidden reason., why I wrote that for AT 100.

for AT 50., I have written one., from Shiv's POV on Anandi and I just wanted to keep on that continuity by writing one from A's POV on S...for AT 100...😆

P.S : Just a Small Suggestion if it will be of any help...as I do not know., how you are tracking all of our old stories...

Its actually very easy...you refer to first page of any AT...and you will find a link - Dixie's master thread of AnSh OS's / SS's...where in most of the stories from all Anshians are updated...😊

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